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It is first Harry Potter fanfic where Mc is from noble house of Black and l love that Idea .I don't want to discourage you but try better next time ( My English is not very good so you can understand 😅)
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this has all the flags for stollen content. every so often a paragraph will repeat or a line will repeat a paragraph or 2 down from the original. could also just he shit a.i. too either way this ain't a good book
its like a chinese faceslapping novel. the mc just goes around beating people up with superior magic and is always put in a situation where he beats someone every chatper so the side characters go "wow how is he so skilled already"
Bro, I got to be honest the conversation between character is kind a bland and the whole angle explaining the talent of mc thing was unnecessary. The English needs slight improvement though it is understandable , it ruins the immersion I will give it a try again if story improves
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Shameless author here. If you do read this, thank you for your time. Unfortunately lam not the most reliable person when it comes to updates And my English is not that good، This is a story where the Mc has to make a fundamentally flawed movement succeed when practically the entire world is against it So hope you enjoy.
É sério que ele vai sair por aí dizendo que é um Black!? O MC é totalmente sem inteligência. Ele sai pelo mundo mágico literalmente dizendo que é filho de Sirius, alguém que é considerado um criminoso no mundo mágico.
It is first Harry Potter fanfic where Mc is from noble house of Black and l love that Idea .I don't want to discourage you but try better next time ( My English is not very good so you can understand 😅)
Trop bizarre les discussions à refaire [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
this has all the flags for stollen content. every so often a paragraph will repeat or a line will repeat a paragraph or 2 down from the original. could also just he shit a.i. too either way this ain't a good book
its like a chinese faceslapping novel. the mc just goes around beating people up with superior magic and is always put in a situation where he beats someone every chatper so the side characters go "wow how is he so skilled already"
Bro, I got to be honest the conversation between character is kind a bland and the whole angle explaining the talent of mc thing was unnecessary. The English needs slight improvement though it is understandable , it ruins the immersion I will give it a try again if story improves
ネタバレを明かす Shameless author here. If you do read this, thank you for your time. Unfortunately lam not the most reliable person when it comes to updates And my English is not that good، This is a story where the Mc has to make a fundamentally flawed movement succeed when practically the entire world is against it So hope you enjoy.
É sério que ele vai sair por aí dizendo que é um Black!? O MC é totalmente sem inteligência. Ele sai pelo mundo mágico literalmente dizendo que é filho de Sirius, alguém que é considerado um criminoso no mundo mágico.