Reborn as Petunia Evans with a System

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SeventhEvil

why delete the work author? it was getting good there. is it going to rewrite or scrapped for good. hp fics during the marauders era is very rare and not all of them are good so i hope u can rewrite!

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Samuel812753

love the storyline and the connection she has with Snape he deserves happiness. love how she's so connected to her friends and family. can't wait to see how this story continues. can't wait for more chapters your doing am awesome and wonderful job

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pacw64000

Magnificent, this Fanfic really demonstrate a good story, tough somewhat fast-paced, its one of the best, still in its early stages I got hooked in to this story. (Even though I always have the feeling that something is going to happen.)

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ZoroTraineeWriter

Im just enjoying this fiction, didnt expect the author would delete the entire fiction because of my comment

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NovelLoversHeaven1

if you were reincarnated, why the FUCK would you care about keeping the original timeline. and even if you did, it would not matter as you existing will inevitably create butterfly effects. E.g even if harry potters parents still get together and have a kid it is an almost 0% chance in it being harry because of the RANDOM mix of genes they inherit from the parents.

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XAZVAPB0OTH

acho que autora quer fazer um triângulo amoroso, porque ela insiste em querer colocar o Sirius como amante, pra mim parece que a protagonista esta traindo o snape

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ZoroTraineeWriter

Earlier I wanted to give 5 stars because trying new genre which is Petunia as a wizard, but now I give 4.2 stars because im a bit disappointed. The author had mentioned he will rewrite the story again because it was a mess As a fan of books, I have finished book 1 until 7. Not once but multiple times until I got tired. So there is a lot of knowledge of Harry potter in my brain. In my novel, I have always try to make sure the story didn't steer far from the info cannon. For example in a book they didn't have unsupported flying magic, but in a movie it was used widely. But here, I don't think the author is a book fan, instead he/she are a movie fan. That is why the info are sometimes steer from cannon. The story is interesting but predictable, cliche plot where Lily evans got jealous instaed. Im not a fan of the lily become evil, however considering this is new type of book. I will still rated it 4.2 (that 0.8 star because the new writing didn't have any addition, it was same)