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This seems like a ripoff of 'My 3 Beautiful Vampire Wives' by Victor Weismann cuz plot seems similar: MC stalked by different race member since young age then when said different race tries to change MC's race and bind him in a contract to them the contract goes awry and different race members friends get bound to MC as additional wives. At least one of the female leads are yanderes and the MC himself is a yandere. As contract went awry MC ends up as a higher ranking member of the race he changed to with possibilities of having multiple bloodline abilities from female lead's clans/families which is not meant to be possible by novel world logic. MC is also battle maniac
gran novela , siendo lector de MTWBV la verdad que el mundo y personajes son muy parecidos pero mucho mejores que la original , tiene mucho potencial
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A good read for now. One of those books you can read without worrying. Grammar - 5 Stars [img=update] Characters - 5 Stars [img=proud] Plot - 5 Stars [img=recommend]
I'm at lost of words, I read this novel because I've read the previous works of the authors and liked them and because I thought the plot was similar to MTWABV but it turned to be better than a novel with just a plot similar to to MTWABV it has its own plot and twists I really liked reading. Highly recommended I'm feeling the same when I was reading MTWABV which was my first WebNovel hope the author continues to update chaps regularly.
I’m really enjoying the story so far even tho only 12 chapters are released I will be following this book and waiting to see what happens
Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I do them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thank you for reading! I will leave a warning here... Well, the inspiration is obvious, but I will not limit myself to just that. Have a good reading!
All I gotta say is that this novel of yours has a striking resemblance to MTWABV, the best example of this when Vergil and Sapphire met each other like Victor and Scathach but in a much better way. And also how he met Ada, Katherine, and Roxanne which is also pretty similar to how Victor met Violet, Ruby, and Sasha and it's also the fact that both of them are battle maniacs. But this is definitely better than the start of MTWABV in my humble opinion since Vergil's father is dead, and some of you may relate to this because- well you might already know what I'm talking about... So anyway, so far so good and I'm glad the harem won't be that big since as you have said that only 9-16 members will be in his harem if I remember correctly (or maybe it will get bigger but who knows?) and the grammar is also much better than MTWABV but I'm no expert because my English is average at best since it's not my first language either but it's definitely better. (I won't mind Felicia ({Vergil's mother}) getting in the harem since there's no father in this one but the others might not like it or maybe they will because I don't see any man as a perfect fit for her ({for now that is and this is also my lower part thinking}). And since she's still single I most preferably prefer that she stays single if you don't plan on putting her in the harem but this ain't my novel so who am I to say this?) Anyway, this is my review without actually saying what made this better than MTWABV or how the story actually goes but I'm too lazy for that🤣.
This seems like a ripoff of 'My 3 Beautiful Vampire Wives' by Victor Weismann cuz plot seems similar: MC stalked by different race member since young age then when said different race tries to change MC's race and bind him in a contract to them the contract goes awry and different race members friends get bound to MC as additional wives. At least one of the female leads are yanderes and the MC himself is a yandere. As contract went awry MC ends up as a higher ranking member of the race he changed to with possibilities of having multiple bloodline abilities from female lead's clans/families which is not meant to be possible by novel world logic. MC is also battle maniac
gran novela , siendo lector de MTWBV la verdad que el mundo y personajes son muy parecidos pero mucho mejores que la original , tiene mucho potencial
ネタバレを明かす A good read for now. One of those books you can read without worrying. Grammar - 5 Stars [img=update] Characters - 5 Stars [img=proud] Plot - 5 Stars [img=recommend]
I'm at lost of words, I read this novel because I've read the previous works of the authors and liked them and because I thought the plot was similar to MTWABV but it turned to be better than a novel with just a plot similar to to MTWABV it has its own plot and twists I really liked reading. Highly recommended I'm feeling the same when I was reading MTWABV which was my first WebNovel hope the author continues to update chaps regularly.
I’m really enjoying the story so far even tho only 12 chapters are released I will be following this book and waiting to see what happens
Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I do them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thank you for reading! I will leave a warning here... Well, the inspiration is obvious, but I will not limit myself to just that. Have a good reading!
All I gotta say is that this novel of yours has a striking resemblance to MTWABV, the best example of this when Vergil and Sapphire met each other like Victor and Scathach but in a much better way. And also how he met Ada, Katherine, and Roxanne which is also pretty similar to how Victor met Violet, Ruby, and Sasha and it's also the fact that both of them are battle maniacs. But this is definitely better than the start of MTWABV in my humble opinion since Vergil's father is dead, and some of you may relate to this because- well you might already know what I'm talking about... So anyway, so far so good and I'm glad the harem won't be that big since as you have said that only 9-16 members will be in his harem if I remember correctly (or maybe it will get bigger but who knows?) and the grammar is also much better than MTWABV but I'm no expert because my English is average at best since it's not my first language either but it's definitely better. (I won't mind Felicia ({Vergil's mother}) getting in the harem since there's no father in this one but the others might not like it or maybe they will because I don't see any man as a perfect fit for her ({for now that is and this is also my lower part thinking}). And since she's still single I most preferably prefer that she stays single if you don't plan on putting her in the harem but this ain't my novel so who am I to say this?) Anyway, this is my review without actually saying what made this better than MTWABV or how the story actually goes but I'm too lazy for that🤣.