One Piece: Silver-Hair Pirate

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Clown_Of_God

It is a great Chinese translation, but the change of the Chinese MC name became strange the rest is OK......................................

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TypeMoM

first of all this is just as far as i know just Chinese translation with slightly change, the first time I read this i though 'is this GPT FF?' the word just idk just fell awkward like genuinely, the writing is confusing, i just barely read to ch 3 and drop it

LV 3

Ullu_93

I just finished reading your latest chapter, and I am absolutely captivated by your storytelling! The world you've created is so vivid and immersive, and your characters are incredibly well-developed. Each plot twist keeps me on the edge of my seat, eagerly awaiting what happens next. Your hard work and dedication are evident in every word. Please keep writing and sharing your incredible talent with us. You're doing an amazing job, and I can't wait to see where the story goes from here!

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Nigaman

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LV 4

TOppBLACK

I find this story very interesting, but very repetitive in its vocabulary, it seems like it was written using artificial intelligence and did not go through any review process, in addition it lacks charisma and human touch in the writing.

LV 1

JackalVadim

I have mixed feelings about your work. On the one hand, it is interesting to read even with the Chinese style of storytelling. On the other hand, there is a feeling that the chronology of events is confused, the islands are out of place, it is not clear what is happening with the statistics, the hero is unreasonably strong in some moments, the statistics become either big or small at some moments. (it turns out that the heroes say that they have become much stronger, but in fact they are either weaker or the same as they were), Shiki is in prison, then free, then back in prison, Aokiji, Kuzan and Akainu became admirals, then became admirals again, after which they became admirals again...

LV 4

kokoilol

I don't know if this an mtl, but overall it's a good start. I'ma wait till 30 or more chapters then continue but, them 8 chp are great 👍👍. Wish ya luck on ya writing and blessings for your health.😊😊❤️

LV 4

Rotten_Water202

most crew member has D. i dont like it 🤡

LV 1

belesa_feminina

Bro... Use the hashtag overpower. The MC hasn't even left East Blue and is already one of the strongest. Furthermore, everyone in the group is a D. In short, it's pretty boring.

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Arman_lesmana

Didn't the Ohara tragedy happen before Luffy was born and when Robin was 8 years old?And in canon Robin's age is 28.................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 15

Austin_oates

the story could have been interesting but the way you wrote it killed the story. alldialoguee between characters is the same. and the fights aren't written well.

LV 6

dukroger

Having a powerful MC is fine, but growing up too quickly and easily ruins most of the stories. The systems should only serve as support, such as providing techniques, providing supplements to help with training and physical and mental strengthening, providing plants and possibility of purchasing materials to build ships and things like that, even providing haki seeds to guarantee awakening through training, both for him and the crew, but unfortunately that is not what happens here, we have yet another exaggerated story, in which the Goldfinger makes things boring instead of making things exciting and attractive.

LV 15

NotYourName

chapters are too short, written by chat GPT without much modification, the only good thing is that the story has potential, it's just ruined by bad writing

LV 1

Rick_Passos

É um trabalho sólido, espero que mantenha o nível, não liga para as críticas chatas. Muitas pessoas gostam de criticar apenas por criticar, como se fossem especialistas de algo.

LV 4

Olethros_Mania

The story is not that descriptive, if anything is more a draft of the major actions of the MC, the progression of the story is too fast in my opinion but it's still good...