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レビューを書くWe've Been Tricked, We've Been Backstabbed and We've Been, Quite Possibly, Bamboozled. FailedWriter101? My. Foot. So yeah, I stated the author was just a new author in my previous review. And I wasn't exactly wrong. But new facts have come to light that has made me review my opinion. The level of improvement this author has shown cannot be explained unless he is a 1000yr old master who is regaining his abilities after a long period of rest. The novel has shown such a stark improvement in the past month or so that I am left bewildered. So yeah, I stated this was a novel with good potential in my previous review. But so were 100s of other extra novels I have seen fail. But contrary to his pen name, this author has been an enormous success. The rate at which his popularity shot up is comparable to how well Extra's Descent did at its early stages. Could this novel be the second coming of ED(Extra's Descent)? Or wait, THIS NOVEL IS ED(Extra's Death). Oh my, oh my, do I smell a connection here? Mayhaps, mayhaps. Coincidence, I think NOT. Ahem, half-baked half-high detective stuff aside, lets move on to the novel. The writing quality has always been good, and it has only improved from the early chaps. In terms of update stability, the author is a beast of writing, maybe on magecrafter levels but he did manage to reach the 100 chapter mark in just a little over a month of beginning to write. That is plenty commendable in my humble opinion. In terms of story development and world background, top notch, as always. From the very beginning it was very clear that the author has put much thought into these aspects. Moving on to the most important factor, character design. The extra trope is a washed and repeated trope on this platform. I have read 100s of novels of the theme, and the one of the, if not the only part that always stays as the deciding factor whether or not an extra novel succeeds is always the character designs. AND THIS NOVEL EXCELS AT THIS. Hot mommy? Check. Hot daughter of hot mommy who is a senior at the academy? Check. Hot OP girl from the same year? Check.(best girl btw) Wait, wait, wait. Just because I only listed the female characters doesn't mean this novel is a harem or that there are no important male characters. It's just that I focus on the female characters more. The male characters well, uhh, they exist. They... do stuff?(icl, i havent even looked at their character arts). At any case, they are important to the plot and are good characters too(i am pretty sure). CONCLUSION: So, well, yeah, that's about it. If you are into novels of this type(with extras, and weak to strong mc, and academy arcs), I would 10/10 rec this to you. But if you are here because you are into mythos, then well, there hasn't been much to see for now. I mean, we haven't even seen hades yet and that guy's name is a part of the novel's name. So in the end whether or not you will like this novel depends on what you are looking for. One thing I can assure you though is the fact that you won't dislike this novel even if it isn't what you want to read. Finally, I would like to mention(threaten) the author by saying that I will [REDACTED] his ahh with my [REDACTED] if Morrigan di Montaigne ain't the fml.
Aight, Young Sosa on the review h o *. Alright listen, if you stalking my profile and saw that MABI review where I said that I seldom review novels and see me reviewing this novel hours later then let me clarify. First, I just thought that since it's Sunday let me review all the novels that I found peak. Don't worry, after 1 or 2 reviews after this, you won't see reviews from me in a long time. Anyways, like I previously said, if you see me reviewing any novel with 5 on it, yeah it's good so just try it. PTSD (Yeah, I still can't remember the name and I'm high so just go with this) at the end. I'm not even a moderator for this novel or anything, so yeah, don't accuse me of glaz- Ring...Ring. Just a second. Yes? Oh.. Yeah, I see. I gotchu. See, it's my homie so.... KRISPY KREME DONUTS, WE GLAZIN Just kidding, my boy and this novel so good, that my genuine praise would seem like glaze to you haters. Anyways. MUSTARRRRRRRRRRRRRD! Writing Quality: Yeah, so I'll just give you blockheaders a clue. This guy, yeah, this guy named FailedWriter101 who got this roblox ahh username trying to show that he's new to the platform. For someone new, bro's got really peak writing, I can't lie. Coincidence? I think not. But then again, since when was my thinking not dumb half of the time. Wish I could be as wise and clever as Ryuk from De*** Note. In any case, the quality is peak. The author clearly knows how to write better than 80% of the writers on this platform. Just him taking minutes to reread the chapter and edit out puts him above most people. There's barely any errors. SO ITS PEAK, I DONT CARE WHAT OTHERS SAY. Sorry, didn't mean to scream. It's just that I get aired and ignored alot. In any case, the explanation, the description and everything is done in simple easy to understand, Wn-readers brain like words. Aight, next. Stability of Updates: Yeah, so if you got a problem with this, there's a door to the right. Just walk some steps. Yup, right here. Open it. Yeah, see that space outside? Get out. For someone who released multiple chapters early on to satisfy his readers (Don't worry jadey, I didn't see those tier messages), and also keeping his stability perfect till date, this deserves a big 5 star. Yup, that star that the teachers used to draw on your cheeks. Yeah, come here jadey. Let me draw it on your cheeks as well. Just not the ones on your face. Story Development: It's peak. Genuinely peak. Yeah, I know you prolly saw my Reading Status when reading this review to see how serious you can take me. Anyways, the plans, foreshadowings and how the story progresses genuinely leaves every reader wanting for much more. As an author, I, myself love how he progresses his story. This is also why whenever I want to do something in my novel I take his opinion. genuinely serious. I swear you will love it. It's never too light or too dark (who am I kidding with that mini gege pfp). Anyways, for you WN readers, I assure you will love it. Character Design: Cooked. The humor the author puts into characters genuinely makes me laugh and crash out so much that my soul flies out of my body into oblivion. .exe crashed. Pinched the red peak. Marshmallows. Yeah, chapter 24. Author definitely changed gege to za-za at that time. The character's personalities are also not annoying or make it feel unnatural at all. Neo's personality for his age is peak. Morrigan, love her. Elizabeth, hate her. World Background: For an extra story, author took a big leap here. Rather than that organizations and cliche everything, he introduced clans. Especially of Olympian Gods. How much more unique can it be? No info dumps or over explanations at all. Author really put his mind into developing the world before writing it and I love it. PTSD: Still don't remember the name, forgive me. In any case, every aspect about this story deviates from the cliche extra trops and characters and everything. Author genuinely thought that throw this all out, and we make Extra good again. After all the stains on it, author did a fresh turn and turned it into a genuinely peak 5 star meat that makes me want to swallow and eat it. HUH? Nah, I said 5 star meal bruh. Eat a 5 star meal. What you guys on? Anyways, Peak 5 star, wonderful novel. so.... GO READ!!!!! METROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Definitely unique and thrilling story. A lot of awesome fighting and crazy concepts. power system is pretty cool and the lore goes pretty deep. loved it
Honestly great read, some hiccups along the way with certain concepts that irritated me because I have my own beliefs but honestly I just needed to give the author time to land and the author sure did land. Love the novel so far I’m pretty much caught up. Author prob could’ve taken more Time to dive through every detail of the mc progression moving forward but ik a lot of readers are dopamine junkies n would get bored by that but it would be great to see more detail progression after him n jack came back. Love how things played out hopefully author doesn’t go down the destined troupe of these recanted into the book novels and just has something refreshing to bring.
The author gets lost in his own novel. The work starts out interesting and compelling. Its flaws in character development are overshadowed with its world building that is both familiar yet fresh. That being said the longer you read the more the flaws are exposed and harder to ignore. The novel quickly turns 1 dimensional focusing solely on the MC. All other characters lack depth and life as they are only written with reference to the MC. This results in the novel turning bland and other characters just being described as "strong" and thats it. The world building starts out as good, very familiar to anyone that read a few popular novels but lacks substance after the first bite. Families and mythos are quickly established then left after being mentioned once, leaving the lore hollow. Since everything revolves around the MC both internally and externally there is little to no attachment to other characters. The potential gains and loses involving other characters dont really hit home and connections arent established. In short theres not enough there to make readers care. The feelings of the MC are implied but it is never shown or developed as if theyre just after thoughts written as consequences and not sources for impetus. Saying the MC cares is a poor substitute for showing the MC actually does. Theres also the common issue with pumping the MC full of skills which are only used or mentioned once. Give him more tools then forget about them when you give him his newest one. "Novel knowledge" is mentioned at the start but is again quickly forgotten out of convenience and brought back only for the same reason. 4th wall breaking is poorly used as well. This is already too long so in summary this novel was written with a good foundation and posibilities but it's architect got too hyper focused and lost sight of the bigger picture. It devolved into a biography about the MC when it could have been an epic in its own right.
I’ll update the review as I go further, but for now, let me talk about my gripes. Firstly would be my dislike of obnoxious over the top cosmology and weird time/reincarnation nonsense. I was much happier before a bunch of the background stuff was revealed honestly. My next is that…there is negative amounts of romance so far by chapter 148, and that is saddening…but maybe it’ll change… Lastly, in the most recent chapters, he’s getting used by the outside families to check his strength via the student council for basically no benefits. Ohhhh cool, you can skip exams….oh sick…you get double credits. You just have to reveal your strength to a bunch of people that want to kill you and do whatever slave labor an organization like the student council requires.
what can i say he is just THAT good bro is him fr😌 but please bro dont pull a gege on this and cook more for us
The story is great. It has a unique beggining (for its trope). The author uses practically every trope and cliche. The Mc is somehow a Reincarnator regressor and a possesor. Strong to weak, op yet not op, academy setting, that one stupid guy who always goes against him for no reason. Awakeners, gods, outer gods, Akashic record. Practically everything, but the author does it in such a way that they don’t feel cliche or like and tropes. He reincarnates but he feels the weight of his memories. He learns from his past present and future. He posses a body but the reason why no one suspects him is explained very well as the story progresses. He’s not the only regressor or Reincarnator. The gods are explained and we are able to know their stories more as the book progresses. The akashic record is actually explained. The side characters are actually side characters and are important to the story. He shows growth from making mistakes at the beggining to being able to do more as he grows. However the best part is the foreshadowing. The foreshadowing in this book is beyond godly. If something ever seems off or feels incomplete or like a plot hole. Just know it’s foreshadowing for something greater. All in all just know the story gets better as you read P.s. my favorite part is the shadow trial arc. All the foreshadowing lead up to that point. The greatest arc of the entire book.
this story has some potential,but drowns way too often in idiocy. the fights are cool, some encounters are even original or have enough spin to them to consider them as such. Still there are a lot of things that don't make any sense, there are a ton of fan cervices and joke chapters that are there just to make drama, sinking the quality.
Your story although it is very common among the stories of the same type as of transmigration to other worlds either inside a book or an alternate dimension has a story that makes it look unique I am writing my own story that is not yet on a par with this story but I hope one day I can have as much fame as that beautiful and such a good story
The story is peak. The power system is awesome. The characters are great. I'm really enjoying reading this book.
i like the writing style 230 chapters in and am thinking of dropping it over 1 REASON the hypocritical mc like bro will judge every evil person and say go to hell u disgusting mongrel but then when his friends sin he just like "nah u ok" i cant handle shit like that i was expecting a really good mc cuz hades who judges sins or should i say the successor of hell is meant to be the perfect judge so it really put me off when he became a hypocrite
a fresh take on transmigration novels with entertaining fight scenes and a likeable main character. the only problem i had was that a lot world background and basic knowledge in story isn't properly explained. even after more than 100 chapter I don't completely understand the power system. there is just so many mysteries in the story that it starts to go from engaging to almost confusing. honestly I just can't find the motivation to read this anymore
Started off good up until 100+ chapters, but then the story takes a complete nosedive during and after the whole unlocking his time travel ability bullshit. Like seriously I haven’t seen an author destroy every element of character development, story progression, dialogue, and plot on this level since game of thrones.
ネタバレを明かすQuality drops significantly after ch 140...i have seen so many mistakes in one chapter that I'm wondering if it's the same author who is writing or another one ?? There was a quest a couple of chapter back in the shadow world where he got a mission to kill Arthur Shadow solo and the mission reward was Time affinity but it was forgotten Ch 100 : [Quest: Singlehandedly defeat the Shadow of Arthur Kingsley.] [Reward: Immortal Exp +50, Time Affinity] [Accept/Refuse]
Story started out pretty strong, but after around chapter 200 everything just lost tension and the quality dropped. The chapters become skippable without losing anything as there’s no character growth or change at all. Everything just becomes boring and predictable as there’s no tension with the plot becomimg overly convoluted which doesn’t help either. MC becomes self-sacrificing but it means nothing as literally 2 chapters later the situation is reversed so it literally has no meaning. The author should probably take a break and plan properly as that may be what’s causing this drop in quality which is a shame as it definitely had promise. But the character development and plot seem to be what’s letting down the story.
10/10 would recommend. In the initial chapters the writing quality was iffy, but I’m pretty sure the Author went back and fixed it. The story initially looked like it would be a common transmigration novel like all the other common trash on this site, BUT after reading it I realized that this shit is fire! The power system is nicely detailed and systemized, and the characters are distinct and lovable. I can’t comment on the romance due to it not being the most prevalent, and the whole aspect of Neo being basically immortal is so well utilized it’s made me love this novel, not to mention the use of time manipulation in the current chapters that’s sooooo well put together, and the story itself just keeps getting better!
Wow this novel is really one of the best i read. The storyline is so good that i did not realize how fast the time passed. I really was so immersed that i could not stop reading chapter after chapter. The characters and their relationships are perfectly written. The worldbuilding was perfect as well. The story has a lot of twists which makes it a really exciting read. The action in the story was also really good. I enjoyed this novel so much that i would recommend it to my friends. This is the kind of story i would love to spend my money on to get a physical copy for my bookshelf. Thanks for this exciting story.
Peak fiction most of the low rating are because they haven’t read the full story of volume 1 yet.
bro just trust me and read it. *Warning* read only if u wanna get spoilt, u won't find any good books later as this book will become a new standard for urself, after reading it I haven't found any novel near it's quality and am now suffering as no novels satisfy me anymore 😭😭😭 though seriously writing quality , character development , world building , the story is way above any novels I have read so far. not only that it's unpredictable as well damn after reading few novels u start predicting mc's next move but not here sir not at all
One of the best books I’ve ever read!!!! Can’t wait for more chapters @ author you’re killing it
Broo...Dont drop it or end it in 600 chaps it has a potential to have at least1000 chps write for us🤚🤚
Yo, I am here to tell you that this story is peak...how can I say that? Uhhhh..then let me point out some things. 1- the main character is so good. He is not your some beta MC. He have a brain, he can think surprisingly, and he knows how to handle situations, and he have a really really good humor 2-now we are talking about comedy then let me say the comedy of this novel is so peak there are times when I just laugh continuously for minutes and the author might be freaky sometimes while writing which is peak 3- Now when we are talking about writing then it's good like really really good grammar is good author usually write in 3rd pov which is i prefer generally and tbh writing is so good that it doesn't seem like the writing of an amateur author NOW...AUTHOR LISTEN TO ME IF YOU DROP THIS NOVEL ISTG…… I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO So conclusion of this yapping is to read this novel it's peak
We've Been Tricked, We've Been Backstabbed and We've Been, Quite Possibly, Bamboozled. FailedWriter101? My. Foot. So yeah, I stated the author was just a new author in my previous review. And I wasn't exactly wrong. But new facts have come to light that has made me review my opinion. The level of improvement this author has shown cannot be explained unless he is a 1000yr old master who is regaining his abilities after a long period of rest. The novel has shown such a stark improvement in the past month or so that I am left bewildered. So yeah, I stated this was a novel with good potential in my previous review. But so were 100s of other extra novels I have seen fail. But contrary to his pen name, this author has been an enormous success. The rate at which his popularity shot up is comparable to how well Extra's Descent did at its early stages. Could this novel be the second coming of ED(Extra's Descent)? Or wait, THIS NOVEL IS ED(Extra's Death). Oh my, oh my, do I smell a connection here? Mayhaps, mayhaps. Coincidence, I think NOT. Ahem, half-baked half-high detective stuff aside, lets move on to the novel. The writing quality has always been good, and it has only improved from the early chaps. In terms of update stability, the author is a beast of writing, maybe on magecrafter levels but he did manage to reach the 100 chapter mark in just a little over a month of beginning to write. That is plenty commendable in my humble opinion. In terms of story development and world background, top notch, as always. From the very beginning it was very clear that the author has put much thought into these aspects. Moving on to the most important factor, character design. The extra trope is a washed and repeated trope on this platform. I have read 100s of novels of the theme, and the one of the, if not the only part that always stays as the deciding factor whether or not an extra novel succeeds is always the character designs. AND THIS NOVEL EXCELS AT THIS. Hot mommy? Check. Hot daughter of hot mommy who is a senior at the academy? Check. Hot OP girl from the same year? Check.(best girl btw) Wait, wait, wait. Just because I only listed the female characters doesn't mean this novel is a harem or that there are no important male characters. It's just that I focus on the female characters more. The male characters well, uhh, they exist. They... do stuff?(icl, i havent even looked at their character arts). At any case, they are important to the plot and are good characters too(i am pretty sure). CONCLUSION: So, well, yeah, that's about it. If you are into novels of this type(with extras, and weak to strong mc, and academy arcs), I would 10/10 rec this to you. But if you are here because you are into mythos, then well, there hasn't been much to see for now. I mean, we haven't even seen hades yet and that guy's name is a part of the novel's name. So in the end whether or not you will like this novel depends on what you are looking for. One thing I can assure you though is the fact that you won't dislike this novel even if it isn't what you want to read. Finally, I would like to mention(threaten) the author by saying that I will [REDACTED] his ahh with my [REDACTED] if Morrigan di Montaigne ain't the fml.
Aight, Young Sosa on the review h o *. Alright listen, if you stalking my profile and saw that MABI review where I said that I seldom review novels and see me reviewing this novel hours later then let me clarify. First, I just thought that since it's Sunday let me review all the novels that I found peak. Don't worry, after 1 or 2 reviews after this, you won't see reviews from me in a long time. Anyways, like I previously said, if you see me reviewing any novel with 5 on it, yeah it's good so just try it. PTSD (Yeah, I still can't remember the name and I'm high so just go with this) at the end. I'm not even a moderator for this novel or anything, so yeah, don't accuse me of glaz- Ring...Ring. Just a second. Yes? Oh.. Yeah, I see. I gotchu. See, it's my homie so.... KRISPY KREME DONUTS, WE GLAZIN Just kidding, my boy and this novel so good, that my genuine praise would seem like glaze to you haters. Anyways. MUSTARRRRRRRRRRRRRD! Writing Quality: Yeah, so I'll just give you blockheaders a clue. This guy, yeah, this guy named FailedWriter101 who got this roblox ahh username trying to show that he's new to the platform. For someone new, bro's got really peak writing, I can't lie. Coincidence? I think not. But then again, since when was my thinking not dumb half of the time. Wish I could be as wise and clever as Ryuk from De*** Note. In any case, the quality is peak. The author clearly knows how to write better than 80% of the writers on this platform. Just him taking minutes to reread the chapter and edit out puts him above most people. There's barely any errors. SO ITS PEAK, I DONT CARE WHAT OTHERS SAY. Sorry, didn't mean to scream. It's just that I get aired and ignored alot. In any case, the explanation, the description and everything is done in simple easy to understand, Wn-readers brain like words. Aight, next. Stability of Updates: Yeah, so if you got a problem with this, there's a door to the right. Just walk some steps. Yup, right here. Open it. Yeah, see that space outside? Get out. For someone who released multiple chapters early on to satisfy his readers (Don't worry jadey, I didn't see those tier messages), and also keeping his stability perfect till date, this deserves a big 5 star. Yup, that star that the teachers used to draw on your cheeks. Yeah, come here jadey. Let me draw it on your cheeks as well. Just not the ones on your face. Story Development: It's peak. Genuinely peak. Yeah, I know you prolly saw my Reading Status when reading this review to see how serious you can take me. Anyways, the plans, foreshadowings and how the story progresses genuinely leaves every reader wanting for much more. As an author, I, myself love how he progresses his story. This is also why whenever I want to do something in my novel I take his opinion. genuinely serious. I swear you will love it. It's never too light or too dark (who am I kidding with that mini gege pfp). Anyways, for you WN readers, I assure you will love it. Character Design: Cooked. The humor the author puts into characters genuinely makes me laugh and crash out so much that my soul flies out of my body into oblivion. .exe crashed. Pinched the red peak. Marshmallows. Yeah, chapter 24. Author definitely changed gege to za-za at that time. The character's personalities are also not annoying or make it feel unnatural at all. Neo's personality for his age is peak. Morrigan, love her. Elizabeth, hate her. World Background: For an extra story, author took a big leap here. Rather than that organizations and cliche everything, he introduced clans. Especially of Olympian Gods. How much more unique can it be? No info dumps or over explanations at all. Author really put his mind into developing the world before writing it and I love it. PTSD: Still don't remember the name, forgive me. In any case, every aspect about this story deviates from the cliche extra trops and characters and everything. Author genuinely thought that throw this all out, and we make Extra good again. After all the stains on it, author did a fresh turn and turned it into a genuinely peak 5 star meat that makes me want to swallow and eat it. HUH? Nah, I said 5 star meal bruh. Eat a 5 star meal. What you guys on? Anyways, Peak 5 star, wonderful novel. so.... GO READ!!!!! METROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Definitely unique and thrilling story. A lot of awesome fighting and crazy concepts. power system is pretty cool and the lore goes pretty deep. loved it
Honestly great read, some hiccups along the way with certain concepts that irritated me because I have my own beliefs but honestly I just needed to give the author time to land and the author sure did land. Love the novel so far I’m pretty much caught up. Author prob could’ve taken more Time to dive through every detail of the mc progression moving forward but ik a lot of readers are dopamine junkies n would get bored by that but it would be great to see more detail progression after him n jack came back. Love how things played out hopefully author doesn’t go down the destined troupe of these recanted into the book novels and just has something refreshing to bring.
The author gets lost in his own novel. The work starts out interesting and compelling. Its flaws in character development are overshadowed with its world building that is both familiar yet fresh. That being said the longer you read the more the flaws are exposed and harder to ignore. The novel quickly turns 1 dimensional focusing solely on the MC. All other characters lack depth and life as they are only written with reference to the MC. This results in the novel turning bland and other characters just being described as "strong" and thats it. The world building starts out as good, very familiar to anyone that read a few popular novels but lacks substance after the first bite. Families and mythos are quickly established then left after being mentioned once, leaving the lore hollow. Since everything revolves around the MC both internally and externally there is little to no attachment to other characters. The potential gains and loses involving other characters dont really hit home and connections arent established. In short theres not enough there to make readers care. The feelings of the MC are implied but it is never shown or developed as if theyre just after thoughts written as consequences and not sources for impetus. Saying the MC cares is a poor substitute for showing the MC actually does. Theres also the common issue with pumping the MC full of skills which are only used or mentioned once. Give him more tools then forget about them when you give him his newest one. "Novel knowledge" is mentioned at the start but is again quickly forgotten out of convenience and brought back only for the same reason. 4th wall breaking is poorly used as well. This is already too long so in summary this novel was written with a good foundation and posibilities but it's architect got too hyper focused and lost sight of the bigger picture. It devolved into a biography about the MC when it could have been an epic in its own right.
I’ll update the review as I go further, but for now, let me talk about my gripes. Firstly would be my dislike of obnoxious over the top cosmology and weird time/reincarnation nonsense. I was much happier before a bunch of the background stuff was revealed honestly. My next is that…there is negative amounts of romance so far by chapter 148, and that is saddening…but maybe it’ll change… Lastly, in the most recent chapters, he’s getting used by the outside families to check his strength via the student council for basically no benefits. Ohhhh cool, you can skip exams….oh sick…you get double credits. You just have to reveal your strength to a bunch of people that want to kill you and do whatever slave labor an organization like the student council requires.
what can i say he is just THAT good bro is him fr😌 but please bro dont pull a gege on this and cook more for us
The story is great. It has a unique beggining (for its trope). The author uses practically every trope and cliche. The Mc is somehow a Reincarnator regressor and a possesor. Strong to weak, op yet not op, academy setting, that one stupid guy who always goes against him for no reason. Awakeners, gods, outer gods, Akashic record. Practically everything, but the author does it in such a way that they don’t feel cliche or like and tropes. He reincarnates but he feels the weight of his memories. He learns from his past present and future. He posses a body but the reason why no one suspects him is explained very well as the story progresses. He’s not the only regressor or Reincarnator. The gods are explained and we are able to know their stories more as the book progresses. The akashic record is actually explained. The side characters are actually side characters and are important to the story. He shows growth from making mistakes at the beggining to being able to do more as he grows. However the best part is the foreshadowing. The foreshadowing in this book is beyond godly. If something ever seems off or feels incomplete or like a plot hole. Just know it’s foreshadowing for something greater. All in all just know the story gets better as you read P.s. my favorite part is the shadow trial arc. All the foreshadowing lead up to that point. The greatest arc of the entire book.
this story has some potential,but drowns way too often in idiocy. the fights are cool, some encounters are even original or have enough spin to them to consider them as such. Still there are a lot of things that don't make any sense, there are a ton of fan cervices and joke chapters that are there just to make drama, sinking the quality.
Your story although it is very common among the stories of the same type as of transmigration to other worlds either inside a book or an alternate dimension has a story that makes it look unique I am writing my own story that is not yet on a par with this story but I hope one day I can have as much fame as that beautiful and such a good story
The story is peak. The power system is awesome. The characters are great. I'm really enjoying reading this book.
i like the writing style 230 chapters in and am thinking of dropping it over 1 REASON the hypocritical mc like bro will judge every evil person and say go to hell u disgusting mongrel but then when his friends sin he just like "nah u ok" i cant handle shit like that i was expecting a really good mc cuz hades who judges sins or should i say the successor of hell is meant to be the perfect judge so it really put me off when he became a hypocrite
a fresh take on transmigration novels with entertaining fight scenes and a likeable main character. the only problem i had was that a lot world background and basic knowledge in story isn't properly explained. even after more than 100 chapter I don't completely understand the power system. there is just so many mysteries in the story that it starts to go from engaging to almost confusing. honestly I just can't find the motivation to read this anymore
Started off good up until 100+ chapters, but then the story takes a complete nosedive during and after the whole unlocking his time travel ability bullshit. Like seriously I haven’t seen an author destroy every element of character development, story progression, dialogue, and plot on this level since game of thrones.
ネタバレを明かすQuality drops significantly after ch 140...i have seen so many mistakes in one chapter that I'm wondering if it's the same author who is writing or another one ?? There was a quest a couple of chapter back in the shadow world where he got a mission to kill Arthur Shadow solo and the mission reward was Time affinity but it was forgotten Ch 100 : [Quest: Singlehandedly defeat the Shadow of Arthur Kingsley.] [Reward: Immortal Exp +50, Time Affinity] [Accept/Refuse]
Story started out pretty strong, but after around chapter 200 everything just lost tension and the quality dropped. The chapters become skippable without losing anything as there’s no character growth or change at all. Everything just becomes boring and predictable as there’s no tension with the plot becomimg overly convoluted which doesn’t help either. MC becomes self-sacrificing but it means nothing as literally 2 chapters later the situation is reversed so it literally has no meaning. The author should probably take a break and plan properly as that may be what’s causing this drop in quality which is a shame as it definitely had promise. But the character development and plot seem to be what’s letting down the story.
10/10 would recommend. In the initial chapters the writing quality was iffy, but I’m pretty sure the Author went back and fixed it. The story initially looked like it would be a common transmigration novel like all the other common trash on this site, BUT after reading it I realized that this shit is fire! The power system is nicely detailed and systemized, and the characters are distinct and lovable. I can’t comment on the romance due to it not being the most prevalent, and the whole aspect of Neo being basically immortal is so well utilized it’s made me love this novel, not to mention the use of time manipulation in the current chapters that’s sooooo well put together, and the story itself just keeps getting better!
Wow this novel is really one of the best i read. The storyline is so good that i did not realize how fast the time passed. I really was so immersed that i could not stop reading chapter after chapter. The characters and their relationships are perfectly written. The worldbuilding was perfect as well. The story has a lot of twists which makes it a really exciting read. The action in the story was also really good. I enjoyed this novel so much that i would recommend it to my friends. This is the kind of story i would love to spend my money on to get a physical copy for my bookshelf. Thanks for this exciting story.
Peak fiction most of the low rating are because they haven’t read the full story of volume 1 yet.
bro just trust me and read it. *Warning* read only if u wanna get spoilt, u won't find any good books later as this book will become a new standard for urself, after reading it I haven't found any novel near it's quality and am now suffering as no novels satisfy me anymore 😭😭😭 though seriously writing quality , character development , world building , the story is way above any novels I have read so far. not only that it's unpredictable as well damn after reading few novels u start predicting mc's next move but not here sir not at all
One of the best books I’ve ever read!!!! Can’t wait for more chapters @ author you’re killing it
Broo...Dont drop it or end it in 600 chaps it has a potential to have at least1000 chps write for us🤚🤚
Yo, I am here to tell you that this story is peak...how can I say that? Uhhhh..then let me point out some things. 1- the main character is so good. He is not your some beta MC. He have a brain, he can think surprisingly, and he knows how to handle situations, and he have a really really good humor 2-now we are talking about comedy then let me say the comedy of this novel is so peak there are times when I just laugh continuously for minutes and the author might be freaky sometimes while writing which is peak 3- Now when we are talking about writing then it's good like really really good grammar is good author usually write in 3rd pov which is i prefer generally and tbh writing is so good that it doesn't seem like the writing of an amateur author NOW...AUTHOR LISTEN TO ME IF YOU DROP THIS NOVEL ISTG…… I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO So conclusion of this yapping is to read this novel it's peak