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Sect Master, I have come to enjoy your noble work. And I would like you to keep your blessings on all my 17 generations. Please continue your book. - Ping Clan Young Master
I honestly find this to be most entertaining both your books are very interesting I hope you continue them
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Еще мне нужно еще,больше глав,обязательно хочу дочитать именно это произведение.Удачи вам в востановлении данных,да и вообще удачи и здоровья.I also need more, more chapters, I definitely want to finish reading this particular work. Good luck to you in restoring your data, and in general, good luck and health.
this was amazing and great and i really hope you udate soon because i truly think that this fic is worth reading and writing and i really really look forward to your next update!
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I believe this is most definitely one of the best written twilight fics and I love how the characters interact with each other. Also I hope you are doing well and continue to write this.
It's not bad but it's not perfect either.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Mucho mejor de lo que crei le doy 5☆☆☆☆☆(no se si reirme o sentir me raro o no ) pero el personaje y yo tenemos el mismo nombre y aveces siendo como si estuviera ablandado en tercera persona jejeje
First time reading a twilight FF and its pretty good[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
A great twilight story very well done. With great character interactions and story
i love the story it would be much appreciated if you do not drop it as almost all the twilight fan fics are dropped and never completed 😔
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I need more of this. One of the best fanfiction I've read so far, I've read hundreds so this is not an understatement.
Perfect in my opinion so far, not enough for a comprehensive review but that come hopefully come in due time. This story shall get all my power stones for the foreseeable future in hopes that this story continues and doesn’t get dropped.
I love this book, it's simple and light to read. I didn't even realize the chapters were over, please upload more!!![img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
This is the only twilight fan fiction I've read that's any good and continuing to post more. May you continue to bless us with chapter after chapter.
bro theres a reason why this is number 1 on popular rankings rn. the main issue with twillight fanfics is that they always do crossovers or make an oc the female lead or make the story super depressing and crindge. this ends up runing the story easily. you good sir do not have this issue. keep it up.
los capítulos fueron muy buenos, las interacciones entre personajes estuvieron bien hechas, espero que continúes esta historia hasta el final, le veo mucho potencial, lo que mas disfrute fue la parte de la vida diaria del protagonista, creo que concentrarse en ello principalmente es lo que hace que este fanfic no se vea arruinando con los poderes que le diste a tu protagonista. (solo sus poderes de vampiro ya anulan por completo cualquier problema que pueda presentar Crepúsculo, la única manera en que tenga dificultades, requeriría crossover y esto destruiría la trama de Crepúsculo)
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In my opinion, the novel is a 5 Star! But everything is subjective, so please take your time to read the novel. As mentioned in the synopsis, this novel is more slice of life orientated, so the pacing won't be fast, quite a slow burn actually. The story will initially follow the movie storyline, but the MC's actions will make it deviate from canon. The MC is absurdly OP for the world's setting, but it also gives me access for more play-around. Please don't go commenting that you dislike the novel, solely because the FML is not your preference. It's not my fault you dislike them, sorry.
Sect Master, I have come to enjoy your noble work. And I would like you to keep your blessings on all my 17 generations. Please continue your book. - Ping Clan Young Master
I honestly find this to be most entertaining both your books are very interesting I hope you continue them
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Еще мне нужно еще,больше глав,обязательно хочу дочитать именно это произведение.Удачи вам в востановлении данных,да и вообще удачи и здоровья.I also need more, more chapters, I definitely want to finish reading this particular work. Good luck to you in restoring your data, and in general, good luck and health.
this was amazing and great and i really hope you udate soon because i truly think that this fic is worth reading and writing and i really really look forward to your next update!
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I believe this is most definitely one of the best written twilight fics and I love how the characters interact with each other. Also I hope you are doing well and continue to write this.
It's not bad but it's not perfect either.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Mucho mejor de lo que crei le doy 5☆☆☆☆☆(no se si reirme o sentir me raro o no ) pero el personaje y yo tenemos el mismo nombre y aveces siendo como si estuviera ablandado en tercera persona jejeje
First time reading a twilight FF and its pretty good[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
A great twilight story very well done. With great character interactions and story
i love the story it would be much appreciated if you do not drop it as almost all the twilight fan fics are dropped and never completed 😔
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I need more of this. One of the best fanfiction I've read so far, I've read hundreds so this is not an understatement.
Perfect in my opinion so far, not enough for a comprehensive review but that come hopefully come in due time. This story shall get all my power stones for the foreseeable future in hopes that this story continues and doesn’t get dropped.
I love this book, it's simple and light to read. I didn't even realize the chapters were over, please upload more!!![img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
This is the only twilight fan fiction I've read that's any good and continuing to post more. May you continue to bless us with chapter after chapter.
bro theres a reason why this is number 1 on popular rankings rn. the main issue with twillight fanfics is that they always do crossovers or make an oc the female lead or make the story super depressing and crindge. this ends up runing the story easily. you good sir do not have this issue. keep it up.
los capítulos fueron muy buenos, las interacciones entre personajes estuvieron bien hechas, espero que continúes esta historia hasta el final, le veo mucho potencial, lo que mas disfrute fue la parte de la vida diaria del protagonista, creo que concentrarse en ello principalmente es lo que hace que este fanfic no se vea arruinando con los poderes que le diste a tu protagonista. (solo sus poderes de vampiro ya anulan por completo cualquier problema que pueda presentar Crepúsculo, la única manera en que tenga dificultades, requeriría crossover y esto destruiría la trama de Crepúsculo)
Une nouvelle fic twilight cool continue comme ça auteur [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
In my opinion, the novel is a 5 Star! But everything is subjective, so please take your time to read the novel. As mentioned in the synopsis, this novel is more slice of life orientated, so the pacing won't be fast, quite a slow burn actually. The story will initially follow the movie storyline, but the MC's actions will make it deviate from canon. The MC is absurdly OP for the world's setting, but it also gives me access for more play-around. Please don't go commenting that you dislike the novel, solely because the FML is not your preference. It's not my fault you dislike them, sorry.