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I have been following it on patreon till now will probably stay there but I came over here to leave a review. The start of this story till now has been pretty great and very engaging I am very curious how this will proceed and the author also seems pretty passionate about this story.
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love it so far and hope to see more of it but I'm curious with the sacred gears she gets is she able to unlock balance breaker in all of them if so i would recommend not giving her balance breaker cuz her powers should have some draw backs but u don't have to listen to me just write what you want and I'm gonna love it anyway
Если бы автор не менял пол персонажей, было бы нормально, но для 2025 года, это уже отвратительно. Менять лор можно и другими способами, а не только с помощью гендерной интриги каноных персонажей.
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I have been following it on patreon till now will probably stay there but I came over here to leave a review. The start of this story till now has been pretty great and very engaging I am very curious how this will proceed and the author also seems pretty passionate about this story.
Genial, muy buena. Por favor sigue escribiendo esta maravillosa historia Mfmrjrvfkkd rbrkdkebfjfirfkekrbbrbrnrmfmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmdiirbrnrnfkgkgkmgmggnrkrorkrnkttn
ネタバレを明かす love it so far and hope to see more of it but I'm curious with the sacred gears she gets is she able to unlock balance breaker in all of them if so i would recommend not giving her balance breaker cuz her powers should have some draw backs but u don't have to listen to me just write what you want and I'm gonna love it anyway
Если бы автор не менял пол персонажей, было бы нормально, но для 2025 года, это уже отвратительно. Менять лор можно и другими способами, а не только с помощью гендерной интриги каноных персонажей.
Cliche author 5 star review is here! Feel free to leave your own review! Ah, and here’s a cookie.
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