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A Black Cat's Magic

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作者: CuriousGirlJNW

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I kept as quiet as possible, trying to maintain a steady heart rate in the hopes that whoever it was wouldn't see me. But it was too late... The eyes appeared to be moving closer towards me as the moonlight beamed down, revealing what it was...

What could it be??.. We just have to wait and see... It's a story filled with mystery.

вяιεғ ∂εscяιρтιση σғ тнε мαιη cнαяαcтεя...

Alice Primrose was a high school student who was about to graduate. She had just turned 18 and lived on her own so... obviously she had a part time job. She worked as a waitress after school at Cherry's Diner... where they served the city's best cherry pies.

But after walking down an alley known to be deserted because of superstitions, she finds that strange things starts to happen to her when she brings something unusually fond of her home.

This book is a crack/original story.

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CuriousGirlJNW

Copyright All Rights Reserved. I do not allow plagiarism. Please come up with your own story if you are an author. I am 110% against copying. So please do not copy my work. All the characters, places, storyline were created by me through the things that I was inspired by.

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{Genre: Paranormal Fantasy Romance}

Author's Note

Beyond the blurb this book contains sarcasm, humour, a bit of magic and a dash of romance but we'll save the romance for later.
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ᴘʀᴏᴏғʀᴇᴀᴅ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴅɪᴛᴇᴅ ʙʏ ᴍᴇ. ᴘʟᴇᴀsᴇ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍ ᴍᴇ ɪғ ᴛʜᴇʀᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀɴʏ ᴍɪsᴛᴀᴋᴇs. ɪ ᴡɪʟʟ ғɪx ᴛʜᴇᴍ ɪғ ɪ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ɴᴏᴛ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ.

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Sigheti

A lovely story with a promising plot. We are presented with an interesting protagonist, who is beautifully portrayed as a young but strong woman with a side of youthful naivety. This story certainly has potential, as it is both relaxing and entertaining to read. If I may give you some tips in order to help you? I apologise if you find them uncalled for. There is no need to add comments on the end of your chapters - ‘to be continued’ or ‘we shall see next chapter’ -, it disturbs the suspense a bit... Another tip I hope to give you is to add less ‘she said’ or ‘he added’ or other variations in your dialogue. It’s unnecessary and tiring to your reader. These, of course, are all simply some small style changes that don’t deserve to called ‘real errors’. I hope you have a lot of fun continuing your work, you have talent, keep going! A must-read for fans of the mystery and fantasy genre.

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