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Amazing but don’t Genderbender rimuru usually Genderbending Mc’s or major characters just don’t go well in stories probaly because they still have the same personality and it suddenly switches to a more feminine one when the author needs it so I’ll say it’ll probably be best just to make a hole new character rather then twisting a existing one to fit a role
Cool fic The world building is pretty great. The grammar starts off wonky, but improves really quickly. On an ideal day the mc would participate in an average coc attack, but he got strong before that, so i don't see it fitting unless the power scaling goes a bit tensura-fied, makes sense,ig. The characters on the coc side are a bit hollow, but what can you do if there are almost no named characters? not much. But i hope that the author touches on that later (no pressure). fem rimuru 👍👍 nevertheless, it's my favorite right now. Here be my stones.
10/10 would reccomand [img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins]
the only reason I am giving bc of update stability, but that had also been stabilized to a certain extent. After that, all I can say is that this is a really good to good one
Story is rushed at start just wanted to go Tensura part fast but also wanted to develop Clash of Clans world since it is also an important part of the story don't want it to end like HIM.
Absolute peak. Coc in tensura? Most insane idea ive read. Just the idea alone gives this novel a 5 stars. Just gotta hope it doesnt get dropped
This a shameless review from a novice author. I hope my attempt to write a Clash of Clans story is good; this story will take place in the Tensura world, and I am thinking about replacing the Death Continent with the Tensura world. Like how Overlord things worked. MC's father is Veladanava level (if not stronger being weird quirks.)
Amazing but don’t Genderbender rimuru usually Genderbending Mc’s or major characters just don’t go well in stories probaly because they still have the same personality and it suddenly switches to a more feminine one when the author needs it so I’ll say it’ll probably be best just to make a hole new character rather then twisting a existing one to fit a role
Cool fic The world building is pretty great. The grammar starts off wonky, but improves really quickly. On an ideal day the mc would participate in an average coc attack, but he got strong before that, so i don't see it fitting unless the power scaling goes a bit tensura-fied, makes sense,ig. The characters on the coc side are a bit hollow, but what can you do if there are almost no named characters? not much. But i hope that the author touches on that later (no pressure). fem rimuru 👍👍 nevertheless, it's my favorite right now. Here be my stones.
10/10 would reccomand [img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins]
the only reason I am giving bc of update stability, but that had also been stabilized to a certain extent. After that, all I can say is that this is a really good to good one
Story is rushed at start just wanted to go Tensura part fast but also wanted to develop Clash of Clans world since it is also an important part of the story don't want it to end like HIM.
Absolute peak. Coc in tensura? Most insane idea ive read. Just the idea alone gives this novel a 5 stars. Just gotta hope it doesnt get dropped
This a shameless review from a novice author. I hope my attempt to write a Clash of Clans story is good; this story will take place in the Tensura world, and I am thinking about replacing the Death Continent with the Tensura world. Like how Overlord things worked. MC's father is Veladanava level (if not stronger being weird quirks.)