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A fanfic with minimal system focus thus far and a good grasp on comedy between the MC and other characters. i quite enjoy it so far.
This is the type of novel you almost immediately know if it's for you or not. The protagonist is belittled by a sibling (?) who he fantasies about. His sibling is a Bakugo-like character that is insufferably arrogant and unlikable, continually stating that the protagonist should "kiss her feet" and worship the ground she walks on. I'm not going to pretend like that type of character doesn't have an audience, but it's just not for me. Other than that, the world is developed beyond the scope of the original material, and the writing quality is of a standard quality.
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That story has good content, but it also has a 'belly kink', I did not find it funny the first time nor the other times, also every time its brought up you can tell after a while that there won't be any advancement on the main content. Nobody like fillers and you make them even less interesting by either having Ash acting like a fool (letting himself bullied) and/or having him being full on with 'belly patting kink' with young girls. What's the point of publishing three chapters a day when two of them is similar filler/weird (kinkish) content than 2/3 of the one you wrote every other days of the week.
I don't even have anything to say, it's simply the best Frieren fanfic there is and I say that with complete certainty. It's a good fanfic in every way and it's still very consistent, I don't know how the author manages to write so many chapters and still be so good.
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Es extrañamente divertido, la historia está bien hecha, no hay errores en la escritura, y el ritmo no es ni demasiado lento ni demasiado rápido, si tuviera que darle una clasificación, diría que es una historia decente, muchísimo mejor que las historias de mierda que hay alrededor. Un 7/10, aunque es posible que la historia mejore en los próximos capítulos, por lo que, no es el puntaje final.
It’s good. The story is funny and entertaining, there doesn’t seem to be any romance whitch is a shame considering all the female characters he has met throughout his life. It’s lighthearted and follows the story for the most part. The only 2 complains I have is that the system is complete dogshit, it’s weak, it’s not omnipotent or at least powerful enough to not get affected by outside powers, it has honestly done nothing the entire story other let mc meet frieren 500 years back in Time and make him a lot weaker then he should be, had he not used it he would have had about 950 years more years to train so if you’re are looking for a broken mc then this isn’t it. Still like 3-4 people that can beat him if we ignore old demons nobody knows about. The other complain is how unchanging the mc is, 90 years he has lived and in those 90 years he hasn’t changed.
I think this is a really great fanfic. If you like slice of life genre, this is definitely for you. Neat plot, Impressive character development, world development, well... Nothing, this is fanfiction after all. And finally, compared to Akikan's always monotonous writing style novels, I prefer this writing style, come on did you see the character development? There is none. He only focuses on the main character.
uhmmm. haven't read it yet so I'll edit it later. but I'm a bit worried. how the hell did he befriend Frieren when she was taught by her master to kill demons on the spot? she even taught it to fern and stark. and you said he's aura's brother so he can't be older than Frieren and befriend her when she hasn't been trained yet, which means even if they meet 500 years ago before the story starts in canon, Frieren would still kill him on the spot. Frieren wouldn't trust a single word that would come out of his mouth as her master taught her that the greatest weapon a demon possesses is not their magic or strength, but their words. so how? here's 5 stars for answering my question.
Ngl bro, this fanfic kinda fell off on the later chapters. The starting was really good with his and aura's relationship and him being a demon and all, but then this quickly turned into a self insert of an OC character in the original plotline. It's not like the story is bad or nothing, but the story is progressing exactly like the original plotline and it's honestly kinda boring. I thought him being a demon would a big plot point but nah, MC learned how to hide his features and quickly blended in with humans. All in all, this fanfic is fine if you want to read a OP self insert character in the original plotline with minimal changes to the story. P.s. It hasn't been revealed to the point I have read but with MC being a father figure to Fern, it's lowkey weird how author is pushing something between them.
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Well, it's one of those works that I look forward to updating every day. Thanks to the author for the translation.
I honestly don't even know what to say about how incredible this story is, just unbelievable. The best story I've ever read, I hope you don't abandon it and continue as long as your creativity allows.
It's exceptional, it made me think about writing my own Frieren fanfic, since there aren't many, the relationship between the characters is described in an exceptional way, keep it up!
now then for the usual, read the fanfic before the original, its a weird feeling to know and also not to know what the heck your reading, its just like that time i read honkai invictus haha i didnt even know what a fanfic was back then and thought it was a novel, anyways suggest you guys try it out (the strangeness is what makes me do it).
It looks really good so far, I hope it stays that way. I really liked how the demons were portrayed.
This is a great work! Although I know little about this anime, the work is written well. It even encourages you to watch the original anime. There is humor, almost no system that was actually forgotten or planned for later. Definitely the best work on this fandom for me. I will wait for the continuation.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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I just love the book. The mc Ash just going through life. The emotional pull to the characters around him. Some spelling mistakes here and there. Would say some knowledge needed of the original story, or else it is a little bit difficult to follow, but very light. Thank you, author. love your story
The fanfic is really good. The only thing I'm not happy with is the pace of the plot. I recommend reading it.
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love the interaction of the characters and good grammar. no awkward forced plot either. and the development of the story is pretty good. and good update consistency.
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A fanfic with minimal system focus thus far and a good grasp on comedy between the MC and other characters. i quite enjoy it so far.
This is the type of novel you almost immediately know if it's for you or not. The protagonist is belittled by a sibling (?) who he fantasies about. His sibling is a Bakugo-like character that is insufferably arrogant and unlikable, continually stating that the protagonist should "kiss her feet" and worship the ground she walks on. I'm not going to pretend like that type of character doesn't have an audience, but it's just not for me. Other than that, the world is developed beyond the scope of the original material, and the writing quality is of a standard quality.
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That story has good content, but it also has a 'belly kink', I did not find it funny the first time nor the other times, also every time its brought up you can tell after a while that there won't be any advancement on the main content. Nobody like fillers and you make them even less interesting by either having Ash acting like a fool (letting himself bullied) and/or having him being full on with 'belly patting kink' with young girls. What's the point of publishing three chapters a day when two of them is similar filler/weird (kinkish) content than 2/3 of the one you wrote every other days of the week.
I don't even have anything to say, it's simply the best Frieren fanfic there is and I say that with complete certainty. It's a good fanfic in every way and it's still very consistent, I don't know how the author manages to write so many chapters and still be so good.
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Es extrañamente divertido, la historia está bien hecha, no hay errores en la escritura, y el ritmo no es ni demasiado lento ni demasiado rápido, si tuviera que darle una clasificación, diría que es una historia decente, muchísimo mejor que las historias de mierda que hay alrededor. Un 7/10, aunque es posible que la historia mejore en los próximos capítulos, por lo que, no es el puntaje final.
It’s good. The story is funny and entertaining, there doesn’t seem to be any romance whitch is a shame considering all the female characters he has met throughout his life. It’s lighthearted and follows the story for the most part. The only 2 complains I have is that the system is complete dogshit, it’s weak, it’s not omnipotent or at least powerful enough to not get affected by outside powers, it has honestly done nothing the entire story other let mc meet frieren 500 years back in Time and make him a lot weaker then he should be, had he not used it he would have had about 950 years more years to train so if you’re are looking for a broken mc then this isn’t it. Still like 3-4 people that can beat him if we ignore old demons nobody knows about. The other complain is how unchanging the mc is, 90 years he has lived and in those 90 years he hasn’t changed.
I think this is a really great fanfic. If you like slice of life genre, this is definitely for you. Neat plot, Impressive character development, world development, well... Nothing, this is fanfiction after all. And finally, compared to Akikan's always monotonous writing style novels, I prefer this writing style, come on did you see the character development? There is none. He only focuses on the main character.
uhmmm. haven't read it yet so I'll edit it later. but I'm a bit worried. how the hell did he befriend Frieren when she was taught by her master to kill demons on the spot? she even taught it to fern and stark. and you said he's aura's brother so he can't be older than Frieren and befriend her when she hasn't been trained yet, which means even if they meet 500 years ago before the story starts in canon, Frieren would still kill him on the spot. Frieren wouldn't trust a single word that would come out of his mouth as her master taught her that the greatest weapon a demon possesses is not their magic or strength, but their words. so how? here's 5 stars for answering my question.
Ngl bro, this fanfic kinda fell off on the later chapters. The starting was really good with his and aura's relationship and him being a demon and all, but then this quickly turned into a self insert of an OC character in the original plotline. It's not like the story is bad or nothing, but the story is progressing exactly like the original plotline and it's honestly kinda boring. I thought him being a demon would a big plot point but nah, MC learned how to hide his features and quickly blended in with humans. All in all, this fanfic is fine if you want to read a OP self insert character in the original plotline with minimal changes to the story. P.s. It hasn't been revealed to the point I have read but with MC being a father figure to Fern, it's lowkey weird how author is pushing something between them.
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Well, it's one of those works that I look forward to updating every day. Thanks to the author for the translation.
I honestly don't even know what to say about how incredible this story is, just unbelievable. The best story I've ever read, I hope you don't abandon it and continue as long as your creativity allows.
It's exceptional, it made me think about writing my own Frieren fanfic, since there aren't many, the relationship between the characters is described in an exceptional way, keep it up!
now then for the usual, read the fanfic before the original, its a weird feeling to know and also not to know what the heck your reading, its just like that time i read honkai invictus haha i didnt even know what a fanfic was back then and thought it was a novel, anyways suggest you guys try it out (the strangeness is what makes me do it).
It looks really good so far, I hope it stays that way. I really liked how the demons were portrayed.
This is a great work! Although I know little about this anime, the work is written well. It even encourages you to watch the original anime. There is humor, almost no system that was actually forgotten or planned for later. Definitely the best work on this fandom for me. I will wait for the continuation.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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I just love the book. The mc Ash just going through life. The emotional pull to the characters around him. Some spelling mistakes here and there. Would say some knowledge needed of the original story, or else it is a little bit difficult to follow, but very light. Thank you, author. love your story
The fanfic is really good. The only thing I'm not happy with is the pace of the plot. I recommend reading it.
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love the interaction of the characters and good grammar. no awkward forced plot either. and the development of the story is pretty good. and good update consistency.
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