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Hey dude your missing the tattoo artist in your harem list just now noticed during the re read. Also check your author comments. I left you a comment.
It would be really great if the author writes the mc's and his late wife's past as a side story, and his daughters' childhood ( from young age to 17 yo) as a side story.
Why the abruptness in going to Japan I though volume 2 is a solid highschool conquer arc?
It’s really good sorry to spam. I commented on a bunch of the pics the yandere pic needs work. Plus there’s some you know you gotta get to etc. but I’m just happy with it all. Hope some of my pic comments made you laugh
Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read
Congrats on reaching 200 - I hope to see plenty of highschool arcs. So many pigtails. Don’t neglect Anna & friends plus the highschool girls he has already. You really gotta set up a discord with character photos.
Are u you still doing the part time teacher part time arms dealer arc or is it in the way.
Keep them coming. Aaaaasaah ya This book keeps getting better. Also please look at the last comment I made.
Saw that latest chapter I’m laughing excitedly. Thank you for being a man of your word.
This is an amazing story so far. Waiting to see more of the harem development and how they will help the MC. I really recommend it. Keep up the amazing work, Author.
Update bought up to 120 and gotta say imma wait til 200 or 230 before I continue cause I got sucked In. Please also try to give some more depth to the women. Or try your best to cause I know they are numerous. But it’s like at some point his daughters take a full back seat. I’m hoping for a yandere character. No violence from her but maybe she line kidnaps him and he seduces his way out of being trapped with her…. Just throwing that out there lol
ネタバレを明かす With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.
very bad grammar, spelling and such. its still readable but some things dont make sense in chapter 19. a decent smut story but that's all. would be better if the spelling and grammar didnt suck
hi, I recently read your book and I really like it, all my stones will go to this book, continue and don't give up on it[img=Loving it] [img=Loving it]
Shameless author here, I would like to thank you for reading my novel. And any helpful advice would me most appreciated. I would like to thank y'all once again.
this book is so dope! please author, keep updating coz you have just gotten yourself a new fan
Hey dude your missing the tattoo artist in your harem list just now noticed during the re read. Also check your author comments. I left you a comment.
It would be really great if the author writes the mc's and his late wife's past as a side story, and his daughters' childhood ( from young age to 17 yo) as a side story.
Why the abruptness in going to Japan I though volume 2 is a solid highschool conquer arc?
It’s really good sorry to spam. I commented on a bunch of the pics the yandere pic needs work. Plus there’s some you know you gotta get to etc. but I’m just happy with it all. Hope some of my pic comments made you laugh
Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read
Congrats on reaching 200 - I hope to see plenty of highschool arcs. So many pigtails. Don’t neglect Anna & friends plus the highschool girls he has already. You really gotta set up a discord with character photos.
Are u you still doing the part time teacher part time arms dealer arc or is it in the way.
Keep them coming. Aaaaasaah ya This book keeps getting better. Also please look at the last comment I made.
Saw that latest chapter I’m laughing excitedly. Thank you for being a man of your word.
This is an amazing story so far. Waiting to see more of the harem development and how they will help the MC. I really recommend it. Keep up the amazing work, Author.
Update bought up to 120 and gotta say imma wait til 200 or 230 before I continue cause I got sucked In. Please also try to give some more depth to the women. Or try your best to cause I know they are numerous. But it’s like at some point his daughters take a full back seat. I’m hoping for a yandere character. No violence from her but maybe she line kidnaps him and he seduces his way out of being trapped with her…. Just throwing that out there lol
ネタバレを明かす With some more polishing/editing this gem of spicy smut could shine a lot brighter. Try not to rely on grammarly too much but pace yourself and reread your chapter before posting. Fix any mistakes. Still put Max stars cause has plenty of decent smut scenes.
very bad grammar, spelling and such. its still readable but some things dont make sense in chapter 19. a decent smut story but that's all. would be better if the spelling and grammar didnt suck
hi, I recently read your book and I really like it, all my stones will go to this book, continue and don't give up on it[img=Loving it] [img=Loving it]
Shameless author here, I would like to thank you for reading my novel. And any helpful advice would me most appreciated. I would like to thank y'all once again.
this book is so dope! please author, keep updating coz you have just gotten yourself a new fan