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I remember reading this story some time ago on fanfiction.net, but it hasn't been updated in a while. Will you continue it yourself, or will you just post it here?
eu amei essa fic, mas esse mc sofre muito kkkk parece que toda hora ele tem que se desculpa por fazer umas escolhas que sao necessarias pelo bem do reino, mas chega arya e questiona sem pensa sobre essas coisas.
Pretty good..........................................................................................................................................................
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I have to ask are all these fics AI or are you just stealing them either way their all pretty bad
really good so far . one of the best got fics I have read so far. good grammar , hopefully it doesn't get dropped.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
I remember reading this story some time ago on fanfiction.net, but it hasn't been updated in a while. Will you continue it yourself, or will you just post it here?
eu amei essa fic, mas esse mc sofre muito kkkk parece que toda hora ele tem que se desculpa por fazer umas escolhas que sao necessarias pelo bem do reino, mas chega arya e questiona sem pensa sobre essas coisas.
Pretty good..........................................................................................................................................................
Good .................... .............................................. .............. ............... .......................
I have to ask are all these fics AI or are you just stealing them either way their all pretty bad
really good so far . one of the best got fics I have read so far. good grammar , hopefully it doesn't get dropped.
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?