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While this is a very well written book.... cause its not fanfic. It all over the fuking place. One moment hes being taught how trained how to use shadows then hes traveling to nevermore then hes in shanghai hunting monsters then hes gonna join a monster hunt team.... one moment shadows are bad then they are good then they are bad then they are his power so their good. This is all over the place giving the reader very little time to understand anything . one moment hes gonna fight the shadow monsters then hes never gonna do it cause waah. It just crazy how many times something changes in a split second. And i think its to keep the stupid angsty dark atmosphere not actually plot related.
"Hi, good day from the author! I would appreciate your comments and reviews on how you find the story so far and where you think I might be taking it"
Hello author, it's been a while, just wanted to ask, will you ever update Arthur Belmont-Prince? If not, I just have one question, what exactly is the dynamic between Severus Snape and Lily Evans in this universe? Is Voldemort really dead? What truly happened to Sev? Please answer, looking forward to your response.
will you continue updating this book or not because I am being to like this book alot
While this is a very well written book.... cause its not fanfic. It all over the fuking place. One moment hes being taught how trained how to use shadows then hes traveling to nevermore then hes in shanghai hunting monsters then hes gonna join a monster hunt team.... one moment shadows are bad then they are good then they are bad then they are his power so their good. This is all over the place giving the reader very little time to understand anything . one moment hes gonna fight the shadow monsters then hes never gonna do it cause waah. It just crazy how many times something changes in a split second. And i think its to keep the stupid angsty dark atmosphere not actually plot related.
"Hi, good day from the author! I would appreciate your comments and reviews on how you find the story so far and where you think I might be taking it"
Hello author, it's been a while, just wanted to ask, will you ever update Arthur Belmont-Prince? If not, I just have one question, what exactly is the dynamic between Severus Snape and Lily Evans in this universe? Is Voldemort really dead? What truly happened to Sev? Please answer, looking forward to your response.
will you continue updating this book or not because I am being to like this book alot