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Interesting idea, but you've ruined it. If you cut out half of the fanfic, it will only get better, add an idiot protagonist to it and it will be a total package
first when I started it i thought it was good but you ruined it by making mc stupid First you tell us that mc knows about yuji and others he also knows about cursed technique that they are inherent and then you show us he can learn all the techniques using points also what hell is the logic with black flash if you are giving mc its power then explain properly that black flash can only be used until your reserves of CE are remaining but what you did was just tell us that he can only do 6 black flash or 12 in later chapter are you retard or something jjk manga is finished just read it and then write it with dedicated heart not some half assed motivation plz
Interesting idea, but you've ruined it. If you cut out half of the fanfic, it will only get better, add an idiot protagonist to it and it will be a total package
first when I started it i thought it was good but you ruined it by making mc stupid First you tell us that mc knows about yuji and others he also knows about cursed technique that they are inherent and then you show us he can learn all the techniques using points also what hell is the logic with black flash if you are giving mc its power then explain properly that black flash can only be used until your reserves of CE are remaining but what you did was just tell us that he can only do 6 black flash or 12 in later chapter are you retard or something jjk manga is finished just read it and then write it with dedicated heart not some half assed motivation plz