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I'm here to support my bro. Anyway, good story. Great potential. Author writing style is good and easy to understand and fun. Overall, nice story. I highly recommend readers to give it a try.
I like it, MC has done a few classic things to make his life harder for absolutely no reason which is annoying. Also not sure about the xp, feels like it would be essentially impossible for anyone who didn't come from a rich family to advance tiers, it is obvious there are some tricks for the rich at this point but it is still completely absurd that anyone his age is anywhere near his tier progress. Money is allowing people to advance over 1000x faster than others seems kind of nuts. Through actually killing primals getting to tier 3 sounds like some that would take closer to 100 years than 10 lol. But these are nitpicks there is plenty we don't know yet. I enjoy the story and the writing is well done
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I want to use this as Q&A thread. If you have anything to ask go ahead, comment it down. And I also wanna use this to stop idiots from assuming they know everything as if they are the author. I know my supporters, you'll be instantly block if you just came for free reading and saying bunch of idiotic stuffs when I never felt your support, you have no right. So just hold on to your smartass comment, if you think you are better go write on your own.
Story, characters and world building have a strong start. Even though comedy is not one of the tags, the author’s sense of humor shines through without being forced or overdone. Mc’s skills are op without being ridiculous. He quickly learns he isn’t invincible. MC is one of the rare smart leads 💜. I do not like romance stories because I have yet to read one that is not forced or childish. It’s too early to tell if that is the case here. I strongly recommend giving this a try. This is the first review I have ever written. I hope it helps 😁!
I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥
The premise of Vincent Magnus and his ability to accumulate experience at such an enormous rate is fascinating. I love how advanced technology blends with a universe full of monstrous creatures and intergalactic challenges. The idea that every small action can have such a big impact on his progress is truly original and exciting. I can't wait to see how Vincent handles his power and faces the threats that come his way. I’m definitely looking forward to diving into the world of Astrum and following his epic rise!
Nice Story Author 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 with nice pacing and I like that the system does not have intelligence and it is just for showing stats and progress...
This story is wow, it felt like the chapters came alive. Kudos to the author👍, your writing skills is really impressive.
Nice initial chapters, it started good. It has a lot of potential. Gonna watch for more chapters. Keep it up, don't drop this! I will be waiting!
I'm really amazed at how the author blends between both description and dialogues of the characters in the novel. It's really an intriguing book. Kudos author!
There's only few chapters, too few! I'll be supporting this. The characters are quite interesting, the plot has potential. Overall, huge potential to trend.
Story has a lot of potential. A question I have regarding the main character. Is his last name Magnus a reference in anyway to the Magnus from The Mortal Instruments book series?
This was a great start for a book! I loved the way the author introduced the characters while giving a unique personality to each of them. Please keep updating more.
This one is looking gud It has a good start, good potential. Characters are not looking bad, not hollow, they have their own personality I like it, give it a try you might like it too
This one has a good potential. Leaving this review for now. Highly recommended for fantasy reader! Add this to your collection as well! The relationship interaction has potential!
You know I'm shameless! 🤣 Anyway, what to expect? Overpowered MC? Yes but logically. Stupid MC? No. Harem? No. Romance? Yes. Outlined Plot? Yes. Just want to clarify, there will be several characters that might like or fall in love to the Main Character, but this won't be a harem.
I'm here to support my bro. Anyway, good story. Great potential. Author writing style is good and easy to understand and fun. Overall, nice story. I highly recommend readers to give it a try.
I like it, MC has done a few classic things to make his life harder for absolutely no reason which is annoying. Also not sure about the xp, feels like it would be essentially impossible for anyone who didn't come from a rich family to advance tiers, it is obvious there are some tricks for the rich at this point but it is still completely absurd that anyone his age is anywhere near his tier progress. Money is allowing people to advance over 1000x faster than others seems kind of nuts. Through actually killing primals getting to tier 3 sounds like some that would take closer to 100 years than 10 lol. But these are nitpicks there is plenty we don't know yet. I enjoy the story and the writing is well done
ネタバレを明かす I want to use this as Q&A thread. If you have anything to ask go ahead, comment it down. And I also wanna use this to stop idiots from assuming they know everything as if they are the author. I know my supporters, you'll be instantly block if you just came for free reading and saying bunch of idiotic stuffs when I never felt your support, you have no right. So just hold on to your smartass comment, if you think you are better go write on your own.
Story, characters and world building have a strong start. Even though comedy is not one of the tags, the author’s sense of humor shines through without being forced or overdone. Mc’s skills are op without being ridiculous. He quickly learns he isn’t invincible. MC is one of the rare smart leads 💜. I do not like romance stories because I have yet to read one that is not forced or childish. It’s too early to tell if that is the case here. I strongly recommend giving this a try. This is the first review I have ever written. I hope it helps 😁!
I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update 🔥
The premise of Vincent Magnus and his ability to accumulate experience at such an enormous rate is fascinating. I love how advanced technology blends with a universe full of monstrous creatures and intergalactic challenges. The idea that every small action can have such a big impact on his progress is truly original and exciting. I can't wait to see how Vincent handles his power and faces the threats that come his way. I’m definitely looking forward to diving into the world of Astrum and following his epic rise!
Nice Story Author 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 with nice pacing and I like that the system does not have intelligence and it is just for showing stats and progress...
This story is wow, it felt like the chapters came alive. Kudos to the author👍, your writing skills is really impressive.
Nice initial chapters, it started good. It has a lot of potential. Gonna watch for more chapters. Keep it up, don't drop this! I will be waiting!
I'm really amazed at how the author blends between both description and dialogues of the characters in the novel. It's really an intriguing book. Kudos author!
There's only few chapters, too few! I'll be supporting this. The characters are quite interesting, the plot has potential. Overall, huge potential to trend.
Story has a lot of potential. A question I have regarding the main character. Is his last name Magnus a reference in anyway to the Magnus from The Mortal Instruments book series?
This was a great start for a book! I loved the way the author introduced the characters while giving a unique personality to each of them. Please keep updating more.
This one is looking gud It has a good start, good potential. Characters are not looking bad, not hollow, they have their own personality I like it, give it a try you might like it too
This one has a good potential. Leaving this review for now. Highly recommended for fantasy reader! Add this to your collection as well! The relationship interaction has potential!
You know I'm shameless! 🤣 Anyway, what to expect? Overpowered MC? Yes but logically. Stupid MC? No. Harem? No. Romance? Yes. Outlined Plot? Yes. Just want to clarify, there will be several characters that might like or fall in love to the Main Character, but this won't be a harem.
NAAAAAANIIIIIIII! this is sick dude! As hell!