4.47
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レビューを書くits ok the dialogue is awkward and just not appropriate for the situation everybody talks weird and you have a habit of force feeding the readers of the characters thoughts and feelings just stop all together or word it better.the way you do it is terrible its Chinese lvl of wording and for Chinese novels its understandable because its a translation but this isnt it
Bro I swear this is literally like that one JJK fan fic except that the MC reincarnated the interactions between Aira and MC are literally like the other FF I've read
pretty good story and a good author who checks comments and fixes any mistakes in his story that are pointed out it's still to early to give a full review since there aren't that many chapters.
Señores si esto es producido para una pelicula se puede decir que es cine, siga asi amigo mio y que no abandone la idea.............................
it's average webnovel quality FF but it's still very confusing author says his sword gave the MC memories of bleach but it doesn't explain how he knows about the future of jjk.
I saw a dandadan fic and it caught my attention cause it was the first I saw and Dandadan is the best manga so I hope this is really good (I know it is not only a dandadan fic but I don't care)
FINALLY A DANDADAN FIC! NOW I WANT TO WRITE A SPICY ONE TODAY! ***************************************************************************************************
This is a good story, much better than the previous version that was deleted. So far so good, nothing to criticize.
I am pinning this here,so that I can come back here after 2 months to read all the accumulated chapters...I hope you dont drop this...Its kinda great... would appreciate if you could update more...Though cant complain cuz you are literally updating fast
Hello everyone and welcome to this novel, for those who know me you will know that I have written a novel with the characteristics of this story before, but I think it was deleted due to reports from dissatisfied readers. But now the story is much better, set in the year 2017, very different from my other story, a year before everything general JJK starts. If you want romance, you can suggest someone you like, I will be open to suggestions, but there will be no harem.
its ok the dialogue is awkward and just not appropriate for the situation everybody talks weird and you have a habit of force feeding the readers of the characters thoughts and feelings just stop all together or word it better.the way you do it is terrible its Chinese lvl of wording and for Chinese novels its understandable because its a translation but this isnt it
Bro I swear this is literally like that one JJK fan fic except that the MC reincarnated the interactions between Aira and MC are literally like the other FF I've read
pretty good story and a good author who checks comments and fixes any mistakes in his story that are pointed out it's still to early to give a full review since there aren't that many chapters.
Señores si esto es producido para una pelicula se puede decir que es cine, siga asi amigo mio y que no abandone la idea.............................
it's average webnovel quality FF but it's still very confusing author says his sword gave the MC memories of bleach but it doesn't explain how he knows about the future of jjk.
I saw a dandadan fic and it caught my attention cause it was the first I saw and Dandadan is the best manga so I hope this is really good (I know it is not only a dandadan fic but I don't care)
FINALLY A DANDADAN FIC! NOW I WANT TO WRITE A SPICY ONE TODAY! ***************************************************************************************************
This is a good story, much better than the previous version that was deleted. So far so good, nothing to criticize.
I am pinning this here,so that I can come back here after 2 months to read all the accumulated chapters...I hope you dont drop this...Its kinda great... would appreciate if you could update more...Though cant complain cuz you are literally updating fast
Hello everyone and welcome to this novel, for those who know me you will know that I have written a novel with the characteristics of this story before, but I think it was deleted due to reports from dissatisfied readers. But now the story is much better, set in the year 2017, very different from my other story, a year before everything general JJK starts. If you want romance, you can suggest someone you like, I will be open to suggestions, but there will be no harem.