Reviews of Football System: Penalty Zone Hero by RapidFan - Webnovel

12レビュー

4.97

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Bor902

I quite like this story already actually. The first chapters didn't start us off as already in a large club and suddenly getting a system or something, which I appreciate. I get the feeling the main character won't be just a copy paste of superstar by 19 like in most football novels

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RapidFan

Shameless self-plug, I'm translating this cuz I think the story is awesome. That's basically it. Read the whole thing, great early game, great mid game, great late game

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poopdaddy

MC has a really good relationship with his father, which is sort of cute and made me feel something. That's why it merits a review, getting actual emotions here is a bit tough. Also, the translation is really good, I didn't even notice any grammar mistakes

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fdsgfdsdrfer

Pretty good writing, the character is a bit flat at the moment and the story development is good. I think the beginining was a bit drawn out, but you get the reward pretty soon. I guess its a pacing issue? But it seems to stop being an issue later on. I'll see

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Laurenlauren

Engaging story but also realistic. As a sport enthusiastic it is my fav story so far.

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David890

I like this story so much it is on my must read list. The translating quality it is the best as well.

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Chandlerr

The translation it is as good as the story itself. Keep the good work and consistent updates

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Alexio5

This is one of the few stories that are translated and that I really like. Looking forward for new chapters to see how the story it will unfold.

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BenjiiiO

I would like actually to read more chapters from this story. Like the story and it shows very well how sometimes it can get tricky to navigate in career and life.

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Joneszone

This football story is about the protagonist’s fight for a second chance at his career. After facing setbacks and challenges, he’s determined to prove himself on the field. He works through the struggles of rebuilding his path to success. It’s a powerful tale of redemption, hard work, and the relentless pursuit of a dream, perfect for fans of sports stories about second chances and overcoming obstacles.

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XPGrinder

Chen Yingxiong’s rise from exile to Russian football stardom is a gripping tale of resilience. With supernatural abilities and unwavering determination, he overcomes adversity, aiming for global greatness while adapting to Zenit’s icy, challenging environment.

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ChillHenry

Really great story. The excitement and challenges that a player face during all the journey makes it inspiring to read. It’s very well written. Easy to read and fun for anyone who plays or likes football or just a good story.

11d
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Bor902

I quite like this story already actually. The first chapters didn't start us off as already in a large club and suddenly getting a system or something, which I appreciate. I get the feeling the main character won't be just a copy paste of superstar by 19 like in most football novels

12d
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RapidFan

Shameless self-plug, I'm translating this cuz I think the story is awesome. That's basically it. Read the whole thing, great early game, great mid game, great late game

11d
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poopdaddy

MC has a really good relationship with his father, which is sort of cute and made me feel something. That's why it merits a review, getting actual emotions here is a bit tough. Also, the translation is really good, I didn't even notice any grammar mistakes

11d
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fdsgfdsdrfer

Pretty good writing, the character is a bit flat at the moment and the story development is good. I think the beginining was a bit drawn out, but you get the reward pretty soon. I guess its a pacing issue? But it seems to stop being an issue later on. I'll see

18h
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Laurenlauren

Engaging story but also realistic. As a sport enthusiastic it is my fav story so far.

2d
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David890

I like this story so much it is on my must read list. The translating quality it is the best as well.

2d
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Chandlerr

The translation it is as good as the story itself. Keep the good work and consistent updates

4d
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Alexio5

This is one of the few stories that are translated and that I really like. Looking forward for new chapters to see how the story it will unfold.

4d
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BenjiiiO

I would like actually to read more chapters from this story. Like the story and it shows very well how sometimes it can get tricky to navigate in career and life.

4d
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Joneszone

This football story is about the protagonist’s fight for a second chance at his career. After facing setbacks and challenges, he’s determined to prove himself on the field. He works through the struggles of rebuilding his path to success. It’s a powerful tale of redemption, hard work, and the relentless pursuit of a dream, perfect for fans of sports stories about second chances and overcoming obstacles.

11d
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XPGrinder

Chen Yingxiong’s rise from exile to Russian football stardom is a gripping tale of resilience. With supernatural abilities and unwavering determination, he overcomes adversity, aiming for global greatness while adapting to Zenit’s icy, challenging environment.

11d
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ChillHenry

Really great story. The excitement and challenges that a player face during all the journey makes it inspiring to read. It’s very well written. Easy to read and fun for anyone who plays or likes football or just a good story.

11d
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