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Cous pouvez mettre le lien ou le nom du roman original s'il vous plaît 🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰🥰🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰🥰🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻💪🏻😄😄😄🥰🥰💪🏻😄💪🏻😄💪🏻💪🏻😄😄🥰🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻💪🏻
its good so far you should read it in my opinion cause there aren't many fan fic where the mc is kakashi
The premise is good but there too much unnecessary wording. Typical of AI assisted writing. The author should consider doing a complete rewrite without more authentic writing.
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Cous pouvez mettre le lien ou le nom du roman original s'il vous plaît 🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰🥰🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰🥰🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻💪🏻😄😄😄🥰🥰💪🏻😄💪🏻😄💪🏻💪🏻😄😄🥰🥰💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻💪🏻😄😄🥰💪🏻💪🏻
its good so far you should read it in my opinion cause there aren't many fan fic where the mc is kakashi
The premise is good but there too much unnecessary wording. Typical of AI assisted writing. The author should consider doing a complete rewrite without more authentic writing.