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I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters: The first three chapters of this story lack any real sense of originality, depth, or meaningful conflict. The characters feel more like placeholders, their struggles predictable, and the plot nothing more than a series of events happening without any real emotional investment or tension. The writing is overly reliant on genre clichés without attempting to subvert or innovate. What could have been an intriguing fantasy with a unique protagonist feels instead like a string of uninspired tropes and plot devices designed to move the story along, but never giving the reader a reason to care. If the author is serious about improving this series, a complete overhaul of the characters, pacing, and plot structure is necessary—there’s simply nothing here worth investing in. Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4 ⭐ and hope it gets better.
I read the first 3 chapters but I introduced myself because this book just isn't for me but anyway you have a review of those first three chapters: The first three chapters of this story lack any real sense of originality, depth, or meaningful conflict. The characters feel more like placeholders, their struggles predictable, and the plot nothing more than a series of events happening without any real emotional investment or tension. The writing is overly reliant on genre clichés without attempting to subvert or innovate. What could have been an intriguing fantasy with a unique protagonist feels instead like a string of uninspired tropes and plot devices designed to move the story along, but never giving the reader a reason to care. If the author is serious about improving this series, a complete overhaul of the characters, pacing, and plot structure is necessary—there’s simply nothing here worth investing in. Anyway, for the author, don't take this review badly but as an example to improve, and I don't want to be too mean to the author so I'm giving it a 4 ⭐ and hope it gets better.
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