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Hola autor, he leído todos los capítulos hasta el momento y me entristece un poco que lo dejes aquí ya que estaba bastante bueno. He de decir que me gustó bastante tu escritura y también la temática, no hay muchas historias de princesas de Disney aquí. Con eso dicho y suponiendo que de verdad vayas a reescribirlo, me gustaría darte algunos consejos de lo que note de la historia. 1. Disposición del MC. Siento que si bien el era una persona normal antes, debería haber cambiado en cierto grado debido a los recuerdos del príncipe y la bestia. Fue demasiado pasivo y siempre perdió la compostura incluso frente a la muerte, que se supone no es una amenaza completa ya que solo puede llevarse a los que van a morir. 2. Planificación. El MC no parecía saber que hacer, solo andaba a tientas y fue demasiado descuidado, como permitirse caer inconsiente cuando sabe que oculta su identidad o la necesidad de acercarse a una cabaña, cuando podía dormir en el bosque. Si su objetivo era levantar la maldición, entonces podría centrarse en enamorar a una chica de su gusto o si toma el camino del poder, podría investigar magia para levantar su maldición o solo concentrarse en volverse tan fuerte qué la maldición ya no pueda reprimirlo. Poderes. Siento que fueron desperdiciado. Jack frost es básicamente el espíritu del invierno, una encarnación de una estación, aunque en la película el propio Jack nunca explotó mucho su potencial por estar perdido en su pasado. Pero tiene un Potencial de poder inmenso, al menos mucho más fuerte que elsa de frozen o de simplemente lanzar lanzas de hielo. La arena de pesadilla. Dado que fue puesto como artefacto en lugar de plantilla de poder, entonces quizás no pueda expresarse tan fuerte con Jack frost, pero aún debería conservar su naturaleza en lugar de mezclarse con el hielo o quizás si juntarlos, pero no limitarlo a simplemente una habilidad para crear figuras vivas, eso es aburrido. La bestia. Creo que la bestia debería ser mucho más fuerte que un simple hombre lobo Devorar. Este poder es bastante fuerte y puede ser el centro de su camino al poder mientras lo use sabiamente. Además, siento que debería matar al hada ¿una maldición para que el príncipe aprenda la lección? Joder, si bien era arrogante, el era un príncipe o bien un rey, tenía derecho de rechazar a un mendigo, además por cronología, el príncipe era un niño o almenos un joven cuando fue maldecido, claramente es una respuesta excesiva solo por hacerlo aprender una lección. Esa hada o bruja Debería recibir retribucion
Oh god. You ever watch someone get this close to perfection, then completely fumble the bag so bad the whole project goes left? Like, so far left it’s unrecognizable? Yeah, that’s this story in all its essence. MC is set up to be strong from the start—not super OP, but powerful, right? Just needs to train a bit, right? But nah, bro’s first thought in a new world ain’t training, ain’t mastering his skills—it’s going on a damn adventure. Like, priorities, my guy. And let’s talk about this devouring power. Dude has the ability to consume and grow stronger, but he just… doesn’t use it? Low-key feels like the author forgot about it ‘cause we don’t even see it pop up until five chapters later. Like, why set up something that raw just to ignore it when it matters? Worst part? The plot situations. MC keeps gettin’ put in spots where he’s forced to be someone’s bitch or just randomly weak as hell. I see what the author’s tryna do—build a world that feels massive, make the MC’s journey feel earned, let him grow into his OP potential. But the execution? Painful. The pacing and decision-making got me side-eyein’ every chapter. Feels like this could’ve been fire if it just stuck to its strengths. But instead? It’s fightin’ itself every step of the way.
Warning! Read at your own risk. It's a masterpiece of a story. Read. If this story goes as it has, we will soon have another gem among the novels. I just want to thank the author for this wonderful book.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Muy buena la historia una pregunta está historia es tuya o la copias de algún lado para seguir leyendo por hay la historia es muy buena la historia me encanta mucho sigue así ??????????????????????????????
I hope you keep it going to the end. It's been great so far [img=recommend][img=update]
I like this story and I hope the author continues it. Because it's not every day that you find a story where such universes are combined together.
Yeah, this is just another shameless review—nothing new. I'm simply continuing the tradition.
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I hopes the author gets to be famous for this book. At least 400 chapters (Don't pay attention to this) Ndjjdjskxsksnzknjnsjwjsjsnjzsnqzksnqzjskokska
gostei muito da ideia para a fanfic como tem poucos capítulos eu não tenho como avaliar melhor, espero que as atualização seja mais rápidas e que não fique em hiatos.
This is a hidden masterpiece! I hope author can atleast write until the end of bell break mc curse.i hope you won't drop like other novels. Most of ur novels are really good
The premise is fresh, but the execution could be better. I definitely did not like the existence of devour, it's an easy cop out to everything. I was looking forward to a story that relies on interactions and how to break the curse, but with devour, I fear that this would be another "I'm gonna beat all the enemies and devour their abilities" kind of fic.
It's hard to find stories with interesting and original ideas, so give it a chance just for that. For now, everything is going well in the story for me, from the protagonist, to his interesting abilities, to his even more interesting identity. Recommended.
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A truly excellent start, I’d say. The introduction of Coco World at the beginning of the MC’s journey was a particularly clever decision. I hope you'll take some creative liberties with the crossover, rather than sticking too closely to the original storylines. Can't wait to see where this goes! Best of luck to the author, and I sincerely hope you complete this novel.
word count chapter in ch7. come on man. this was good. unfortunately, just had to ruin it
thx for the response I couldn't see the reply on the review but saw it on your profile. love the story once again and keep up the good work. the story has a lot of potential and I would like to see more, can't wait.😁 and sorry for calling you out like that😅 you just wanted the exposure and opportunity for more ppl to see you story. so I will now give five star. ps I would love the word count chapter to an auxiliary or just before the prologue when i got to the word count chapter it kinda killed my enthusiasm to read more and that's why I made my original review so idk if other readers have that feeling but you do you. thx one again
There are useless chapters when the mc moves between worlds, just as the mc himself chose the curse and the disease lycanthropy for some reason, and no these curses did not make him a super imboy, he could have become one anyway, given that he has the ability to "devour", perhaps this is some kind of fetish of the author or he wanted a rich mc, but this makes no sense, because there are more problems than benefits, there are also a lot of Mary Sue, mc can turn into a human thanks to the ability of a werewolf? of course, that's exactly how it works. Also, despite the fact that mc has ice magic, nightmare sand and a magic staff, he does not use them at all. Also, when mc met a sorceress who cursed him, instead of tearing her up on the spot and devouring her, he behaves like a virgin for the first time and is afraid of something incomprehensible, although he himself chose to be cursed. The author also made the number of words, and for this it is necessary to punish.
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Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs
I like it author but can you add since it's Disney or cartoons based, can you add some scene where there are singing scenes.
Hola autor, he leído todos los capítulos hasta el momento y me entristece un poco que lo dejes aquí ya que estaba bastante bueno. He de decir que me gustó bastante tu escritura y también la temática, no hay muchas historias de princesas de Disney aquí. Con eso dicho y suponiendo que de verdad vayas a reescribirlo, me gustaría darte algunos consejos de lo que note de la historia. 1. Disposición del MC. Siento que si bien el era una persona normal antes, debería haber cambiado en cierto grado debido a los recuerdos del príncipe y la bestia. Fue demasiado pasivo y siempre perdió la compostura incluso frente a la muerte, que se supone no es una amenaza completa ya que solo puede llevarse a los que van a morir. 2. Planificación. El MC no parecía saber que hacer, solo andaba a tientas y fue demasiado descuidado, como permitirse caer inconsiente cuando sabe que oculta su identidad o la necesidad de acercarse a una cabaña, cuando podía dormir en el bosque. Si su objetivo era levantar la maldición, entonces podría centrarse en enamorar a una chica de su gusto o si toma el camino del poder, podría investigar magia para levantar su maldición o solo concentrarse en volverse tan fuerte qué la maldición ya no pueda reprimirlo. Poderes. Siento que fueron desperdiciado. Jack frost es básicamente el espíritu del invierno, una encarnación de una estación, aunque en la película el propio Jack nunca explotó mucho su potencial por estar perdido en su pasado. Pero tiene un Potencial de poder inmenso, al menos mucho más fuerte que elsa de frozen o de simplemente lanzar lanzas de hielo. La arena de pesadilla. Dado que fue puesto como artefacto en lugar de plantilla de poder, entonces quizás no pueda expresarse tan fuerte con Jack frost, pero aún debería conservar su naturaleza en lugar de mezclarse con el hielo o quizás si juntarlos, pero no limitarlo a simplemente una habilidad para crear figuras vivas, eso es aburrido. La bestia. Creo que la bestia debería ser mucho más fuerte que un simple hombre lobo Devorar. Este poder es bastante fuerte y puede ser el centro de su camino al poder mientras lo use sabiamente. Además, siento que debería matar al hada ¿una maldición para que el príncipe aprenda la lección? Joder, si bien era arrogante, el era un príncipe o bien un rey, tenía derecho de rechazar a un mendigo, además por cronología, el príncipe era un niño o almenos un joven cuando fue maldecido, claramente es una respuesta excesiva solo por hacerlo aprender una lección. Esa hada o bruja Debería recibir retribucion
Oh god. You ever watch someone get this close to perfection, then completely fumble the bag so bad the whole project goes left? Like, so far left it’s unrecognizable? Yeah, that’s this story in all its essence. MC is set up to be strong from the start—not super OP, but powerful, right? Just needs to train a bit, right? But nah, bro’s first thought in a new world ain’t training, ain’t mastering his skills—it’s going on a damn adventure. Like, priorities, my guy. And let’s talk about this devouring power. Dude has the ability to consume and grow stronger, but he just… doesn’t use it? Low-key feels like the author forgot about it ‘cause we don’t even see it pop up until five chapters later. Like, why set up something that raw just to ignore it when it matters? Worst part? The plot situations. MC keeps gettin’ put in spots where he’s forced to be someone’s bitch or just randomly weak as hell. I see what the author’s tryna do—build a world that feels massive, make the MC’s journey feel earned, let him grow into his OP potential. But the execution? Painful. The pacing and decision-making got me side-eyein’ every chapter. Feels like this could’ve been fire if it just stuck to its strengths. But instead? It’s fightin’ itself every step of the way.
Warning! Read at your own risk. It's a masterpiece of a story. Read. If this story goes as it has, we will soon have another gem among the novels. I just want to thank the author for this wonderful book.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Muy buena la historia una pregunta está historia es tuya o la copias de algún lado para seguir leyendo por hay la historia es muy buena la historia me encanta mucho sigue así ??????????????????????????????
I hope you keep it going to the end. It's been great so far [img=recommend][img=update]
I like this story and I hope the author continues it. Because it's not every day that you find a story where such universes are combined together.
Yeah, this is just another shameless review—nothing new. I'm simply continuing the tradition.
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I hopes the author gets to be famous for this book. At least 400 chapters (Don't pay attention to this) Ndjjdjskxsksnzknjnsjwjsjsnjzsnqzksnqzjskokska
gostei muito da ideia para a fanfic como tem poucos capítulos eu não tenho como avaliar melhor, espero que as atualização seja mais rápidas e que não fique em hiatos.
This is a hidden masterpiece! I hope author can atleast write until the end of bell break mc curse.i hope you won't drop like other novels. Most of ur novels are really good
The premise is fresh, but the execution could be better. I definitely did not like the existence of devour, it's an easy cop out to everything. I was looking forward to a story that relies on interactions and how to break the curse, but with devour, I fear that this would be another "I'm gonna beat all the enemies and devour their abilities" kind of fic.
It's hard to find stories with interesting and original ideas, so give it a chance just for that. For now, everything is going well in the story for me, from the protagonist, to his interesting abilities, to his even more interesting identity. Recommended.
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A truly excellent start, I’d say. The introduction of Coco World at the beginning of the MC’s journey was a particularly clever decision. I hope you'll take some creative liberties with the crossover, rather than sticking too closely to the original storylines. Can't wait to see where this goes! Best of luck to the author, and I sincerely hope you complete this novel.
word count chapter in ch7. come on man. this was good. unfortunately, just had to ruin it
thx for the response I couldn't see the reply on the review but saw it on your profile. love the story once again and keep up the good work. the story has a lot of potential and I would like to see more, can't wait.😁 and sorry for calling you out like that😅 you just wanted the exposure and opportunity for more ppl to see you story. so I will now give five star. ps I would love the word count chapter to an auxiliary or just before the prologue when i got to the word count chapter it kinda killed my enthusiasm to read more and that's why I made my original review so idk if other readers have that feeling but you do you. thx one again
There are useless chapters when the mc moves between worlds, just as the mc himself chose the curse and the disease lycanthropy for some reason, and no these curses did not make him a super imboy, he could have become one anyway, given that he has the ability to "devour", perhaps this is some kind of fetish of the author or he wanted a rich mc, but this makes no sense, because there are more problems than benefits, there are also a lot of Mary Sue, mc can turn into a human thanks to the ability of a werewolf? of course, that's exactly how it works. Also, despite the fact that mc has ice magic, nightmare sand and a magic staff, he does not use them at all. Also, when mc met a sorceress who cursed him, instead of tearing her up on the spot and devouring her, he behaves like a virgin for the first time and is afraid of something incomprehensible, although he himself chose to be cursed. The author also made the number of words, and for this it is necessary to punish.
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Feels a little rough, but I'm looking forward to reading this when there are more chs
I like it author but can you add since it's Disney or cartoons based, can you add some scene where there are singing scenes.