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If I won't give it 5 stars, who else would dare to? Also, consider this review to be Q/N: If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here!
Over 40 chapters in. The MC is.... let's say naïve. But, some people are so I didn't mark down for that. Cultivation levels/ranks.... honestly when reading I kept scratching my head. I suspect that the author's first language may not be English, but if so they still do a very good job in general. But, the cultivation ranks were.... exceedingly confusing to me. Furthermore, I don't know what mechanism the author is planning to use to have this guy (who knows nothing about cultivation except for trying for years to sense Qi to officially start it and apparently having at most a high school education) understand about the details of electronics and technology. Not saying he can't, but the author implied that his physical training and working as a cashier basically was his life prior to the start. As a reader who works in the tech industry, it kind of had me shaking my head a few times. And, last but not least... as some people pointed out there is a 'romance' tag. But, the overall supposed to be 'urban'. Given the amount of time this subject is given, I think this entire novel should be recategorized to 'romance', because everything else seems to take a backseat to that in the storyline.
I read around 50 chapters. Very interesting premise and story. But the writing in English ranges from ok to horrible. I also dislike how encountering any surprises basically cause both ML and FL to become toddlers incapable of speaking anything clearly.
It's disappointing, the author is almost completely immersed in romance after 44 chapters, it's not very interesting for me, because if I wanted to read romantic novels, I would read them, but not here. After chapters 44 to 69, which are available to me at the moment, the author just pours out a lot of water about relationships, feelings and all that. I realize that I'm adding a little romance for the sake of interest, but it's too much for me.
Amazing synopsis, got me reading it 🤣 good luck , explosive start May this one be a hit 🩵
Rule number 1 of reviewing books: For normal books Reviewing it without more than 100 chapters is pointless . But if that reviewing book is sloth’s than the rule number 1 nullified …
The crafting system is where this book really shines. It's deep, logical, and oddly satisfying. You'll find yourself geeking out over new recipes and materials right alongside the main character.[img=recommend]
I would like to help you be as handsome as I am. Step 1: Release more chapters.
I would like to help you get famous. oh, wait. You're once in a millenia genius warlord writer already, so you don't need my help. GG. Great book.
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
I know a lot about this book because Sloth is my homie, and I am Da Homie, so this is how it is... just read it.
If I won't give it 5 stars, who else would dare to? Also, consider this review to be Q/N: If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here!
Over 40 chapters in. The MC is.... let's say naïve. But, some people are so I didn't mark down for that. Cultivation levels/ranks.... honestly when reading I kept scratching my head. I suspect that the author's first language may not be English, but if so they still do a very good job in general. But, the cultivation ranks were.... exceedingly confusing to me. Furthermore, I don't know what mechanism the author is planning to use to have this guy (who knows nothing about cultivation except for trying for years to sense Qi to officially start it and apparently having at most a high school education) understand about the details of electronics and technology. Not saying he can't, but the author implied that his physical training and working as a cashier basically was his life prior to the start. As a reader who works in the tech industry, it kind of had me shaking my head a few times. And, last but not least... as some people pointed out there is a 'romance' tag. But, the overall supposed to be 'urban'. Given the amount of time this subject is given, I think this entire novel should be recategorized to 'romance', because everything else seems to take a backseat to that in the storyline.
I read around 50 chapters. Very interesting premise and story. But the writing in English ranges from ok to horrible. I also dislike how encountering any surprises basically cause both ML and FL to become toddlers incapable of speaking anything clearly.
It's disappointing, the author is almost completely immersed in romance after 44 chapters, it's not very interesting for me, because if I wanted to read romantic novels, I would read them, but not here. After chapters 44 to 69, which are available to me at the moment, the author just pours out a lot of water about relationships, feelings and all that. I realize that I'm adding a little romance for the sake of interest, but it's too much for me.
Amazing synopsis, got me reading it 🤣 good luck , explosive start May this one be a hit 🩵
Rule number 1 of reviewing books: For normal books Reviewing it without more than 100 chapters is pointless . But if that reviewing book is sloth’s than the rule number 1 nullified …
The crafting system is where this book really shines. It's deep, logical, and oddly satisfying. You'll find yourself geeking out over new recipes and materials right alongside the main character.[img=recommend]
I would like to help you be as handsome as I am. Step 1: Release more chapters.
I would like to help you get famous. oh, wait. You're once in a millenia genius warlord writer already, so you don't need my help. GG. Great book.
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
I know a lot about this book because Sloth is my homie, and I am Da Homie, so this is how it is... just read it.