My Level Zero System

first your grammar is bad it's not ready belly if you don't understand the words time trying to me in you don't even understand meaning of the word sometime it doesn't even make sense so I think you have to focus on the work there and even if you trying to copy somebody else is work Buddh it properly if you want to translate themes themes use a proper app so you can do the work easily and there are lots and lots of problems here which makes your story like a Chinese f****** story which I think you took this from some kind of similar MPL based novel I can be wrong to but I am sure about more than 90%