Team Rocket’s Second-in-Command!

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Zaelum

Interesting, but still I need to give you an advice, change the MC's name. No one likes chinese names here, and when they see them they don't read them, that's the main reason your fics don't do well. A lot of them deserve so much love! I doesn't even take time from you, just add "Change 'name' into 'name'' and that would be all. If you do that, it will change how readers see you, from just a MTL to something better. Anyway I hope the best for you!

LV 11

Dis77

Great fanfic with the right amount of showing off. Characters can be a bit plain. He seems to be heading towards a harem route that i hope to see more from other regions.

LV 4

Sohal_Ahmed_2001

Even the title says ”second in command”.... Is he going to be a grunt for team rocket the whole story? i hope not....

LV 3

Xilt

this was good fic with good translation. op mc but still make sense in pokemon world and his character was much to my liking

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reva20p4

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Creus_Sun

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LV 14

DeatHVorTeX

Thanks for the great translation, I only wish the character name was changed, but nevertheless.

LV 4

Glebby_Boi

Yet another BANGER by the author!! I’ll keep it short- this novel is goooooood! From the MC to the storyline, the author picked a solid story. The quality of the translation is consistently great and I’m looking forward to the new chapters))

LV 4

Fanciago

Nice work on the translation, although the story is a bit stale, good job regardless

Tá muito bom, de verdade é tô adorando seu trabalho, assim como um cara disse tem muita gente que não gosta de nome chinês mais se vc quiser deixar como tá e com vc, eu espero que vc continue essa história pois ela está incrível