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I rarely write reviews, but this fanfic deserves all the praise I can give it! From the captivating storytelling to the great yet simple writing, every aspect of this work shines! The author manages to create an AU world that adds much new information to the HP universe, and the story doesn't just revolve around Britain. Character development is amazing, with each character feeling real and relatable, especially the family dynamics. The plot unfolds at a perfect pace, keeping you hooked with every chapter. And the updating stability is excellent, at least for now (keeping my fingers crossed on this one!). If you're looking for a Harry Potter fanfiction that truly stands out, look no further. This one has it all! Five stars without a doubt!
The system seems pretty OP at first, but as he gets more advanced in magic, it balances out taking longer to earn points. Almost better for him to focus in a few areas and then use the points to shore up his weaknesses. Best fanfic I have read in a while,
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this book is very good at first I thought it was some trash Chinese novel I had read a while ago as he system is the same but it isn't this book is very interesting wonder if the sorcer supreme exist like a super hidden magic society that only takes in Supreme magus
One of the best Harry Potter fanfiction i have read......the MC is likeable and powerful, side characters are well created and good changes on the world background too....
I only found this recently and I really wish I had found it much later on...I could have have an entire stock of chapters to binge instead of the 11 that I got to read. Definitely worth starting, I'm invested in the story already. The author doesn't spend too much time in the training montage, rather moves the story along, and I am quite happy with the good grammar I have seen so far. I look forward to reading more chapters :)
What can I say? Currently at chapter 21 and this is already one of the greatest Harry Potter fanfics that I've seen. There are many reason to give this story a full marks but to list a few: - Smart MC - Smart System Usage - Not shy about using the system to get stronger - Not a system slave - Excellent story flow - Not an edge lord I don't usually give reviews but I just felt like I had to for this one. 😁
This fanfic is amazing! With Good System and Smart MC, And No Orphan....this is a must read for any Potterhead!... And Author plzz dont drop.
As a avid reader on the webnovel i am going to give you my opinion the fanfic is pretty awesome to read some common mistakes about the currency denomination or just the explanation he provided to his parents being so long and without any gaps didn't really seemed crucial to me but thats okay other than that you can add certain substance to story and not just mc moving from one scenario to another without the some insights into the mc way of thinking other than that pretty much everything is good the premise and all ps; if you writhing this novel as a hobby try the schedule of realising the 2 chapters per week that will allow you keep a stock and also will not be budensome for you write and will allow the readers to be engaged in the story
its a damn good Story... if i May say one of the Best harry potter Storys and there are only two that were neerly at that level that i ve read so please keep it up [img=More pls][img=More pls]
A really great take on hp/marvel World with new elements that makeup unique and exciting, I am currently at 59 on Patreon ( since I couldn’t wait to read on). And it is great so far!
I rarely write reviews, but this fanfic deserves all the praise I can give it! From the captivating storytelling to the great yet simple writing, every aspect of this work shines! The author manages to create an AU world that adds much new information to the HP universe, and the story doesn't just revolve around Britain. Character development is amazing, with each character feeling real and relatable, especially the family dynamics. The plot unfolds at a perfect pace, keeping you hooked with every chapter. And the updating stability is excellent, at least for now (keeping my fingers crossed on this one!). If you're looking for a Harry Potter fanfiction that truly stands out, look no further. This one has it all! Five stars without a doubt!
The system seems pretty OP at first, but as he gets more advanced in magic, it balances out taking longer to earn points. Almost better for him to focus in a few areas and then use the points to shore up his weaknesses. Best fanfic I have read in a while,
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this book is very good at first I thought it was some trash Chinese novel I had read a while ago as he system is the same but it isn't this book is very interesting wonder if the sorcer supreme exist like a super hidden magic society that only takes in Supreme magus
One of the best Harry Potter fanfiction i have read......the MC is likeable and powerful, side characters are well created and good changes on the world background too....
I only found this recently and I really wish I had found it much later on...I could have have an entire stock of chapters to binge instead of the 11 that I got to read. Definitely worth starting, I'm invested in the story already. The author doesn't spend too much time in the training montage, rather moves the story along, and I am quite happy with the good grammar I have seen so far. I look forward to reading more chapters :)
What can I say? Currently at chapter 21 and this is already one of the greatest Harry Potter fanfics that I've seen. There are many reason to give this story a full marks but to list a few: - Smart MC - Smart System Usage - Not shy about using the system to get stronger - Not a system slave - Excellent story flow - Not an edge lord I don't usually give reviews but I just felt like I had to for this one. 😁
This fanfic is amazing! With Good System and Smart MC, And No Orphan....this is a must read for any Potterhead!... And Author plzz dont drop.
As a avid reader on the webnovel i am going to give you my opinion the fanfic is pretty awesome to read some common mistakes about the currency denomination or just the explanation he provided to his parents being so long and without any gaps didn't really seemed crucial to me but thats okay other than that you can add certain substance to story and not just mc moving from one scenario to another without the some insights into the mc way of thinking other than that pretty much everything is good the premise and all ps; if you writhing this novel as a hobby try the schedule of realising the 2 chapters per week that will allow you keep a stock and also will not be budensome for you write and will allow the readers to be engaged in the story
its a damn good Story... if i May say one of the Best harry potter Storys and there are only two that were neerly at that level that i ve read so please keep it up [img=More pls][img=More pls]
A really great take on hp/marvel World with new elements that makeup unique and exciting, I am currently at 59 on Patreon ( since I couldn’t wait to read on). And it is great so far!