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Another great and fresh concept with bad execution, this have a lot of potential but wasted. What am I expect from mtl 😮💨-------------------------------------------------------------------
Its great, one of the best fanfics imp. The translting is lacking in some aspects, nothing to bad or anything that will ruin the experience but some terms appear that is not well translated like aunt, or lozai but few.
First the mistakes in translation and the Chinese elements, in one hapter MC calls kidao aunt kaido and this my personal opinion if anyone likes it then they are good but i don't like it personally
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Shamless review of Author here, If you have any questions please dropt it below and i shall do my best to answer [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
I love how the story progresses and the MC, This is one of my most favorite One piece fan fictions i have come bout [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
This is one of the most original fanfic i seen, takes place 10 years before canon, MC is strong, intelligent and manipulative. He works all sides and benefits the most
PLEASE MORE I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great, Its really original and well written, the story makes sense and is well throughout.... actions and reactiosn also make perfect sense,
This one is very original (that betrayer system) and overall the characters act roughly how they should so this fic while it shakes canon greatly is very good The true only Bad thing here is the translation/grammar Its pretty readable most of the times but when something is off its off Hard, as an little example some expressions like Laozi or huangquang i had to look up online to see what was that refering That and sometimes characters either swap in conversations or are missnamed (i found a xiaohe it was kinda hilarious tho) Overall very good read tbh
its decent but kinda confusing to read..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Another great and fresh concept with bad execution, this have a lot of potential but wasted. What am I expect from mtl 😮💨-------------------------------------------------------------------
Its great, one of the best fanfics imp. The translting is lacking in some aspects, nothing to bad or anything that will ruin the experience but some terms appear that is not well translated like aunt, or lozai but few.
First the mistakes in translation and the Chinese elements, in one hapter MC calls kidao aunt kaido and this my personal opinion if anyone likes it then they are good but i don't like it personally
Love it [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Shamless review of Author here, If you have any questions please dropt it below and i shall do my best to answer [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
I love how the story progresses and the MC, This is one of my most favorite One piece fan fictions i have come bout [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
This is one of the most original fanfic i seen, takes place 10 years before canon, MC is strong, intelligent and manipulative. He works all sides and benefits the most
PLEASE MORE I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great, Its really original and well written, the story makes sense and is well throughout.... actions and reactiosn also make perfect sense,
This one is very original (that betrayer system) and overall the characters act roughly how they should so this fic while it shakes canon greatly is very good The true only Bad thing here is the translation/grammar Its pretty readable most of the times but when something is off its off Hard, as an little example some expressions like Laozi or huangquang i had to look up online to see what was that refering That and sometimes characters either swap in conversations or are missnamed (i found a xiaohe it was kinda hilarious tho) Overall very good read tbh
its decent but kinda confusing to read..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................