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Muito bom, engraçado e divertido,a velocidade de aumento de poder é meio exagerada,mas o autor já falou que vai trabalhar nisso,no geral a obra é realmente cativante
Great story to read fun and a nice take on how a smart Luffy can change things for the better and change the people around him for the better with the meta knowledge he uses the east blue as training grounds for his crew and like that Michael Jackson bit 😂 😭 dude was killing it anyway wish you success author you got a good story going 👍
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story is good, but the pacing is shit, it took genius fluffy almost 6 months to learn haki, and u expect nami and USOOP, the great coward to develop haki in a couple days ?
One thing to say about this fanfic is that... It is worth reading like I don't say about fanfic but this got me hooked I don't want to talk about the story as it will be spoilers but just read it you will not regret it
smart luffy and no system It's a great book and keep updating and try keeping his crew power level to luffy's power level in future[img=recommend]
#nosystem #smartluffy Eyy! great book so far, with a different take on luffy's journey. I have read lots of fanfics where they start as luffy or whatnot but this takes on a whole new approach concerning his pre-journey and his interactions with the world, tho it feels a bit awkward at first especially the awakening of haki but nothing major besides, other authors have done worse, at least the author here made luffy train to get his power and not got it hand down from a system. Hope to see some romance development in the future. Keep up the good work and please dont drop it!
The story is very good you can tell that the author makes an effort with each chapter and has a certain love for the work the references and the course of events I love 10 out of 10 also the story smells like lemon
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Muito bom, engraçado e divertido,a velocidade de aumento de poder é meio exagerada,mas o autor já falou que vai trabalhar nisso,no geral a obra é realmente cativante
Great story to read fun and a nice take on how a smart Luffy can change things for the better and change the people around him for the better with the meta knowledge he uses the east blue as training grounds for his crew and like that Michael Jackson bit 😂 😭 dude was killing it anyway wish you success author you got a good story going 👍
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story is good, but the pacing is shit, it took genius fluffy almost 6 months to learn haki, and u expect nami and USOOP, the great coward to develop haki in a couple days ?
One thing to say about this fanfic is that... It is worth reading like I don't say about fanfic but this got me hooked I don't want to talk about the story as it will be spoilers but just read it you will not regret it
smart luffy and no system It's a great book and keep updating and try keeping his crew power level to luffy's power level in future[img=recommend]
#nosystem #smartluffy Eyy! great book so far, with a different take on luffy's journey. I have read lots of fanfics where they start as luffy or whatnot but this takes on a whole new approach concerning his pre-journey and his interactions with the world, tho it feels a bit awkward at first especially the awakening of haki but nothing major besides, other authors have done worse, at least the author here made luffy train to get his power and not got it hand down from a system. Hope to see some romance development in the future. Keep up the good work and please dont drop it!
The story is very good you can tell that the author makes an effort with each chapter and has a certain love for the work the references and the course of events I love 10 out of 10 also the story smells like lemon
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