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at first i thought this fic is fiing to be good but evrything feel forced after that
MC character is good... and background of naruto is also good. but timeliness does not feel right.
Good progress still I can't imagine how why mc still didn't kill itachi the traitor and Danzou the Hiruzen's black sheep sacrifice?.... Eliminate this two would allow the Uchiha to breathe more in Konoha's
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Terrible.. this Chinese troupe is the strongest I’ve ever read.. plot is forced and the plot overall is just bs. I was gonna try it cuz I was running out of readable novels, but I just couldn’t keep going.. trash
Story is total bs. Translation wise it’s standard for Webnovel, not truly awful but not good either. The content is just pretty badly thought up. We have the Mc that’s being looked down upon because he has 2 pupils in each eye (normally the uchiha would probably be happy about that genetic ‘defect’ lol) and is being bullied by the literally everyone and then we also have characters that are the complete opposite of their canon counter parts with itachi being a true young master in this fic which is totally annoying to read… All in all just drop this if you’re thinking of reading a Chinese story to kill time.. it’ll save some braincells
é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso, é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso
If anyone knows the title of original or mtl - please write , id like to read ahead...................................................................
typical Chinese fanfic with sentences such as "you are courting dead", "don't blame me for being impolite" and have Itachi with the "young master" personality.
Is this a translation or one of your originals? If it is a translation I would like to know the source
the plot feels very forced ,like the fact that everyone looks down on him, as well as the fact the character don't act like themselves, which could be remedied by calling this au so it's a minor issue
The concept is decent but some of the characters are so different and OOC that it is weird. Like Itachi is acting like a young master and it is just hard to read.
will wait for this story to be interesting. I am curious about how he will act.
many characters are forced to get different personalities. and to slow paced for my liking. quality is good tho
at first i thought this fic is fiing to be good but evrything feel forced after that
MC character is good... and background of naruto is also good. but timeliness does not feel right.
Good progress still I can't imagine how why mc still didn't kill itachi the traitor and Danzou the Hiruzen's black sheep sacrifice?.... Eliminate this two would allow the Uchiha to breathe more in Konoha's
Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................Since Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................ is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................Since everyone is saying its bad ima assume its bad................................................................................................
Terrible.. this Chinese troupe is the strongest I’ve ever read.. plot is forced and the plot overall is just bs. I was gonna try it cuz I was running out of readable novels, but I just couldn’t keep going.. trash
Story is total bs. Translation wise it’s standard for Webnovel, not truly awful but not good either. The content is just pretty badly thought up. We have the Mc that’s being looked down upon because he has 2 pupils in each eye (normally the uchiha would probably be happy about that genetic ‘defect’ lol) and is being bullied by the literally everyone and then we also have characters that are the complete opposite of their canon counter parts with itachi being a true young master in this fic which is totally annoying to read… All in all just drop this if you’re thinking of reading a Chinese story to kill time.. it’ll save some braincells
é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso, é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso
If anyone knows the title of original or mtl - please write , id like to read ahead...................................................................
typical Chinese fanfic with sentences such as "you are courting dead", "don't blame me for being impolite" and have Itachi with the "young master" personality.
Is this a translation or one of your originals? If it is a translation I would like to know the source
the plot feels very forced ,like the fact that everyone looks down on him, as well as the fact the character don't act like themselves, which could be remedied by calling this au so it's a minor issue
The concept is decent but some of the characters are so different and OOC that it is weird. Like Itachi is acting like a young master and it is just hard to read.
will wait for this story to be interesting. I am curious about how he will act.
many characters are forced to get different personalities. and to slow paced for my liking. quality is good tho