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live it but can u update it more chapters love it btw [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Bro so far I have read 7 chp and to tell you the truth it's great potential and so fer it's great
good start, the naruto in this fan-fic is a bit edgey but the characters act like themselves and the training with the lessons the three kunoichis make sense
Ya I agree with the other guys review unfortunately. Things were going great and the writing was actually well done but clones just arnt my thing. Still left you with 4 stars though cause while it's not my cup of tea and I won't be reading the overall quality of your work is still good. Best of luck :)
I am Seven Chapter in and I am very invested in the story and if it is dropped then
live it but can u update it more chapters love it btw [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Bro so far I have read 7 chp and to tell you the truth it's great potential and so fer it's great
good start, the naruto in this fan-fic is a bit edgey but the characters act like themselves and the training with the lessons the three kunoichis make sense
Ya I agree with the other guys review unfortunately. Things were going great and the writing was actually well done but clones just arnt my thing. Still left you with 4 stars though cause while it's not my cup of tea and I won't be reading the overall quality of your work is still good. Best of luck :)
I am Seven Chapter in and I am very invested in the story and if it is dropped then