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The Greatest Ruler Starts from Douluo

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作者: Boring_World

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Bam!
"Impossible! How could my Xiaogang student lose?"

On the other side, a girl of Tang San's age was seen restraining him. His Eight Spider Lances were shattering under her relentless attacks. From the spectator area, the teacher observed, muttering,
"Hm, she didn’t defeat him in one minute. It seems I’ll need to increase their target time."

Hearing their teacher’s words, the other students whispered quietly, but continued cheering her on.

“Now that I’m here, who cares about Master or Tang San? The rules will be mine.”

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This is the story of the reincarnated protagonist, reborn to claim all the opportunities and treasures that belonged to others.

Kids flock to the MC, while men steal his opportunities and the women in his life.

And , this is not a Translation but original fanfic

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Valoup

I like it. Give it a try.

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Bierbart

first of good job for the story idea and the well written story grammar wise and more. it has a rather new/unique storyline with a system and is well written. now to the negativ points... there are some rather large jumps in the story with glossing over important atory points (dugu bo e.g.) unlikable mc... he is rather simly and a low level doormat. wqy too altruistic and mentally challenged too. unrealisticly slow progress... we have a timeskip of 6 years with nearly no growth... 2 ex level cultivation arts above all else in this world... a rather overpowered system if used correctly( .he doesnt really is the boons dumb right?) and a lot more... and his progress is rather bad.. he has no reals presence too, feels a bit more like a bystandercharacter... add to it the dumb bets yeah... sthat affects the story development too sadly... and there are more systems... which are funnily more overpowered rewardwise for some female leads... which are more dominant etc.... downgrades the development too sadly.. thats my opinion other more simpy people might like it that way. to each their own *shrug*

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作者 Boring_World