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An excellent unknown work. Very well written and very engaging (I read it in one day until chapter 129). It's totally worth reading, even if you don't know anything about the original story from which this fan-fic was derived, like I do.
shameless author review. I will post 10+ chapter every day. Hope you like and enjoy this fanfiction. Do comment here as well as that I can continue to improve this fanfiction.
another trash i always wonder why is almost all fanfic of swallowed star about luo feng like you we always see mc trying to please luo feng why not just make luo feng the mc i am not trying to say they should be enemy all i am trying to say is that mc should mind his business luo feng do not need a baby sitter if he as you for help and you can do it help if not just rest not your business.
An excellent unknown work. Very well written and very engaging (I read it in one day until chapter 129). It's totally worth reading, even if you don't know anything about the original story from which this fan-fic was derived, like I do.
shameless author review. I will post 10+ chapter every day. Hope you like and enjoy this fanfiction. Do comment here as well as that I can continue to improve this fanfiction.
another trash i always wonder why is almost all fanfic of swallowed star about luo feng like you we always see mc trying to please luo feng why not just make luo feng the mc i am not trying to say they should be enemy all i am trying to say is that mc should mind his business luo feng do not need a baby sitter if he as you for help and you can do it help if not just rest not your business.