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ah wait. Is this Rise of the dark Pokemon? I already survived it's MTL till 1300 chapter ages ago💀. If you manage to translate it all then i will pick it up again. Good luck
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It’s an excellent read with good quality and great story telling. It’s slow paced but builds the story and action up well. The only plot hole i wonder about is why if he is being taken as a disciple by an advanced breeder would team rocket send him back to the trial island. It makes no sense that the executives wouldn’t want him to stay as a spy in the league under a strong master. Overall though a good read so far.
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thank god that you picked it up. i was so frustrated that it got dropped again that i was very very close to just translate it myself lol
A very good pokemon novel. I like all MC pokemon. Though it is situated far behind the canon, but is very interesting to read. Must read for all pokemon fans. I hope the author continues to write these one and include gigantamax,etc in the novel.
Really enjoying this story so far. But one thing that could probably be changed is Pokémon sounds. Instead of making up random sounds just have the Pokémon say it's name. This will make it less weird(like slowpoke saying "yadon", i have no fucking clue what that's supposed to sounds like while having it say "slowww" would help more) plus it helps identify which Pokémon is making the sound(a few chapters back there were a few raticate that just kept saying "grunt grunt grunt" which is both confusing and just plain awkward). Atleast i personally believe this was the reason they made Pokémon in the anime say their name, plus it's better than constant grunts and growls in a kids show.
absolute beauty of a pokemon fanfic, good translation,props to you author
CRONICAS DE LA LIBERTAD a sido una historia con gran desarrollo de la historio como los personaje, Donde el oscuridad y misterio deja un sentimiento profundidad al lector. me encanto el fanfic y sobre todo como muestran un mundo tan realista de pokemon
I am not a fan of killing Pokemons for no apparent reason. Mc is also too edgy and acts like a psychopath from time to time which is too dark for my taste. But if you ignore the above mentioned cons then it's a pretty decent fic. Pokemon interaction felt natural and the pace is slow but enjoyable. You will definitely like the growth of mc and his Pokemons.
The novel is well written and has a good storyline. Several pokemon ffs that involve team rocket delve into the dark aspects of team rocket and other organizations, but this is one of the more well written ones. The mc isn’t broken right out of the gate and has a system and has to work hard to produce results. The only plot hole i can think of would be the making of pokeblocks, but it is explained that the system helps him. The story moves at a pretty slow pace, but the build up is good so far and he doesn’t just time skip his early stages phase of training. Would recommend.
anyone has the raw ???------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------anyone has the raw ???anyone has the raw ???anyone has the raw ???
after 254 chapters he is still a team rocket grunt by chapter 1000 he will barely be a captain let alone a quasi elite which means it will take like 3 years until progress occurs no offense author its just wayyyy tooooo slowwwwwwwwww
A good Fic, so far I like it. The translation is also quite good. And the update is fast.
itss reeeeaaaaaallllyyyy ggooooood! thank you for translating this story, I really depend on people like you. you do an awesome job :)!
It's boring.. It's not bad overall but I just found the plot predictable and lackluster.. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate
The best Pokémon fanfic I’ve read in a while I hope they don’t abandon the story like jeezu did. ………….. ……………………… …………….,,.,…………. …………. ……………………………….. ………………
the translator put the pokemons that mc will have in a special chapter. note 5 for this [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
ah wait. Is this Rise of the dark Pokemon? I already survived it's MTL till 1300 chapter ages ago💀. If you manage to translate it all then i will pick it up again. Good luck
More.............................................. More.............................................. More..............................................
It’s an excellent read with good quality and great story telling. It’s slow paced but builds the story and action up well. The only plot hole i wonder about is why if he is being taken as a disciple by an advanced breeder would team rocket send him back to the trial island. It makes no sense that the executives wouldn’t want him to stay as a spy in the league under a strong master. Overall though a good read so far.
ネタバレを明かす thank god that you picked it up. i was so frustrated that it got dropped again that i was very very close to just translate it myself lol
A very good pokemon novel. I like all MC pokemon. Though it is situated far behind the canon, but is very interesting to read. Must read for all pokemon fans. I hope the author continues to write these one and include gigantamax,etc in the novel.
Really enjoying this story so far. But one thing that could probably be changed is Pokémon sounds. Instead of making up random sounds just have the Pokémon say it's name. This will make it less weird(like slowpoke saying "yadon", i have no fucking clue what that's supposed to sounds like while having it say "slowww" would help more) plus it helps identify which Pokémon is making the sound(a few chapters back there were a few raticate that just kept saying "grunt grunt grunt" which is both confusing and just plain awkward). Atleast i personally believe this was the reason they made Pokémon in the anime say their name, plus it's better than constant grunts and growls in a kids show.
absolute beauty of a pokemon fanfic, good translation,props to you author
CRONICAS DE LA LIBERTAD a sido una historia con gran desarrollo de la historio como los personaje, Donde el oscuridad y misterio deja un sentimiento profundidad al lector. me encanto el fanfic y sobre todo como muestran un mundo tan realista de pokemon
I am not a fan of killing Pokemons for no apparent reason. Mc is also too edgy and acts like a psychopath from time to time which is too dark for my taste. But if you ignore the above mentioned cons then it's a pretty decent fic. Pokemon interaction felt natural and the pace is slow but enjoyable. You will definitely like the growth of mc and his Pokemons.
The novel is well written and has a good storyline. Several pokemon ffs that involve team rocket delve into the dark aspects of team rocket and other organizations, but this is one of the more well written ones. The mc isn’t broken right out of the gate and has a system and has to work hard to produce results. The only plot hole i can think of would be the making of pokeblocks, but it is explained that the system helps him. The story moves at a pretty slow pace, but the build up is good so far and he doesn’t just time skip his early stages phase of training. Would recommend.
anyone has the raw ???------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------anyone has the raw ???anyone has the raw ???anyone has the raw ???
after 254 chapters he is still a team rocket grunt by chapter 1000 he will barely be a captain let alone a quasi elite which means it will take like 3 years until progress occurs no offense author its just wayyyy tooooo slowwwwwwwwww
A good Fic, so far I like it. The translation is also quite good. And the update is fast.
itss reeeeaaaaaallllyyyy ggooooood! thank you for translating this story, I really depend on people like you. you do an awesome job :)!
It's boring.. It's not bad overall but I just found the plot predictable and lackluster.. Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate
The best Pokémon fanfic I’ve read in a while I hope they don’t abandon the story like jeezu did. ………….. ……………………… …………….,,.,…………. …………. ……………………………….. ………………
the translator put the pokemons that mc will have in a special chapter. note 5 for this [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]