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definitely one of the best novel I have read in adult or ecchi genre and how the relationship between them develop. but how regrettable the author didn't create the whole series of it. but if I have to say the ending is really rushed and didn't make sense to me as a whole. but thats his choice he could have become a god.
Hello guys ,check out my newest novel "The Donghon Sect" ,if you like it don't forget to gave a nice comment. seeya
One of the best harem story with satisfying chemestry between characters. It also has a unique cultivation system for you to enjoy, so go ahead.
One of the best novels out there. Only the ending was rushed except that everything is very good. The story Harem Romance Fights Army
The mc of this book is one of my favorite mc’s he is cunning, manipulative and funny.The characters too are likeable The book self is most of the times filed with comedy&romance though its a harem it is by far one of the beter ones. I would recommend this to everyone to read it. I give it a 9/10🙌
Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this. Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this. Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this. Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
loved this crazy power fantasy lol. the characters were enjoyable and the progression from zero to God had all the hallmarks of a Dungeons and Dragons campaign. I had a lot of fun reading it.
been thinking of rereading all works by this author. this is definitely one of his best and maybe my own personal favorite due to the main character abilities and relationship to his other novel characters. recommend for beginners and veterans alike.
Not going to lie: not the best story I read but not even close to the worst. The story has bits that are funny and bits where you'll think "wow never saw that coming, oh wait I did.". One of the complaints that most have is it has 2, "oh no, something happened and I lost control and raped a women moments". some people can move past that kind of thing and some can't so be warned.
The concept is interesting but I suggest that; this story needs to proofread it's kinda hurt to the brain that some extra words are not needed in their sentences or incomplete sentences to read
So, another blatant theft from WW. I should not be surprised since Quidian is a Tencent company. I'm old enough to remember when "Face" still mattered in chinese culture, but now? It's like watching low ranking thugs fighting over street corners. I'm disappointed
A good story with good characters. there were times it was slow but overall it developed well. I was surprised at times that the MC seeming forgot the skills and powers he had demonstrated previously but it didn't take away from the final result.
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This novel has probably the worst synopsis I’ve ever read, and I’ve read a lot of them. Please change it!
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It doesnt get truly interesting till chapter 112. but during those 112 chapters they are character an world building. an it all comes together almodt entirely too quick. Very good read, took 2 weeks. Worked 12 hr days an read inbetween even on lunch. Some minor things youll see when youve read alot. But overall a 5 star from me. Highly suggest those that love fantasy worlds. An they take the time to set it up properly. Read all the free chapters, figure it out for yourself. It was some heart wrench, Alot of cunning rougish hero moments. But my fav was the old men Star forest.
this is the novel that got me started on reading these mind of books online. would highly recommend to fans of anime and manga of the shonen variety.
Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Heavenly Jewel Change ”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
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I did not really like how it ended but everything else was just right. If only the ending was better than it would have made for a better viewer outcome.
Well, I’m glad that’s over. This particular genre usually has terrible or unsatisfactory endings so no surprise there. Although the story wasn’t terrible, it was by no means all that good either. If this story was longer I probably wouldn’t have even forced myself to read until the end. There definitely were moments that shined, but overall things fell short. Too many plot holes, less than stellar MC, forced “romance”/harem, translation quality fell short as well.
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There is nothing really much to say. This book suffers from all of the same problems that plagues just about every single cultivation novel on here. Spends most of the time riding around on super thick plot armor, describes the main character as someone “resolute” but literally in the later chapters he ends up fighting. Woman who wanted to threaten him to take a house him and bing’er were looking at. She tries to kill him and he manages to beat her down. Guess what happens next> she ties IMMEDIATLY after getting beat. Something about pride i guess. Literally if it were ot from his plot armor he should have died. THEN later she tries to blackmail him and the author talks about some Fake “Killing intent” in his eyes that literally vanishes when he touches her boob. Then suddenly he doesn’t want ot kill her anymore. Then after all of that and the fact that she ONCE AGAN WANTED TO KILL HIM AND THREATEN HIM, but this time with her father, he instalty becomes friendly with her the next day. There is 0 character growth and literally anytim you think he has grown mature, the author dashes your hope by pushing it off as some change associated with the technique, that then seems to vanish within 10 chapters. And you can bet that if there is a female character introduced, he wont kill her.He’ll probaly touch her boob, or see her drop a tear and then he will completely forget what the woman did. His whole family could get murdered by a woman, and the moment he touches her body or Sees her appearnce for that matter, he will instantly not want to kill her.
I still have a out 80 chapters left to read, but I can tell you that so far this book was written with love and care. It is a great work that does have surprises that you wouldn't expect. The translations may not be 100% on point and at one point some of the names of stuff get changed so it takes a moment to realize what they are talking about, but its more of a minor detail, easily overlooked. I just wanted to say overall amazing book that one should give a read. Finally to the author and translator if you read this, thank you for all the hardwork truly appreciate it and love the book that you brought to me.
The main character brutally r*pes the first love interest and then runs away. Enough said
definitely one of the best novel I have read in adult or ecchi genre and how the relationship between them develop. but how regrettable the author didn't create the whole series of it. but if I have to say the ending is really rushed and didn't make sense to me as a whole. but thats his choice he could have become a god.
Hello guys ,check out my newest novel "The Donghon Sect" ,if you like it don't forget to gave a nice comment. seeya
One of the best harem story with satisfying chemestry between characters. It also has a unique cultivation system for you to enjoy, so go ahead.
One of the best novels out there. Only the ending was rushed except that everything is very good. The story Harem Romance Fights Army
The mc of this book is one of my favorite mc’s he is cunning, manipulative and funny.The characters too are likeable The book self is most of the times filed with comedy&romance though its a harem it is by far one of the beter ones. I would recommend this to everyone to read it. I give it a 9/10🙌
Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this. Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this. Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this. Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
loved this crazy power fantasy lol. the characters were enjoyable and the progression from zero to God had all the hallmarks of a Dungeons and Dragons campaign. I had a lot of fun reading it.
been thinking of rereading all works by this author. this is definitely one of his best and maybe my own personal favorite due to the main character abilities and relationship to his other novel characters. recommend for beginners and veterans alike.
Not going to lie: not the best story I read but not even close to the worst. The story has bits that are funny and bits where you'll think "wow never saw that coming, oh wait I did.". One of the complaints that most have is it has 2, "oh no, something happened and I lost control and raped a women moments". some people can move past that kind of thing and some can't so be warned.
The concept is interesting but I suggest that; this story needs to proofread it's kinda hurt to the brain that some extra words are not needed in their sentences or incomplete sentences to read
So, another blatant theft from WW. I should not be surprised since Quidian is a Tencent company. I'm old enough to remember when "Face" still mattered in chinese culture, but now? It's like watching low ranking thugs fighting over street corners. I'm disappointed
A good story with good characters. there were times it was slow but overall it developed well. I was surprised at times that the MC seeming forgot the skills and powers he had demonstrated previously but it didn't take away from the final result.
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This novel has probably the worst synopsis I’ve ever read, and I’ve read a lot of them. Please change it!
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It doesnt get truly interesting till chapter 112. but during those 112 chapters they are character an world building. an it all comes together almodt entirely too quick. Very good read, took 2 weeks. Worked 12 hr days an read inbetween even on lunch. Some minor things youll see when youve read alot. But overall a 5 star from me. Highly suggest those that love fantasy worlds. An they take the time to set it up properly. Read all the free chapters, figure it out for yourself. It was some heart wrench, Alot of cunning rougish hero moments. But my fav was the old men Star forest.
this is the novel that got me started on reading these mind of books online. would highly recommend to fans of anime and manga of the shonen variety.
Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Heavenly Jewel Change ”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
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I did not really like how it ended but everything else was just right. If only the ending was better than it would have made for a better viewer outcome.
Well, I’m glad that’s over. This particular genre usually has terrible or unsatisfactory endings so no surprise there. Although the story wasn’t terrible, it was by no means all that good either. If this story was longer I probably wouldn’t have even forced myself to read until the end. There definitely were moments that shined, but overall things fell short. Too many plot holes, less than stellar MC, forced “romance”/harem, translation quality fell short as well.
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There is nothing really much to say. This book suffers from all of the same problems that plagues just about every single cultivation novel on here. Spends most of the time riding around on super thick plot armor, describes the main character as someone “resolute” but literally in the later chapters he ends up fighting. Woman who wanted to threaten him to take a house him and bing’er were looking at. She tries to kill him and he manages to beat her down. Guess what happens next> she ties IMMEDIATLY after getting beat. Something about pride i guess. Literally if it were ot from his plot armor he should have died. THEN later she tries to blackmail him and the author talks about some Fake “Killing intent” in his eyes that literally vanishes when he touches her boob. Then suddenly he doesn’t want ot kill her anymore. Then after all of that and the fact that she ONCE AGAN WANTED TO KILL HIM AND THREATEN HIM, but this time with her father, he instalty becomes friendly with her the next day. There is 0 character growth and literally anytim you think he has grown mature, the author dashes your hope by pushing it off as some change associated with the technique, that then seems to vanish within 10 chapters. And you can bet that if there is a female character introduced, he wont kill her.He’ll probaly touch her boob, or see her drop a tear and then he will completely forget what the woman did. His whole family could get murdered by a woman, and the moment he touches her body or Sees her appearnce for that matter, he will instantly not want to kill her.
I still have a out 80 chapters left to read, but I can tell you that so far this book was written with love and care. It is a great work that does have surprises that you wouldn't expect. The translations may not be 100% on point and at one point some of the names of stuff get changed so it takes a moment to realize what they are talking about, but its more of a minor detail, easily overlooked. I just wanted to say overall amazing book that one should give a read. Finally to the author and translator if you read this, thank you for all the hardwork truly appreciate it and love the book that you brought to me.
The main character brutally r*pes the first love interest and then runs away. Enough said