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You keeping me wanting and waiting for more. Im excited for the new setting that's different from usual any MHA ff. Keep up the good work. I love it! 👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️
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Writing this to support author this is pretty good I love his abilities but the problem with the decline in support is probably how the relationships seem somewhat forced and how he join UA and the 6-7 spiders strong as all might which I don’t see as a problem I enjoy reading this so don’t let peoples opions affect your work of this fanfic
Overall great story it's a slow build up but hey it's not like you'll are rushing to go anywhere anyway good job on the story author the writing and update stability so far are great
I've been enjoying the book. I admit I think it's been getting slower with less action, but it is still very good overall.
frankly speaking the story is well written and had a decent amount of world and power system building for our MC but also in a way that would make sense for such a high power scale verse such as mha when uIthink about how some characters can negate gravity or manipulate time
Don’t mind the haters, so far from what I’ve reading this stuff you are cooking here is pure fire, on a side note, I would like to formally make an official request to have Mirko, Mina and Ryuko added to the harem!!!
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it doesn't make sense at all. mc is getting controlled by girls and all. how will he develop concurer haki? and it's literally too much. I started hating a few characters.
This story had quite a bit of potential. Even though the author gave the MC a ridiculously OP quirk, I would have still enjoyed it if the novel progressed in a way that didn’t just follow cannon, which is what should have definitely happened. The MC is a mentally unstable man, who has been through multiple ‘maturation’ instances that the author could have used to shape him into a much more focused and logical character, but instead the author just made his personality completely flip 180 on multiple occasions in order to force the plot. The author spent something like 60 chapters trying to develop the characters and their relationships with each other and the world, painting the picture of an MC who is completely distrustful of outsiders, is anti-government/hero, and is already as powerful as All-Might before canon starts, and then in like 1 chapter, Nezu offers him a special license and some connections if he goes to school like a good little boy and all of the character development flies right out the window. Plus, from the moment he starts school, he suddenly becomes a literal brat, nagging at teachers about how he doesn’t have to be there and how much better he is than everyone else. It’s such a dramatic shift that I can’t even continue trying to read this. And don’t even get me started on everybody crying all the time. Even by the time I stopped reading, multiple characters, including the MC, STILL break out in tears at a memory or reference of his parents. It’s been over 10 years already, are you telling me that heroes, and an adult man who has lived two lives still aren’t mature enough to deal with death? They are so emotionally stunted that they can’t even grieve properly? The tone change was so jarring that I don’t think there’s any way back from this without a complete re-write. Would not recommend reading this
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the prologue is way too long! these powers are totally buggy and the author throws in countless amounts of information to make things appear normal. There are also inconsistencies within the relationships of the characters who are not supposed to know each other. The reactions of the characters are not logical with their characters and their profession. Midnight may be a good person but she's not going to cry like a fountain every 5 minutes or boil with anger! we must take into account that she is a heroine and must have seen many more tragic and sad things so she should have had a calm or even cold attitude towards the situation
The prologue is too long, and the story development is poor........................................................................................................................
I'm dropping this for a few reasons. 1. I don't like how fast he became so overpowered. It really takes away from the intensity of anything since he's already as strong or stronger than All Might before the canon even starts. So why would I need to continue reading when I know every fight is gonna end with him winning? That's boring unless it's a gag character like Saitama from One Punch Man. 2. He is so goddamn rude and arrogant to the other students. Bro they are literal children why tf are he being such a d*ckhead for no reason. And don't give me no bullsh*t like it's because of trauma. 3. The characters around Kai cater to him and don't call out when he's being a dick (except Momo sometime) and it's stupid. Most of the people around him are grown adults but believe this dude can do no wrong.
As others have said, this story is incredibly slow, and is mostly focused on the mc training in the early chapters, a lot, my main issue in the story comes from the interactions between characters. What I mean is that the main character has not grown as a person, now you can argue, “well if it’s a slow paced story, development is meant to be slow” but I’d like to argue, the longer it takes for a character to develop, the less likely I am to stick around to wait for the development to finally occur, he acts like a child even though he’s been introduced as this genius by taking out his anger on people who haven’t done anything wrong to him, he’s basically just a stronger Bakugo with worse attitude issues. And when other characters *cough cough* Momo keep trying to force him to do things, it makes him more volatile, but then he’ll roll over and do what she wants, and she keeps inserting herself into his business and inviting other people into his spaces then when he reacts bad, he’s wrong. And yes, there are some characters that he does have good relationships with, but he’s still a douche to 90% of them who haven’t done anything to deserve it. TLDR: The story is slow and the mc has yet to make any significant personality changes for the better, no I’m not saying to make him a self sacrificing person, that’s not his personality, just to be a decent human
MC is an unlikable arrogant prick that hates the idea of being a hero. The FF started really well, but it slowly started to get worse and worse, really falling when the MC tells the police chief to his face that he will kill his enemies in the future. The MC just gets progressively worse until he starts knocking people out in school and acting like an asshole to everyone. Some people will say “he had a difficult 2 lives” and some bullshit, but no matter how difficult your life was doesn’t mean you get to act like an asshole. No excuse you could make would make me like this MC, and the way the girls just ignore how bad his personality is towards other people is stupid, especially Momo who sees how he treats his classmates and even heroes.
ok first things first it's a good work but is it amazing then no far from it it laterally took me 50 something chapters to see any kind of development from anyone other than the main character we didn't get any glimpse of any enemy except bioblast the more i read i try not to cringe and like most of the mha fanfics out there of course you included momo and hado in this somehow probably going to make them both his main love interest and probably midnight too somewhere along the line like the power systems you put are one of the most versatile but you didn't take advantage of that you could have copied some reference from hxh like gon rock paper scissors or kilua electricity
I like the slow pace in this novel, the world background and development is quite good. The mc slowly makes more abilitys and shows more abilitys through out the story which always keeps me exicted. All the bad reviews on this novel are from people do appreaciate a good webnovel and skip chapter cause they want the mc to be in ua within the first 4 chapters. Overall a lovely novel
This novel is actually pretty good past chapter 40. If there is one word I’d use to describe this fanfic….
Una buena lectura con una gramática y traducción fluida, la historia es entretenida y lo es más el MC con su Nen y Haki aprovechando su intelecto y resaltar su versatilidad y creatividad al desarrollar sus habilidades
Shotacon? Nah, pego minha baike e dou o fora daqui. .................. .............................. ......... ....................... .............................
It's slow for awhile but if you persevere you get rewarded with a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters and the how they aren't copies of their anime selves. The prologue was refreshing since it's not like all the other isekai'd fanfics. I like the MC's personality and I'm excited to see how he interacts and shocks the other students of UA. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you never end up doing another long part, similar to the prologue leading up to UA.
it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone
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Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one
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You keeping me wanting and waiting for more. Im excited for the new setting that's different from usual any MHA ff. Keep up the good work. I love it! 👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️
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Writing this to support author this is pretty good I love his abilities but the problem with the decline in support is probably how the relationships seem somewhat forced and how he join UA and the 6-7 spiders strong as all might which I don’t see as a problem I enjoy reading this so don’t let peoples opions affect your work of this fanfic
Overall great story it's a slow build up but hey it's not like you'll are rushing to go anywhere anyway good job on the story author the writing and update stability so far are great
I've been enjoying the book. I admit I think it's been getting slower with less action, but it is still very good overall.
frankly speaking the story is well written and had a decent amount of world and power system building for our MC but also in a way that would make sense for such a high power scale verse such as mha when uIthink about how some characters can negate gravity or manipulate time
Don’t mind the haters, so far from what I’ve reading this stuff you are cooking here is pure fire, on a side note, I would like to formally make an official request to have Mirko, Mina and Ryuko added to the harem!!!
I only write this because it doesnt hurt me and its a good novel. Ignore the Rest. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words. I need a 140 words.
it doesn't make sense at all. mc is getting controlled by girls and all. how will he develop concurer haki? and it's literally too much. I started hating a few characters.
This story had quite a bit of potential. Even though the author gave the MC a ridiculously OP quirk, I would have still enjoyed it if the novel progressed in a way that didn’t just follow cannon, which is what should have definitely happened. The MC is a mentally unstable man, who has been through multiple ‘maturation’ instances that the author could have used to shape him into a much more focused and logical character, but instead the author just made his personality completely flip 180 on multiple occasions in order to force the plot. The author spent something like 60 chapters trying to develop the characters and their relationships with each other and the world, painting the picture of an MC who is completely distrustful of outsiders, is anti-government/hero, and is already as powerful as All-Might before canon starts, and then in like 1 chapter, Nezu offers him a special license and some connections if he goes to school like a good little boy and all of the character development flies right out the window. Plus, from the moment he starts school, he suddenly becomes a literal brat, nagging at teachers about how he doesn’t have to be there and how much better he is than everyone else. It’s such a dramatic shift that I can’t even continue trying to read this. And don’t even get me started on everybody crying all the time. Even by the time I stopped reading, multiple characters, including the MC, STILL break out in tears at a memory or reference of his parents. It’s been over 10 years already, are you telling me that heroes, and an adult man who has lived two lives still aren’t mature enough to deal with death? They are so emotionally stunted that they can’t even grieve properly? The tone change was so jarring that I don’t think there’s any way back from this without a complete re-write. Would not recommend reading this
ネタバレを明かす the prologue is way too long! these powers are totally buggy and the author throws in countless amounts of information to make things appear normal. There are also inconsistencies within the relationships of the characters who are not supposed to know each other. The reactions of the characters are not logical with their characters and their profession. Midnight may be a good person but she's not going to cry like a fountain every 5 minutes or boil with anger! we must take into account that she is a heroine and must have seen many more tragic and sad things so she should have had a calm or even cold attitude towards the situation
The prologue is too long, and the story development is poor........................................................................................................................
I'm dropping this for a few reasons. 1. I don't like how fast he became so overpowered. It really takes away from the intensity of anything since he's already as strong or stronger than All Might before the canon even starts. So why would I need to continue reading when I know every fight is gonna end with him winning? That's boring unless it's a gag character like Saitama from One Punch Man. 2. He is so goddamn rude and arrogant to the other students. Bro they are literal children why tf are he being such a d*ckhead for no reason. And don't give me no bullsh*t like it's because of trauma. 3. The characters around Kai cater to him and don't call out when he's being a dick (except Momo sometime) and it's stupid. Most of the people around him are grown adults but believe this dude can do no wrong.
As others have said, this story is incredibly slow, and is mostly focused on the mc training in the early chapters, a lot, my main issue in the story comes from the interactions between characters. What I mean is that the main character has not grown as a person, now you can argue, “well if it’s a slow paced story, development is meant to be slow” but I’d like to argue, the longer it takes for a character to develop, the less likely I am to stick around to wait for the development to finally occur, he acts like a child even though he’s been introduced as this genius by taking out his anger on people who haven’t done anything wrong to him, he’s basically just a stronger Bakugo with worse attitude issues. And when other characters *cough cough* Momo keep trying to force him to do things, it makes him more volatile, but then he’ll roll over and do what she wants, and she keeps inserting herself into his business and inviting other people into his spaces then when he reacts bad, he’s wrong. And yes, there are some characters that he does have good relationships with, but he’s still a douche to 90% of them who haven’t done anything to deserve it. TLDR: The story is slow and the mc has yet to make any significant personality changes for the better, no I’m not saying to make him a self sacrificing person, that’s not his personality, just to be a decent human
MC is an unlikable arrogant prick that hates the idea of being a hero. The FF started really well, but it slowly started to get worse and worse, really falling when the MC tells the police chief to his face that he will kill his enemies in the future. The MC just gets progressively worse until he starts knocking people out in school and acting like an asshole to everyone. Some people will say “he had a difficult 2 lives” and some bullshit, but no matter how difficult your life was doesn’t mean you get to act like an asshole. No excuse you could make would make me like this MC, and the way the girls just ignore how bad his personality is towards other people is stupid, especially Momo who sees how he treats his classmates and even heroes.
ok first things first it's a good work but is it amazing then no far from it it laterally took me 50 something chapters to see any kind of development from anyone other than the main character we didn't get any glimpse of any enemy except bioblast the more i read i try not to cringe and like most of the mha fanfics out there of course you included momo and hado in this somehow probably going to make them both his main love interest and probably midnight too somewhere along the line like the power systems you put are one of the most versatile but you didn't take advantage of that you could have copied some reference from hxh like gon rock paper scissors or kilua electricity
I like the slow pace in this novel, the world background and development is quite good. The mc slowly makes more abilitys and shows more abilitys through out the story which always keeps me exicted. All the bad reviews on this novel are from people do appreaciate a good webnovel and skip chapter cause they want the mc to be in ua within the first 4 chapters. Overall a lovely novel
This novel is actually pretty good past chapter 40. If there is one word I’d use to describe this fanfic….
Una buena lectura con una gramática y traducción fluida, la historia es entretenida y lo es más el MC con su Nen y Haki aprovechando su intelecto y resaltar su versatilidad y creatividad al desarrollar sus habilidades
Shotacon? Nah, pego minha baike e dou o fora daqui. .................. .............................. ......... ....................... .............................
It's slow for awhile but if you persevere you get rewarded with a good story. I like the dynamic between the characters and the how they aren't copies of their anime selves. The prologue was refreshing since it's not like all the other isekai'd fanfics. I like the MC's personality and I'm excited to see how he interacts and shocks the other students of UA. Keep up the good work. Though I hope you never end up doing another long part, similar to the prologue leading up to UA.
it's well written and and interesting idea to me, but 40 chapters in and it's just constant depression and self blame. the constant info dumps are boring and distract me lol. oh and at this point, don't expect the Mc to actually care about anyone. author made it so he's such a whiny loser that he's already given up on making friends, lovers, family members, he has those, but doesn't want them to be a distraction because his whole purpose to become stronger is so he can protect his mommy in his next life, if he gets one lol. I really enjoyed this for a bit, info dumps waiting but whatever, but I'm just tired of reading it lol. whatever progress does get made in personal relationships seems like he doesn't want it, but just goes with the flow to not upset anyone
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Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one