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The first 70 chapters are good, but then the author decided to add the multiverse for some reason, because of course we all needed it and love it very much, it in no way devalues the characters of their beliefs and actions, of course the author justified this by saying that mc has nowhere to develop, although he has not yet reached the peak of power, has not studied I didn't use magic, I didn't make armor at least like the Mark 50 from the movie, which can withstand Thanos with the infinity stones, I didn't collect the infinity stones themselves, although almost all the stones except the stone of power and soul can be found on earth, and of course, because of mc, all the people in the universe died and he doesn't feel anything about it, I really wonder what the author thinks about all this.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
La historia es bastante buena y eso que no esperaba mucho pero con el MC me convenció; es poderoso, genial y con sentido del humor refrescante junto con una justicia realista y un egoísmo moderado pero entendible, más con viajes a otros universos ahí se ve su potencial 🤙🏻
i read raw, around ch 117 it becomes a chinese cultivation novel. literally. he goes to a cultivation world and becomes a cultivator. i wish i can punch the translator for wasting my time. put cultivation tag dipshit.
A story with a lot of unnecessary, childish and extended dialogues. The conversations annoy me so it's not worth reading from my perspective. Also, the thought of being someone with superman powers is weird. He is already a very strong character. In my opinion, it is an unreadable story because there is no need for training / training processes or pushing himself, so character development is not possible. But despite this, there are people who give it 5 stars. I have to give this score to balance them
Okay, I like this novel, but why is there a focus on him being Allah? Even a ten-year-old knows the difference between Allah and a man who has powers. 6 chapter of random arab guy calling him Allah.
Otimo um mc realista e n um idiota ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Debo decir que al principio no esperaba mucho, sin embargo esta historia a mejorado mucho y ha sido satisfactorio leerlo, tengo grandes expectativas con esta historia... Gracias por el trabajo, estaré apoyando en futuros capítulos
Full stars… and a gem in the making. I just hope the author doesn’t ruining it during the multiverse travel arcs like most other authors do
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I was thinking I'll get a dumb MC who doesn't understand the powers he holds.. BUT! This MC is LIT! [img=nervous][img=recommend]What sets this fanfic apart is the author's ability to craft an MC who is both powerful and refreshingly fun. Not to mention K!lls the enemies coldly like Homelander.
love it u have cleared up the writing and I like the relationship between tony and the mc. what is the original novel called cause I cant fin it using the title from here ?
An MC as Tony's brother as well as Kryptonian! Lessss Goooooooooo.............................................................................................
I really like chapter 5. [img=update][img=update].....................................................................................................
Although I don't like heroic MCs. I like this one coz he is realistic and not pathetic hero wanna be but a smart one.🤞💯
This is so freaking good. Didn't expected much before starting it thinking it'll be another wish fulfilment but... Damn, the dynamics are so good👍 looking forward to it!
awesome, i hope the stability of updates remain. It is a lot of fun to read, I just wish for Lyon to get some nice romance and or harem. Coupled with cool action and this book will be everything you can hope for.
Finally a realist MC! Looking forward to it!............................................................................................................
I really like the story so upload more and you are doing a great job at translating it! KEEP IT UP![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Sinceramente Estava legal até ele colocar a porra de um Mundo de cultivo. Que não tem nada haver com dc, marvel, resident evil ou quaisquer realidades parecida com essas.
The first 70 chapters are good, but then the author decided to add the multiverse for some reason, because of course we all needed it and love it very much, it in no way devalues the characters of their beliefs and actions, of course the author justified this by saying that mc has nowhere to develop, although he has not yet reached the peak of power, has not studied I didn't use magic, I didn't make armor at least like the Mark 50 from the movie, which can withstand Thanos with the infinity stones, I didn't collect the infinity stones themselves, although almost all the stones except the stone of power and soul can be found on earth, and of course, because of mc, all the people in the universe died and he doesn't feel anything about it, I really wonder what the author thinks about all this.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram My Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life and if you don't use instagram you can reply here as well thank you
La historia es bastante buena y eso que no esperaba mucho pero con el MC me convenció; es poderoso, genial y con sentido del humor refrescante junto con una justicia realista y un egoísmo moderado pero entendible, más con viajes a otros universos ahí se ve su potencial 🤙🏻
i read raw, around ch 117 it becomes a chinese cultivation novel. literally. he goes to a cultivation world and becomes a cultivator. i wish i can punch the translator for wasting my time. put cultivation tag dipshit.
A story with a lot of unnecessary, childish and extended dialogues. The conversations annoy me so it's not worth reading from my perspective. Also, the thought of being someone with superman powers is weird. He is already a very strong character. In my opinion, it is an unreadable story because there is no need for training / training processes or pushing himself, so character development is not possible. But despite this, there are people who give it 5 stars. I have to give this score to balance them
Okay, I like this novel, but why is there a focus on him being Allah? Even a ten-year-old knows the difference between Allah and a man who has powers. 6 chapter of random arab guy calling him Allah.
Otimo um mc realista e n um idiota ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
Debo decir que al principio no esperaba mucho, sin embargo esta historia a mejorado mucho y ha sido satisfactorio leerlo, tengo grandes expectativas con esta historia... Gracias por el trabajo, estaré apoyando en futuros capítulos
Full stars… and a gem in the making. I just hope the author doesn’t ruining it during the multiverse travel arcs like most other authors do
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I was thinking I'll get a dumb MC who doesn't understand the powers he holds.. BUT! This MC is LIT! [img=nervous][img=recommend]What sets this fanfic apart is the author's ability to craft an MC who is both powerful and refreshingly fun. Not to mention K!lls the enemies coldly like Homelander.
love it u have cleared up the writing and I like the relationship between tony and the mc. what is the original novel called cause I cant fin it using the title from here ?
An MC as Tony's brother as well as Kryptonian! Lessss Goooooooooo.............................................................................................
I really like chapter 5. [img=update][img=update].....................................................................................................
Although I don't like heroic MCs. I like this one coz he is realistic and not pathetic hero wanna be but a smart one.🤞💯
This is so freaking good. Didn't expected much before starting it thinking it'll be another wish fulfilment but... Damn, the dynamics are so good👍 looking forward to it!
awesome, i hope the stability of updates remain. It is a lot of fun to read, I just wish for Lyon to get some nice romance and or harem. Coupled with cool action and this book will be everything you can hope for.
Finally a realist MC! Looking forward to it!............................................................................................................
I really like the story so upload more and you are doing a great job at translating it! KEEP IT UP![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Sinceramente Estava legal até ele colocar a porra de um Mundo de cultivo. Que não tem nada haver com dc, marvel, resident evil ou quaisquer realidades parecida com essas.