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it has no soul in it, and is the most generic book i have ever seen. MC who is a nobody now, A bestfriend who betrays you, a ugly girl from school who is sexy and successful now, gets attacked as soon as he gets the system but is not able to do anything so have to make a deal with the system
No world background, the most cookie cutter MC, Cliché villains, extremely forced plots, no reference for the world or any idea how it works, what's on it etc. It repeats the same loop over and over for 30 chapters, fights wins, fights loses, super dependent on system. JUST LET HIM TAKE HIS TIME WITH FIGHTS THERE'S NO NEED TO MAKE THE STORY ABOUT HIM FIGHTING EVERY DAY. If you wanted to do that then write an overpowered MC.
ネタバレを明かす it has no soul in it, and is the most generic book i have ever seen. MC who is a nobody now, A bestfriend who betrays you, a ugly girl from school who is sexy and successful now, gets attacked as soon as he gets the system but is not able to do anything so have to make a deal with the system
No world background, the most cookie cutter MC, Cliché villains, extremely forced plots, no reference for the world or any idea how it works, what's on it etc. It repeats the same loop over and over for 30 chapters, fights wins, fights loses, super dependent on system. JUST LET HIM TAKE HIS TIME WITH FIGHTS THERE'S NO NEED TO MAKE THE STORY ABOUT HIM FIGHTING EVERY DAY. If you wanted to do that then write an overpowered MC.
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