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You made me post a review, that is very rare. Why so few chapters? Please more, hard to find anything this good when surrounded by garbage! Loved chapter 19 btw, did not read anything close to as good as this in the past year, and I go through a lot of novels.
If you're looking for a fresh take on the Naruto universe, give this one a shot—you won’t be disappointed.
This fanfic is like a drug Loved the chibi episodes , excited to see how he uses his secondary skills as an shibobi. Hiruzen seems different though.
This is gold but too much self monologuing, but yeab overall this is gold worth your time
You, sir, cooked. I honestly was drawn in by the slow start in a way I wasn't expecting. Good on you. Still looking for an awesome aburame fic out here though. lol
Brilliant I’m enjoying this fanfic please continue [img=strong][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=More pls][img=gift][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
keep up the great work...........................................................................................................................
Too much wish fulfillment, author couldn't have just left the character to develop on their own based on their own merit, there just HAD to be gifts that he was handed on a silver platter. The story progression is ridiculous as well. For example, a genius neurosurgeon, instead of intellectually analyzing his new capabilities and developing the Yamanaka power naturally is given a power up that lets him be as strong as he wants. No struggle, no character development, just....."here you go". Not even talking about the mind palace nonsense, or simulating something that he has no experience with. All I'm saying, the decisions and thought process that he is showing do not match up with what a regular person would make in his situation. There's suspension of disbelief, and there's....this.
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It's a great story, everything is perfect here, starting from writing characters and keeping a story[img=Your move][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A refreshing Naruto fanfiction, new ideas, and a fresh take on the Yamanaka Clan (so far). Best of luck Author.
I've always wondered why no one tried reincarnation into the yamanaka clan. Their clan jutsu is very interesting and has potential. It's mind control. Great fic and ready for more.
When I think of my past experiences while reading this fanfic all I can say is it's perfect. Like the Mc. Even though we are currently in the beginning phase I have gut-feeling, hunch, instinct, perception, deduction that this is one fanfic I didn't regret reading and won't in the future too. Also not only this the one reason I gave five stars is that until now all the scenes happened, all of them were as exactly what I want to see in a Naruto fanfic....
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great story we have here, great potential i really like personal chapters about people we usually know from dofferent position than shown here, hope it will not get dropped or lose on quality. thats teally a gem here
I can't do anything else except congratulate the author for this amazing fanfic. One of the best I've ever read. I don't know how it will continue but if it continues like this it has the potential to become something incredible... Just like the MC.
Really good fanfic with a lot of potential. The only thing I don't like is the mage class. What do you need this mage class for? There's no use for it and if there were, that would be a terrible idea. I suggest to just scrap / remove it.
Great story when I saw the art was scared it was a translation but you doing your thing and made this clan very interesting authors like you are great, you bring a different viewpoint on abilities that are very inspiring for writing new stories. Please keep up the good work
Loving the story so far! My only complaint is that there are not enough chapters!
Good 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾☺️☺️☺️☺️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾☺️☺️☺️👍🏾☺️☺️ ****†**********†***********†****************************‡★*****★★azertyoplhfssWxcvkouytrezfjphddcbkiy
This is the first time I've reviewed any book on here.... this one is turning out to be excellent! The main character's thought processes are described in a way that makes you feel like .... ohh that's nice... you made a good decision .... let's goo!! Hahaha .... a bit weird to type in but yeah.... oh also the characters around him also have depth... we've slowly begun to uncover them now.... but I'm excited.... keep it up author-san
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One of the better Naruto fics I've read on here so far... it's a bit of a slow burn and While I get that's not for everyone who wants to read about Ninja's remaking landscapes with explosive jutsu's or the harems screwing every konochi with a pulse this is panning out to be something with... limitless potential. [img=update][img=update]
So read the whole fic and I'm liking it a lot.there aren't any big problems with this fic like grammar or dialogue but the story doesn't really has anything new rather than just a reincarnated guy who is working to become op. Well not yet anyway the story only started so best of luck to the author and please finish the story don't just disappear one day
ネタバレを明かす You made me post a review, that is very rare. Why so few chapters? Please more, hard to find anything this good when surrounded by garbage! Loved chapter 19 btw, did not read anything close to as good as this in the past year, and I go through a lot of novels.
If you're looking for a fresh take on the Naruto universe, give this one a shot—you won’t be disappointed.
This fanfic is like a drug Loved the chibi episodes , excited to see how he uses his secondary skills as an shibobi. Hiruzen seems different though.
This is gold but too much self monologuing, but yeab overall this is gold worth your time
You, sir, cooked. I honestly was drawn in by the slow start in a way I wasn't expecting. Good on you. Still looking for an awesome aburame fic out here though. lol
Brilliant I’m enjoying this fanfic please continue [img=strong][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=More pls][img=gift][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
keep up the great work...........................................................................................................................
Too much wish fulfillment, author couldn't have just left the character to develop on their own based on their own merit, there just HAD to be gifts that he was handed on a silver platter. The story progression is ridiculous as well. For example, a genius neurosurgeon, instead of intellectually analyzing his new capabilities and developing the Yamanaka power naturally is given a power up that lets him be as strong as he wants. No struggle, no character development, just....."here you go". Not even talking about the mind palace nonsense, or simulating something that he has no experience with. All I'm saying, the decisions and thought process that he is showing do not match up with what a regular person would make in his situation. There's suspension of disbelief, and there's....this.
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It's a great story, everything is perfect here, starting from writing characters and keeping a story[img=Your move][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A refreshing Naruto fanfiction, new ideas, and a fresh take on the Yamanaka Clan (so far). Best of luck Author.
I've always wondered why no one tried reincarnation into the yamanaka clan. Their clan jutsu is very interesting and has potential. It's mind control. Great fic and ready for more.
When I think of my past experiences while reading this fanfic all I can say is it's perfect. Like the Mc. Even though we are currently in the beginning phase I have gut-feeling, hunch, instinct, perception, deduction that this is one fanfic I didn't regret reading and won't in the future too. Also not only this the one reason I gave five stars is that until now all the scenes happened, all of them were as exactly what I want to see in a Naruto fanfic....
ネタバレを明かす great story we have here, great potential i really like personal chapters about people we usually know from dofferent position than shown here, hope it will not get dropped or lose on quality. thats teally a gem here
I can't do anything else except congratulate the author for this amazing fanfic. One of the best I've ever read. I don't know how it will continue but if it continues like this it has the potential to become something incredible... Just like the MC.
Really good fanfic with a lot of potential. The only thing I don't like is the mage class. What do you need this mage class for? There's no use for it and if there were, that would be a terrible idea. I suggest to just scrap / remove it.
Great story when I saw the art was scared it was a translation but you doing your thing and made this clan very interesting authors like you are great, you bring a different viewpoint on abilities that are very inspiring for writing new stories. Please keep up the good work
Loving the story so far! My only complaint is that there are not enough chapters!
Good 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾☺️☺️☺️☺️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾☺️☺️☺️👍🏾☺️☺️ ****†**********†***********†****************************‡★*****★★azertyoplhfssWxcvkouytrezfjphddcbkiy
This is the first time I've reviewed any book on here.... this one is turning out to be excellent! The main character's thought processes are described in a way that makes you feel like .... ohh that's nice... you made a good decision .... let's goo!! Hahaha .... a bit weird to type in but yeah.... oh also the characters around him also have depth... we've slowly begun to uncover them now.... but I'm excited.... keep it up author-san
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One of the better Naruto fics I've read on here so far... it's a bit of a slow burn and While I get that's not for everyone who wants to read about Ninja's remaking landscapes with explosive jutsu's or the harems screwing every konochi with a pulse this is panning out to be something with... limitless potential. [img=update][img=update]
So read the whole fic and I'm liking it a lot.there aren't any big problems with this fic like grammar or dialogue but the story doesn't really has anything new rather than just a reincarnated guy who is working to become op. Well not yet anyway the story only started so best of luck to the author and please finish the story don't just disappear one day
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