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I quite like this one it’s well written with a few errors but cmon this isn’t a published novel. Now not sure how the systems going to go but idk the pacing with showing stats is good now abilities I think should be shown again I completely forget what he can spend sp on or what he spent it on. I like the mc they have some depth I just beg they don’t become a cringe antihero but it doesn’t look like it’s going in that direction so I’m eternally grateful. Just some advice to the author your totally going to get hate from the book people if you use the show but who cares just do whatever you think is best.
I hope it's not about the series, so far it has good writing although with a few small errors, but nothing that interrupts the reading. but the level of detail he sometimes adds is a plus.
This is the first Rings Of Power fanfic, so far I'm very satisfied with the storyline, if anyone reads my comments please give me some good RoP fanfic titles?🙏🙏🙏
I quite like this one it’s well written with a few errors but cmon this isn’t a published novel. Now not sure how the systems going to go but idk the pacing with showing stats is good now abilities I think should be shown again I completely forget what he can spend sp on or what he spent it on. I like the mc they have some depth I just beg they don’t become a cringe antihero but it doesn’t look like it’s going in that direction so I’m eternally grateful. Just some advice to the author your totally going to get hate from the book people if you use the show but who cares just do whatever you think is best.
I hope it's not about the series, so far it has good writing although with a few small errors, but nothing that interrupts the reading. but the level of detail he sometimes adds is a plus.
This is the first Rings Of Power fanfic, so far I'm very satisfied with the storyline, if anyone reads my comments please give me some good RoP fanfic titles?🙏🙏🙏