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A true hidden gem. I love the world building aswell as the characters and i also love that the author is not like those who straight up make the character through eldritch horror level experiences right of the bat for "character developement" and even if there are some unfortunate happenings, all of them are mostly justified and the Mc has some respite. Love exploration chapters.
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Dark fantasy worlds can be very discouraging to write, so partaking on a journey like this requires a very tedious and precautionary approach. I’m glad to say the author does everything very well. You can see the elements the author draws from other extra books while also staying true to a very dark and grim style which I love. Keep it up author, I cannot wait until you make it to the top of the rankings.
Really good. If you like shadow slave, this is for you. Ugfugfutfutfutf7tf7tf7tf76f76f7tf8tfutf
Essa história realmente é muito boa! A história de fantasia é envolvente e repleta de surpresas. A trama, cheia de mistérios interessantes que traz uma certa curiosidade. Espero que a história continue assim!
I read a lot of 'extra' stories and this is by far the best protagonist and side characters I came across so thumbs up on that author. Keep it up.
It's honestly a good story. but it is such a damn slow pace and I don't know the direction of this book going and like now I know that he is trying to reach a city and enter the academy, the lease ? I am in the dark bro but hey like I just said it too slow pace for me so I am gonna drop it for now and wait for the main arce to start.
This is honestly such a fresh and entertaining read. The flow is excellent and the novel almost reads itself, really captivating. Keep up the good work! Can’t wait for further chapters! P.s.: I’d like for a little longer chapters, but that’s my problem to deal with, this work is just that good [img=update]
Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!
well its good and enjoyable,the mc has his unique points and is not boring. I just want to ask is there any romance in this if yes then who is the FML.??
finally something refreshing the plot is interesting and well placed and the characters are wholesome and most importantly the author doesn't add trash rubbish talks to fill the word count like most authors out there , I just hope author increases update speed and doesn't drop the novel
Hello dear readers. By now, most of us on this platform have already read one story or another in the "Extra" genre, where the main character is transmigrated as an extra or a villain just days before his admittance to the main magic academy. The main cast of characters are already best friends, and he sits at the back of the classroom, manipulating the events of the book from behind the scenes. Don't get me wrong, I’ve always loved those stories too, TNE being one of my favorites. But I didn’t want to make this one just like them. I wanted to write something plot-driven—a fantasy epic in a world full of mysteries, where events aren’t always in the hands of our characters. In this world, to outsmart someone, you have to go the extra mile. Now, I could go on and on about how this story is different from the others, but I think actions speak louder than words. The first 40-something chapters are absolutely free. So why not give it a try?
A true hidden gem. I love the world building aswell as the characters and i also love that the author is not like those who straight up make the character through eldritch horror level experiences right of the bat for "character developement" and even if there are some unfortunate happenings, all of them are mostly justified and the Mc has some respite. Love exploration chapters.
ネタバレを明かす Dark fantasy worlds can be very discouraging to write, so partaking on a journey like this requires a very tedious and precautionary approach. I’m glad to say the author does everything very well. You can see the elements the author draws from other extra books while also staying true to a very dark and grim style which I love. Keep it up author, I cannot wait until you make it to the top of the rankings.
Really good. If you like shadow slave, this is for you. Ugfugfutfutfutf7tf7tf7tf76f76f7tf8tfutf
Essa história realmente é muito boa! A história de fantasia é envolvente e repleta de surpresas. A trama, cheia de mistérios interessantes que traz uma certa curiosidade. Espero que a história continue assim!
I read a lot of 'extra' stories and this is by far the best protagonist and side characters I came across so thumbs up on that author. Keep it up.
It's honestly a good story. but it is such a damn slow pace and I don't know the direction of this book going and like now I know that he is trying to reach a city and enter the academy, the lease ? I am in the dark bro but hey like I just said it too slow pace for me so I am gonna drop it for now and wait for the main arce to start.
This is honestly such a fresh and entertaining read. The flow is excellent and the novel almost reads itself, really captivating. Keep up the good work! Can’t wait for further chapters! P.s.: I’d like for a little longer chapters, but that’s my problem to deal with, this work is just that good [img=update]
Damn, this is good! The writing here reminds me a lot of Shadow Slave, which makes it a delight to read. I didn’t have much hope when I clicked to start reading, but as I read more, I got more immersed, and before I knew it, I had already read all the available chapters. I believe that if you change your cover to a more professional one (made by AI, in other words...) and avoid falling into clichés, this has immense potential. Keep writing and let your imagination flow without limits, author. Impress us!
well its good and enjoyable,the mc has his unique points and is not boring. I just want to ask is there any romance in this if yes then who is the FML.??
finally something refreshing the plot is interesting and well placed and the characters are wholesome and most importantly the author doesn't add trash rubbish talks to fill the word count like most authors out there , I just hope author increases update speed and doesn't drop the novel
Hello dear readers. By now, most of us on this platform have already read one story or another in the "Extra" genre, where the main character is transmigrated as an extra or a villain just days before his admittance to the main magic academy. The main cast of characters are already best friends, and he sits at the back of the classroom, manipulating the events of the book from behind the scenes. Don't get me wrong, I’ve always loved those stories too, TNE being one of my favorites. But I didn’t want to make this one just like them. I wanted to write something plot-driven—a fantasy epic in a world full of mysteries, where events aren’t always in the hands of our characters. In this world, to outsmart someone, you have to go the extra mile. Now, I could go on and on about how this story is different from the others, but I think actions speak louder than words. The first 40-something chapters are absolutely free. So why not give it a try?