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Homelander is Greatly nerfed in this his power Fluctuats too much. the Author has him take great damage from minor Superpowered individuals and then randomly Cook them with some attack. The MC probably can get cooked by Captain America due to the way the author rights his stuff.
All caught up! D*rn it! I mean, 17 chapters gone in a flash. One second I was in chapter one and before I blink… Chapter 17? Genjutsu?
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This is literally the best book I have ever read! Go support the author on patreon! I promise he deserves it. Cobra Kai never dies!
Muy buena tu historia, muy entretenida y gustable de leer espero más capitulos pronto o si tienes capítulos adelantados en Patreon para apoyarte y me gustaría saber si Michell se unirá a los vengadores como Homelander estaría epico y me gustaría mucho por favor. Nos gustaría saber también si ya tienes pensado alguna protagonista femenina o la historia no tendrá nada de eso, por favor si hay protagonista femenina me gustaría que fuera Natasha o Wanda la verdad es que son mis favoritas 🥹
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honestly the only thing that this story needs is more frequent updates also maybe have mc train his powers and not waste away yeah yeah he has the serum but he can train and then have the better serum injected in which would allow him to unlock better powers cough cough energy absorption
I'm a simple man
Same as the rest of this guy's fics, plot convenience after plot convenience, only read this if there is absolutely nothing else for you to do, you time is worth more than this.
Writing Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design 5.0 star World Background The total score need more its the one novel that got that thing
When the author got 2 other good fanfics but starts a new one💀💀 Haven’t read any atm, but I trust that the 5 stars is deserved by the author.
I was wondering who made such a great fanfic and I realized it's the same person who's writing "A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI." Continue the good work. Or else...
Really good book and has an interesting premise. Also the MC has a lot of potential to grow if he makes the right decisions so I’m really liking it so far.
Seriously, This is the best marvel/The Boys crossover I have ever read! Please don’t drop this book and make me lose my mind!
now there haven't been much chapters released so far but from what I've read and from his work on one of his other novels i kinda trust the author on what he's doing now for my review -The writing quality has been good so far like i said it's readable. -The story development is good in a way though even though the story has an antihero tag I'm kinda scared there may be too much homelander in him so far though we'll see where it goes from here and if i had a gripe it would be on his decision to meet fisk instead of someone somewhat trustworthy like tony even if he's still a weapons dealer or since the mutans exists reed Richards, yes know he isn't sure of that yet but you know. -the character design is awesome so far an in character with those introduced so far. update stability is where I'm not sure as the author has his attention divided between three stories two of which I like and one I do not -the world background hasn't been really explored but it's ok. all in all it's a good read so far let's see how it goes.
It's surprisingly good, the other book the "author" is busy with is really good so I decided to give this a try and was pleasantly surprised. Give it a try, you'll probably enjoy it.
Bro I dropped ur tech fiction cuz I felt u were too hasty and made super fast progress I hope u don’t do the same here the novels looks promising take ur time to map the plot and plz no harem casual seggs okay until a parented
the first three chapters are very good, honestly I wouldn't even mind you dropping the tech system fic for this, and I like that fic alot
Does the MC have the strength of Homelander from the series or comics? Because no matter the case he won't be as strong as other MCU heavyweights but at least he'll be a little better if he's from the comics since he's stronger there than any other super, apart from Black Noir who is a clone of him , while in the series he can be fought by other supers who are a little weaker than him such as soldier boy, stormfront and queen meave
Hey Author here giving himself a really good review that may or may not be biased.
Homelander is Greatly nerfed in this his power Fluctuats too much. the Author has him take great damage from minor Superpowered individuals and then randomly Cook them with some attack. The MC probably can get cooked by Captain America due to the way the author rights his stuff.
All caught up! D*rn it! I mean, 17 chapters gone in a flash. One second I was in chapter one and before I blink… Chapter 17? Genjutsu?
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This is literally the best book I have ever read! Go support the author on patreon! I promise he deserves it. Cobra Kai never dies!
Muy buena tu historia, muy entretenida y gustable de leer espero más capitulos pronto o si tienes capítulos adelantados en Patreon para apoyarte y me gustaría saber si Michell se unirá a los vengadores como Homelander estaría epico y me gustaría mucho por favor. Nos gustaría saber también si ya tienes pensado alguna protagonista femenina o la historia no tendrá nada de eso, por favor si hay protagonista femenina me gustaría que fuera Natasha o Wanda la verdad es que son mis favoritas 🥹
ネタバレを明かす honestly the only thing that this story needs is more frequent updates also maybe have mc train his powers and not waste away yeah yeah he has the serum but he can train and then have the better serum injected in which would allow him to unlock better powers cough cough energy absorption
I'm a simple man
Same as the rest of this guy's fics, plot convenience after plot convenience, only read this if there is absolutely nothing else for you to do, you time is worth more than this.
Writing Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design 5.0 star World Background The total score need more its the one novel that got that thing
When the author got 2 other good fanfics but starts a new one💀💀 Haven’t read any atm, but I trust that the 5 stars is deserved by the author.
I was wondering who made such a great fanfic and I realized it's the same person who's writing "A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI." Continue the good work. Or else...
Really good book and has an interesting premise. Also the MC has a lot of potential to grow if he makes the right decisions so I’m really liking it so far.
Seriously, This is the best marvel/The Boys crossover I have ever read! Please don’t drop this book and make me lose my mind!
now there haven't been much chapters released so far but from what I've read and from his work on one of his other novels i kinda trust the author on what he's doing now for my review -The writing quality has been good so far like i said it's readable. -The story development is good in a way though even though the story has an antihero tag I'm kinda scared there may be too much homelander in him so far though we'll see where it goes from here and if i had a gripe it would be on his decision to meet fisk instead of someone somewhat trustworthy like tony even if he's still a weapons dealer or since the mutans exists reed Richards, yes know he isn't sure of that yet but you know. -the character design is awesome so far an in character with those introduced so far. update stability is where I'm not sure as the author has his attention divided between three stories two of which I like and one I do not -the world background hasn't been really explored but it's ok. all in all it's a good read so far let's see how it goes.
It's surprisingly good, the other book the "author" is busy with is really good so I decided to give this a try and was pleasantly surprised. Give it a try, you'll probably enjoy it.
Bro I dropped ur tech fiction cuz I felt u were too hasty and made super fast progress I hope u don’t do the same here the novels looks promising take ur time to map the plot and plz no harem casual seggs okay until a parented
the first three chapters are very good, honestly I wouldn't even mind you dropping the tech system fic for this, and I like that fic alot
Does the MC have the strength of Homelander from the series or comics? Because no matter the case he won't be as strong as other MCU heavyweights but at least he'll be a little better if he's from the comics since he's stronger there than any other super, apart from Black Noir who is a clone of him , while in the series he can be fought by other supers who are a little weaker than him such as soldier boy, stormfront and queen meave
Hey Author here giving himself a really good review that may or may not be biased.