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Great premise and I think that so far it is done really well there is still a few thing that could be improved but I hope that this fic will continue
good premise, and characters feel in character. but I feel that the grammar holds this story back. I recommend going back through pervious chapters and fixing grammar using an outside source if English is not your first language like grammaly or quillbot.
I really like the story so far and the fight scene in which I think it is very fluid and fun so I would say this is a great fanfic and I'm very curious how this will go My grammar might be bad though..
Great premise and I think that so far it is done really well there is still a few thing that could be improved but I hope that this fic will continue
good premise, and characters feel in character. but I feel that the grammar holds this story back. I recommend going back through pervious chapters and fixing grammar using an outside source if English is not your first language like grammaly or quillbot.
I really like the story so far and the fight scene in which I think it is very fluid and fun so I would say this is a great fanfic and I'm very curious how this will go My grammar might be bad though..