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Hi bro, loved this. Though it is in the begging stage, I can envision a great future ahead. Just a few pointers:- 1. Please just don't make it your niche system novel and copy from others 2. I hope there are not 18+ and harem elements (harem should absolutely not be there because women are treated as Devi in Hinduism as u know) 3. In swarga, only the Devas should live (Not The Tridevs because you know that there is a difference between the real God(Param Brahman) and Devas.) 4. And I hope that the protagonist doesn't becomes a power hungry and arrogant bastard in the end 🙏🏻 Best wishes, Jay Shree Ram
bro, I am truly infatuated with this novel and I want you to upload more chapters frequently this story has huge potential in it but you have to make sure there is no wrong ethics behind those fact you are delivering. happy to see Indian writers with their new content and i actually like ur another novel named ' a new India' .
Hi bro, loved this. Though it is in the begging stage, I can envision a great future ahead. Just a few pointers:- 1. Please just don't make it your niche system novel and copy from others 2. I hope there are not 18+ and harem elements (harem should absolutely not be there because women are treated as Devi in Hinduism as u know) 3. In swarga, only the Devas should live (Not The Tridevs because you know that there is a difference between the real God(Param Brahman) and Devas.) 4. And I hope that the protagonist doesn't becomes a power hungry and arrogant bastard in the end 🙏🏻 Best wishes, Jay Shree Ram
bro, I am truly infatuated with this novel and I want you to upload more chapters frequently this story has huge potential in it but you have to make sure there is no wrong ethics behind those fact you are delivering. happy to see Indian writers with their new content and i actually like ur another novel named ' a new India' .