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i think it has been going well and really good story i wish a few moments where slowed down and expanded and built up but other than that i really liked it so i recommend it
please change the ending of chapter 16! the main character does need a female companion to help him in his journey or make it that he does find one in the future
As the author of this book, I personally feel that character development is an area where I can improve. Currently, I would rate the story 4.5 out of 5. If readers have any questions or feedback, feel free to leave a comment here or in the chapter comments. Thank you so much for visiting and supporting my book! One more request: I hope those who use AI can create images of Indian characters and share them in the chapter comments. If the book becomes contracted, those images may serve as official character representations. Thank you for your support and understanding.
It was certainly very interesting reading the story starting pre independence. keep up the good work author
Here the type you find appealing in the independence struggle era. Its a good novel of nation building and a good read. I suggest author to not repeat the arguments or if it is repeated please state the reason for it... I personally recommend and praise authors approach to make a single religious nation: Its bettor to manage.
Story is just starting but it is best and my favourite type. It has unique elements which I like.
i think it has been going well and really good story i wish a few moments where slowed down and expanded and built up but other than that i really liked it so i recommend it
please change the ending of chapter 16! the main character does need a female companion to help him in his journey or make it that he does find one in the future
As the author of this book, I personally feel that character development is an area where I can improve. Currently, I would rate the story 4.5 out of 5. If readers have any questions or feedback, feel free to leave a comment here or in the chapter comments. Thank you so much for visiting and supporting my book! One more request: I hope those who use AI can create images of Indian characters and share them in the chapter comments. If the book becomes contracted, those images may serve as official character representations. Thank you for your support and understanding.
It was certainly very interesting reading the story starting pre independence. keep up the good work author
Here the type you find appealing in the independence struggle era. Its a good novel of nation building and a good read. I suggest author to not repeat the arguments or if it is repeated please state the reason for it... I personally recommend and praise authors approach to make a single religious nation: Its bettor to manage.
Story is just starting but it is best and my favourite type. It has unique elements which I like.