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Çok güzel bir hayran kurgusu. Lütfen bırakmayın ve devam edin. Bu yazıyı kütüphaneme ekledim ve yeni bölümleri heyecanla bekliyorum. Başkalarının dediklerine asla aldırmayın. Bu sizin hayran olduğunuz bir serinin kitabını kendi düşünceleriniz yazmanız, zaten bu yüzden hayran kurgu yazılar deniyor. Beceriksiz sadece laf kalabalığı yapabilen toksik insanların sözlerini dinlemeyin ve yazınızı devam ettirin. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
if you can accept the unlogical story and character bere you can feel it to core .But I m out this bullshit
This is exactly what I want for a game of thrones story and I finally found it. You didn’t try to change it into modern ideals like trying to put women as an heir or something which I love just because feudal society would crumble and it’s one of the facts of the world and the time period wouldn’t allow it. Like lords can march their armies into battle and are more level headed and less likely to die off with their line because women may die in childbirth and boom no more of that line. Same with not introducing anything too modern or world breaking. Now you did hint at gun powder in the future but please don’t I like the setting of game of thrones and the time period please don’t change that and like you said he can do whatever he wants because he is OP which I also love but introduce guns to that and suddenly his line wouldn’t live too long or at least rule as a gunshot could kill them or whatever.
I don't think it's bad but not good either. I think the basic idea had very good potential. But it's more of a story that has an OP MC who will conquer everything with little difficulty. I missed the good depth in the story, too like in the politics. However, it is worth reading if you want a story where the MC is revolutionary, strong (OP), kingdom building, strengthening the bloodlines, no real difficulties or complications.
Devam etmelisin. Kesinlikle bırakma. Bu senin kitabın, Senin hayal dünyan 👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️😉👑😉👑😉👑❤️😉
Çok güzel bir hayran kurgusu. Lütfen bırakmayın ve devam edin. Bu yazıyı kütüphaneme ekledim ve yeni bölümleri heyecanla bekliyorum. Başkalarının dediklerine asla aldırmayın. Bu sizin hayran olduğunuz bir serinin kitabını kendi düşünceleriniz yazmanız, zaten bu yüzden hayran kurgu yazılar deniyor. Beceriksiz sadece laf kalabalığı yapabilen toksik insanların sözlerini dinlemeyin ve yazınızı devam ettirin. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
if you can accept the unlogical story and character bere you can feel it to core .But I m out this bullshit
This is exactly what I want for a game of thrones story and I finally found it. You didn’t try to change it into modern ideals like trying to put women as an heir or something which I love just because feudal society would crumble and it’s one of the facts of the world and the time period wouldn’t allow it. Like lords can march their armies into battle and are more level headed and less likely to die off with their line because women may die in childbirth and boom no more of that line. Same with not introducing anything too modern or world breaking. Now you did hint at gun powder in the future but please don’t I like the setting of game of thrones and the time period please don’t change that and like you said he can do whatever he wants because he is OP which I also love but introduce guns to that and suddenly his line wouldn’t live too long or at least rule as a gunshot could kill them or whatever.
I don't think it's bad but not good either. I think the basic idea had very good potential. But it's more of a story that has an OP MC who will conquer everything with little difficulty. I missed the good depth in the story, too like in the politics. However, it is worth reading if you want a story where the MC is revolutionary, strong (OP), kingdom building, strengthening the bloodlines, no real difficulties or complications.
Devam etmelisin. Kesinlikle bırakma. Bu senin kitabın, Senin hayal dünyan 👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉👑😉❤️👑❤️👑❤️👑❤️😉👑😉👑😉👑❤️😉