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This has to be the most underrated webnovel so far. it's perfectly written, has good description and awesome plot! I'll be sticking around for more update .. .
I've always loved Mafia stories but this takes it to another level entirely. The dialogues and the characters are so lit. Big kudos to the writer, your book is very good and I can't help but continue reading!❤
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
wow, this is a really interesting story! The writing and the dialogue between the characters are so good! it's Mafia alright...
Im very captivated by this book, I cant wait to see how the story develops. I recently stopped reading another book because one of the main characters died, I hope this writer doesnt lose the plot like that. Im very invested in Angel's story, shes funny and brave.
This has to be the most underrated webnovel so far. it's perfectly written, has good description and awesome plot! I'll be sticking around for more update .. .
I've always loved Mafia stories but this takes it to another level entirely. The dialogues and the characters are so lit. Big kudos to the writer, your book is very good and I can't help but continue reading!❤
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
wow, this is a really interesting story! The writing and the dialogue between the characters are so good! it's Mafia alright...
Im very captivated by this book, I cant wait to see how the story develops. I recently stopped reading another book because one of the main characters died, I hope this writer doesnt lose the plot like that. Im very invested in Angel's story, shes funny and brave.