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Author I was honestly thinking this will not be good but I like the concept. You should polish the story a little more but overall its amazing. I love the two world concept....I really do hope eventually you include some nice harem and romance in the cultivation world and not empty vases. But something which he has to work towards. They cant just see him and be like omg i love you. He has to get stronger, show his capabilities, spend some time going to secret realm etc and then whoever he pursues starting from friends first start to develop feelings. Also you have to make a harem which isnt useless but also grow alongside him and help him grow his sect/businesses etc. I mean if you can show real relationships developing through hardwork and supporting each other that would be awesome
Please keep writing more ! I want more chapters 5000+ ! The story is too good and you should really write a lot more chapters. I also like how mc is using all his resources instead of just relying on himself
You know a lot of stories MC is stupid but this one he isnt ! I am surprised that you made mc smart because it seems like a lot of authors make MC do stupid stuff
One of the hidden gems ! It does need some polishing where you expand a little more on somethings and dont skip and write a little more but overall its a solid good story
so far so good the writing can be improved but it's really just some name flips and race changes here or there and the wrong placement of words that mess up the flow Abita but other then that the pacing is fine so far it's fun and I'm engaged would recommend
This is new and so far I like your approach to the story! MC is smart and diligent. He knows his capabilities and isnt trying to rush to face immortal cultivators. I also hope eventually you show how cultivators are way stronger then grandmaster in general. Usually immortal cultivators can use qi and mortal cultivators can not and cultivators are supposed to be a lot stronger then mortal practioners. I hope you can show why there is a difference since somehow you included that mortal practioners can use qi eventually but you can explain it that their technique allows them to gather impure qi vs pure and this makes mortal weaker then immortal cultivators
Author this is a hidden gem ! I mean you hardly find writing quality like this with smart Mc usually and I am glad I discovered I like how this mixes aura, qi and possibly mana as well in future and the business expansion, establishing commerce is awesome as well. I like how MC utilizes his family, and subordinates to grow Also the way he is establishing himself and power in the other world as well. MC so far is intelligent, uses his resources well and is pretty smart overall
Je ne mais pas 5 étoiles car il n'y a pas encore assez de chapitres pour ce faire une idée globale de l'histoire Je suis au chapitre 37 pour le moment et l'histoire est super 👍
Not my cup of tea. But I think people under the age of 25 might like reading this. Just a gut feeling. Seems to be written by a young guy. Anyways, give it a try. I didn't like it much. You might love it.
Author I was honestly thinking this will not be good but I like the concept. You should polish the story a little more but overall its amazing. I love the two world concept....I really do hope eventually you include some nice harem and romance in the cultivation world and not empty vases. But something which he has to work towards. They cant just see him and be like omg i love you. He has to get stronger, show his capabilities, spend some time going to secret realm etc and then whoever he pursues starting from friends first start to develop feelings. Also you have to make a harem which isnt useless but also grow alongside him and help him grow his sect/businesses etc. I mean if you can show real relationships developing through hardwork and supporting each other that would be awesome
Please keep writing more ! I want more chapters 5000+ ! The story is too good and you should really write a lot more chapters. I also like how mc is using all his resources instead of just relying on himself
You know a lot of stories MC is stupid but this one he isnt ! I am surprised that you made mc smart because it seems like a lot of authors make MC do stupid stuff
One of the hidden gems ! It does need some polishing where you expand a little more on somethings and dont skip and write a little more but overall its a solid good story
so far so good the writing can be improved but it's really just some name flips and race changes here or there and the wrong placement of words that mess up the flow Abita but other then that the pacing is fine so far it's fun and I'm engaged would recommend
This is new and so far I like your approach to the story! MC is smart and diligent. He knows his capabilities and isnt trying to rush to face immortal cultivators. I also hope eventually you show how cultivators are way stronger then grandmaster in general. Usually immortal cultivators can use qi and mortal cultivators can not and cultivators are supposed to be a lot stronger then mortal practioners. I hope you can show why there is a difference since somehow you included that mortal practioners can use qi eventually but you can explain it that their technique allows them to gather impure qi vs pure and this makes mortal weaker then immortal cultivators
Author this is a hidden gem ! I mean you hardly find writing quality like this with smart Mc usually and I am glad I discovered I like how this mixes aura, qi and possibly mana as well in future and the business expansion, establishing commerce is awesome as well. I like how MC utilizes his family, and subordinates to grow Also the way he is establishing himself and power in the other world as well. MC so far is intelligent, uses his resources well and is pretty smart overall
Je ne mais pas 5 étoiles car il n'y a pas encore assez de chapitres pour ce faire une idée globale de l'histoire Je suis au chapitre 37 pour le moment et l'histoire est super 👍
Not my cup of tea. But I think people under the age of 25 might like reading this. Just a gut feeling. Seems to be written by a young guy. Anyways, give it a try. I didn't like it much. You might love it.