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I love when authors make characters of different series interact with each other in such a Natural way, as if they were friends even before the crossover And here...
La novela no es tan mala, pero hay cosas que la estropean (En mi opinión personal): 1.- Copiar y pegar la información de wikipedia y wikifans, es decir esta bien que describas personajes y poderes, pero tiene que ser solo un párrafo... no todo el capítulo. 2.- Agregar infinidad de personajes femeninos y lo peor es que son de diferentes mundos. ¿Qué es esto, pokemon waifus? 3.- Pokemon waifus de todo el omniverso, es decir el protagonista "convoca" mujeres de otros mundos y básicamente son muñecas sexual3s esclavas con el cerebro lavado. Esto vuelve mas confusa la novela y reduce el desarrollo de los personajes originales de ese mundo. Además, en ese anime, es innecesario traer otros personajes de otros mundos (anime, manga, comic, hentai, juegos...). 4.- El autor quiere alargar su novela con relleno perjudicial. El relleno es agregar nuevos personajes indefinidamente. Autor, toda novela tiene inicio y final. Toda novela tienen una cantidad de personajes limitados.
I love this story, I look forward to the next chapters with great excitement and keep it up, and want more chapters 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘
Good fanfic but too much info dump, i know that you doing it because some readers are not know about it but it was kinda annoying. But again this is good fic thank you
Updated from 2/5 to 3/5. The start is just horrible filled with so much info dump it's insane. It gets better after chapter 14, but keep in mind - chapters are very long. Mc has the power to receive knowledge from multiverse, I like the idea. But then mc receives a system, achievements make no sense and rewards are way too generous. At least after chapter 14 the system calms down a bit. I still don't like the system one bit. The story in later chapters still contains info dump, but a bit less. Author confuses gender (him/her) a lot of times.
We need MOOOOORRREEEE MOOOOORRREEEE MOOOOORRREEEE MOOOOORRREEEE at least 2 chapter a Day or Mass release 🥲🥲
Es un buen trabajo hasta ahora, la amalgama de todos los mundos hasta ahora ha sido interesante y el poder del MC no es lo más poderoso pero tampoco es tan débil, sigue con el buen trabajo, estaré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos
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the writing is getting better author-sama, especially with the start of to love ru series, please keep it up like this and if possible give green hats to protagonists such as rito, up to you to make them suffer however you want.
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I hate this kind of storyline, it ruins the potential of the novel, too much nonsense makes people bored quickly.
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I can't read more than 1 chapter. bruh, your writing is so messed up, are you an elementary school kid? Because I wrote like that when I was in elementary school. Lots of cringe scenes, info dumps, excessive inner self thoughts, and why do the characters always speak with a stutter? seriously bro it's so cringe.
Hasta ahora me ha gustado la evolución de esta historia, es un buen desarrollo y el mundo es interesante, el sistema es a la vez poderoso pero no le da un poder invencible fácilmente, tendrá que entrenar y superar sus límites por si mismo, hasta ahora bien trabajo, seguiré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos
Gostei é uma ótima história .............................................................,................,..,.,. ,,.,....,..,.,.. ,...,...
I've read until the most recent chapter (Chapter 21) and here are my thoughts for those planning to read: - The fic itself starts out a little bit raw with long-winded explanations and a bit of weird dialogue but you can physically see it get better with each chapter. I feel that the author improved as he wrote and the old wiki like dialogues are now gone so do not worry! - I feel that the fic has tremendous potential though at the same time I worry that the author may exhaust themselves from spreading themselves too thin as there are quite a lot of animes and pieces of media invested into this work. - I will say however that I have been thoroughly entertained and it gives me a bit of the same vibe as some of akikan's(The Goat) work and I hope for the author to continue writing :) - All in all I definitely would recommend!! My advice to the author is to pace themselves. Right now the fic is going at a nice steady pace as like those that have just started. I recommend referencing some of Akikan's work like the Dimensional Groupchat one as I feel that that had quite nice pacing. I also recommend maybe setting the threshold for rewards just a little bit higher. (There's nothing wrong with the mc getting way stronger from training but I feel that rewards should be earned)
If only you could upload 2 or 3 chapter day that would be Great Also its's way to many InFo DumP more like 80% Info and 20% about the story
The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just
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Amazing story so far, cant wait to see more! Yhe only problem I have is the male/female pronoun mistakes but its very minor!
Just giving it 5 stars so that the author gives it his all and does not drop this. I have been craving to read something like this for a long time. So author-sama please do your best for the readers.
While the story had an interesting and fun concept with a good start, everything kinda just went downhill. Good Ideas but not really good execution. Structure of the story is a mess especially when chapters are just full of massive infodumps that really explains a lot too much. A simple summary is better and having such an infodump during situations just messes up the pacing and flow of the story. Yeah sure its their to explain things to people who are unfamiliar with the anime or manga but some of them are just completely unessecary. You don't need to tell the readers as if they want to learn more, they can just search for it themselves if they are fully interested in it. The true main issue that the story suffers is the MC. While yes it was fun having him takeover a side character, the MC's personality overall was just generic nice guy which kinda became boring and eyerolling. He even has some cluelessness which just was annoying. I expected him to have some personality but really he is no different than the generic harem nice guy which most of the girls like because he is nice. Its especially obvious with the whole situation with Kakinozaka as besides shutting the Male Students up, he had this corny and eyerolling speech in order to just get the girls. You even didn't really help much considering that most of his male classmates are completely not-normal that just pushes the girls towards the MC. Heck, you pretty gave Rito a foul mouth which i questioned why even. Do you really need to make him that troublesome just for Haruna to easily fall in love with the MC? The MC really killed my enjoyment of the story. He is just so generic in personality with nothing really making him fun to read. Systems and Powers are just nothing if the MC is a bore.
Don't drop this author-san....................go beyond...........................................i believe you.............................................
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I love when authors make characters of different series interact with each other in such a Natural way, as if they were friends even before the crossover And here...
La novela no es tan mala, pero hay cosas que la estropean (En mi opinión personal): 1.- Copiar y pegar la información de wikipedia y wikifans, es decir esta bien que describas personajes y poderes, pero tiene que ser solo un párrafo... no todo el capítulo. 2.- Agregar infinidad de personajes femeninos y lo peor es que son de diferentes mundos. ¿Qué es esto, pokemon waifus? 3.- Pokemon waifus de todo el omniverso, es decir el protagonista "convoca" mujeres de otros mundos y básicamente son muñecas sexual3s esclavas con el cerebro lavado. Esto vuelve mas confusa la novela y reduce el desarrollo de los personajes originales de ese mundo. Además, en ese anime, es innecesario traer otros personajes de otros mundos (anime, manga, comic, hentai, juegos...). 4.- El autor quiere alargar su novela con relleno perjudicial. El relleno es agregar nuevos personajes indefinidamente. Autor, toda novela tiene inicio y final. Toda novela tienen una cantidad de personajes limitados.
I love this story, I look forward to the next chapters with great excitement and keep it up, and want more chapters 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘
Good fanfic but too much info dump, i know that you doing it because some readers are not know about it but it was kinda annoying. But again this is good fic thank you
Updated from 2/5 to 3/5. The start is just horrible filled with so much info dump it's insane. It gets better after chapter 14, but keep in mind - chapters are very long. Mc has the power to receive knowledge from multiverse, I like the idea. But then mc receives a system, achievements make no sense and rewards are way too generous. At least after chapter 14 the system calms down a bit. I still don't like the system one bit. The story in later chapters still contains info dump, but a bit less. Author confuses gender (him/her) a lot of times.
We need MOOOOORRREEEE MOOOOORRREEEE MOOOOORRREEEE MOOOOORRREEEE at least 2 chapter a Day or Mass release 🥲🥲
Es un buen trabajo hasta ahora, la amalgama de todos los mundos hasta ahora ha sido interesante y el poder del MC no es lo más poderoso pero tampoco es tan débil, sigue con el buen trabajo, estaré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos
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the writing is getting better author-sama, especially with the start of to love ru series, please keep it up like this and if possible give green hats to protagonists such as rito, up to you to make them suffer however you want.
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I hate this kind of storyline, it ruins the potential of the novel, too much nonsense makes people bored quickly.
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I can't read more than 1 chapter. bruh, your writing is so messed up, are you an elementary school kid? Because I wrote like that when I was in elementary school. Lots of cringe scenes, info dumps, excessive inner self thoughts, and why do the characters always speak with a stutter? seriously bro it's so cringe.
Hasta ahora me ha gustado la evolución de esta historia, es un buen desarrollo y el mundo es interesante, el sistema es a la vez poderoso pero no le da un poder invencible fácilmente, tendrá que entrenar y superar sus límites por si mismo, hasta ahora bien trabajo, seguiré apoyando esta historia en futuros capítulos
Gostei é uma ótima história .............................................................,................,..,.,. ,,.,....,..,.,.. ,...,...
I've read until the most recent chapter (Chapter 21) and here are my thoughts for those planning to read: - The fic itself starts out a little bit raw with long-winded explanations and a bit of weird dialogue but you can physically see it get better with each chapter. I feel that the author improved as he wrote and the old wiki like dialogues are now gone so do not worry! - I feel that the fic has tremendous potential though at the same time I worry that the author may exhaust themselves from spreading themselves too thin as there are quite a lot of animes and pieces of media invested into this work. - I will say however that I have been thoroughly entertained and it gives me a bit of the same vibe as some of akikan's(The Goat) work and I hope for the author to continue writing :) - All in all I definitely would recommend!! My advice to the author is to pace themselves. Right now the fic is going at a nice steady pace as like those that have just started. I recommend referencing some of Akikan's work like the Dimensional Groupchat one as I feel that that had quite nice pacing. I also recommend maybe setting the threshold for rewards just a little bit higher. (There's nothing wrong with the mc getting way stronger from training but I feel that rewards should be earned)
If only you could upload 2 or 3 chapter day that would be Great Also its's way to many InFo DumP more like 80% Info and 20% about the story
The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just The first first thing thing that popped into up when you saw the first video was the first thing that I popped out into my mind head when and where I saw it and then I saw the it was like I the second first thing you that popped was the first third thing thing I you said know were you were know that that is I don’t was the last one you didn’t say say it you didn’t said anything and you then I said you said you were were a a little bit confused scared and you didn’t said you it was so weird funny I but then then you it just just thought thought I didn’t didn’t know know how it it wasn’t wasn’t like like a little weird but I just
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Amazing story so far, cant wait to see more! Yhe only problem I have is the male/female pronoun mistakes but its very minor!
Just giving it 5 stars so that the author gives it his all and does not drop this. I have been craving to read something like this for a long time. So author-sama please do your best for the readers.
While the story had an interesting and fun concept with a good start, everything kinda just went downhill. Good Ideas but not really good execution. Structure of the story is a mess especially when chapters are just full of massive infodumps that really explains a lot too much. A simple summary is better and having such an infodump during situations just messes up the pacing and flow of the story. Yeah sure its their to explain things to people who are unfamiliar with the anime or manga but some of them are just completely unessecary. You don't need to tell the readers as if they want to learn more, they can just search for it themselves if they are fully interested in it. The true main issue that the story suffers is the MC. While yes it was fun having him takeover a side character, the MC's personality overall was just generic nice guy which kinda became boring and eyerolling. He even has some cluelessness which just was annoying. I expected him to have some personality but really he is no different than the generic harem nice guy which most of the girls like because he is nice. Its especially obvious with the whole situation with Kakinozaka as besides shutting the Male Students up, he had this corny and eyerolling speech in order to just get the girls. You even didn't really help much considering that most of his male classmates are completely not-normal that just pushes the girls towards the MC. Heck, you pretty gave Rito a foul mouth which i questioned why even. Do you really need to make him that troublesome just for Haruna to easily fall in love with the MC? The MC really killed my enjoyment of the story. He is just so generic in personality with nothing really making him fun to read. Systems and Powers are just nothing if the MC is a bore.
Don't drop this author-san....................go beyond...........................................i believe you.............................................
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