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okay romance feel forced they're ninjas and no experince even shoi?? Then something that got me annoyed was him getting pushed yelled at and pushed for kissing hannabi stood there saying ouch, acting like that wasn't or didn't seem like an rejection you had to fix that author cmon i feel its an 1 star, But its an high 2 only because writting decents and update stabillity.
at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time.... at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time.... at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time....
Good potential, going to let it marinate for awhile. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Tem um bom potencial adorei até agora e uma boa história por enquanto kkk It has good potential, I've loved it so far and a good story so far lol
Author the story was going on so good why did u drop this peak level story...... 😞😞. I have been searching for post naruto fan fiction and whenever I find one in the end it gets dropped☹️☹️
okay romance feel forced they're ninjas and no experince even shoi?? Then something that got me annoyed was him getting pushed yelled at and pushed for kissing hannabi stood there saying ouch, acting like that wasn't or didn't seem like an rejection you had to fix that author cmon i feel its an 1 star, But its an high 2 only because writting decents and update stabillity.
at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time.... at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time.... at chapter 21 and all i can say its a waste of time....
Good potential, going to let it marinate for awhile. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Tem um bom potencial adorei até agora e uma boa história por enquanto kkk It has good potential, I've loved it so far and a good story so far lol
Author the story was going on so good why did u drop this peak level story...... 😞😞. I have been searching for post naruto fan fiction and whenever I find one in the end it gets dropped☹️☹️