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レビューを書くWhat a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.
I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!
I have only read to like 123 but I am loving the book but could u please get ur XP right. like when he killed one of the bosses in the labyrinth (lv 2-5) he got like 150xp but he then kills a lv 13 orc outside the labyrinth and got only 150 like what this isn't mathing right.
Hold up I can review this again? Did my previous one get taken down? Coz I checked another new WebNovel and couldn’t post another review
This is some real good stuff….do give it a read for sure. The characters are interesting, there is a good storyline. The author loves making us readers happy…especially with those cliffhangers 👀
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i am thinking about starting this novel after reading some comment i don't mind many girls i just don't want to read many R18 chapter i mean some are okay after long chapter but i truly don't want to read a porn i dont't read it so I will change my review after reading it
Amazing story with a more "realistic" transmigration, which escapes the most well-known clichés. I see the potential for it to have thousands of chapters, something I honestly hope for, since we are still on just one continent and there is the possibility of expanding to different worlds... maybe? Note: I hope they add a yandere to the harem...
It is not the best piece of literature I have ever seen, but as far as this site goes, it's a 5/5 rare to see such writing quality and development of both story and characters.
The novel is really good. Author, I would like to know how many girls are in the harem? I am talking about the last chapters, if it is not a secret. I do not care about spoilers
good world building very good story progression (not to slow but also not to fast) Nice characters (but a few could use a little more depth sooner ore later <3 )
This is worth reading, its enjoyable, the world background is well built and the story is good develops at a good pace, fights have about the right presence and its not a simple leveling slugfest like most novels here. The characters are interresting, although their speach might be a bit akward and too lengthy a tad cringy at times, especially in the first chapters, but the author clearly improves fast chapter after chapter. The MC is a bit shaky with the 'submit to me stuff' being a bit out of place, but overall its interresting and the type of villain angle imagined by the author is a good choice
Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.
The world is a bit discordant. The power of field mobs and dungeon mobs is wildly disproportionate, for instance, and the level scaling feels multiplicative even when it's supposedly additive. A level 2 boss destroying a stone environment, for instance, which is greater than a level 22 field mob who didn't cause much damage to trees. A level 5 boss being quite capable of beating said level 22 field mob. The cost/benefit of things is also strange, the cost of armor against the destructive potential of mobs would make tanks almost impossible, especially with how little vitality as a stat means in comparison to the rest, but many of the humans encountered are tanks. And armor is prevalent, which is good because it looks awesome, but not effective in any real way while being quite expensive despite that. I get that writing maintenance isn't sexy, but it feels like a waste to spend a chapter gushing on how awesome the armor is and then focus entirely on dodging because one hit will scrap it. Otherwise it's really good. The people feel real, the interactions between them are fun to read, and the story is solid. My only complaint is the world, really, otherwise it'd be awesome.
one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed
Its a good novel, nothing to say about it if i dont say the good points. For those who only read free chapters like me its slow as fk because in 28 chapters the mc only gained 1 lvl in 2 of the 4 classes that he have (1 lvl each) and keeps beign poor and dont know nothing about the world so its like the first 5 minutes of every anime, thats how much slow paced is this at the start but is good, i dont have the patience to read the things that will happen and less if i know it like this time because u can see easily how the history is going
I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.
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good story, I like the novel, god tier for sure. I have a few suggestions: the 'Villain' part doesn't feel strong enough, sure he has thief and slave master and a few crimes here and there but there is always a reason, I feel like in order to be a villain, there is a need for a hero, but the usual young master trash bad guy doesn't feel very heroic. I wanna see the hero's party, corrupt the heroine, corrupt the cleric/saint/angel girl. dig some young master ancestors graves, rob some legacy or dungeon, steal the bride, I am also missing a demon/succubus/vampire girl who does the bad things for him thinking she deserves praise like stealing the princess or training some crazy girl who otherwise wouldn't make the cut.
assuming that I only read the novel up to chapter 274, I can't understand why the protagonist hasn't evolved his warrior class, if anyone can explain it to me I'll be very grateful. other than that I really like the novel and will continue reading it.
it is a great story.. different from many generic harem Novels i read the females characters are well written.. keep up the great work Author, 👍👍
Solid in many ways, MC is pretty odd, a mixture of a relatively normal character and outlook considering his situation who flips to extremely cringe on a regular basis. The constant flips are not at all relevant other than making you dislike the MC and make him come across as honestly pretty creepy. Without that complaint there is a lot to like for this kind of story.
Story is pretty good Slaves are bought with moral clauses Mc is ok fairly smart My personal issue is the pace of the story. 3 chapters just shopping for the first slave… Not sure I want to uses passes on it, we ll see if I ll continue reading
These are the sort of villains I love to write in my stories getting brutally murdered and tortured, it makes for the most satisfying deaths. Thank you for writing this novel author and giving me so many good ideas for these antagonist :)
great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..
Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.
What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.
I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!
I have only read to like 123 but I am loving the book but could u please get ur XP right. like when he killed one of the bosses in the labyrinth (lv 2-5) he got like 150xp but he then kills a lv 13 orc outside the labyrinth and got only 150 like what this isn't mathing right.
Hold up I can review this again? Did my previous one get taken down? Coz I checked another new WebNovel and couldn’t post another review
This is some real good stuff….do give it a read for sure. The characters are interesting, there is a good storyline. The author loves making us readers happy…especially with those cliffhangers 👀
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i am thinking about starting this novel after reading some comment i don't mind many girls i just don't want to read many R18 chapter i mean some are okay after long chapter but i truly don't want to read a porn i dont't read it so I will change my review after reading it
Amazing story with a more "realistic" transmigration, which escapes the most well-known clichés. I see the potential for it to have thousands of chapters, something I honestly hope for, since we are still on just one continent and there is the possibility of expanding to different worlds... maybe? Note: I hope they add a yandere to the harem...
It is not the best piece of literature I have ever seen, but as far as this site goes, it's a 5/5 rare to see such writing quality and development of both story and characters.
The novel is really good. Author, I would like to know how many girls are in the harem? I am talking about the last chapters, if it is not a secret. I do not care about spoilers
good world building very good story progression (not to slow but also not to fast) Nice characters (but a few could use a little more depth sooner ore later <3 )
This is worth reading, its enjoyable, the world background is well built and the story is good develops at a good pace, fights have about the right presence and its not a simple leveling slugfest like most novels here. The characters are interresting, although their speach might be a bit akward and too lengthy a tad cringy at times, especially in the first chapters, but the author clearly improves fast chapter after chapter. The MC is a bit shaky with the 'submit to me stuff' being a bit out of place, but overall its interresting and the type of villain angle imagined by the author is a good choice
Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.
The world is a bit discordant. The power of field mobs and dungeon mobs is wildly disproportionate, for instance, and the level scaling feels multiplicative even when it's supposedly additive. A level 2 boss destroying a stone environment, for instance, which is greater than a level 22 field mob who didn't cause much damage to trees. A level 5 boss being quite capable of beating said level 22 field mob. The cost/benefit of things is also strange, the cost of armor against the destructive potential of mobs would make tanks almost impossible, especially with how little vitality as a stat means in comparison to the rest, but many of the humans encountered are tanks. And armor is prevalent, which is good because it looks awesome, but not effective in any real way while being quite expensive despite that. I get that writing maintenance isn't sexy, but it feels like a waste to spend a chapter gushing on how awesome the armor is and then focus entirely on dodging because one hit will scrap it. Otherwise it's really good. The people feel real, the interactions between them are fun to read, and the story is solid. My only complaint is the world, really, otherwise it'd be awesome.
one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed
Its a good novel, nothing to say about it if i dont say the good points. For those who only read free chapters like me its slow as fk because in 28 chapters the mc only gained 1 lvl in 2 of the 4 classes that he have (1 lvl each) and keeps beign poor and dont know nothing about the world so its like the first 5 minutes of every anime, thats how much slow paced is this at the start but is good, i dont have the patience to read the things that will happen and less if i know it like this time because u can see easily how the history is going
I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.
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good story, I like the novel, god tier for sure. I have a few suggestions: the 'Villain' part doesn't feel strong enough, sure he has thief and slave master and a few crimes here and there but there is always a reason, I feel like in order to be a villain, there is a need for a hero, but the usual young master trash bad guy doesn't feel very heroic. I wanna see the hero's party, corrupt the heroine, corrupt the cleric/saint/angel girl. dig some young master ancestors graves, rob some legacy or dungeon, steal the bride, I am also missing a demon/succubus/vampire girl who does the bad things for him thinking she deserves praise like stealing the princess or training some crazy girl who otherwise wouldn't make the cut.
assuming that I only read the novel up to chapter 274, I can't understand why the protagonist hasn't evolved his warrior class, if anyone can explain it to me I'll be very grateful. other than that I really like the novel and will continue reading it.
it is a great story.. different from many generic harem Novels i read the females characters are well written.. keep up the great work Author, 👍👍
Solid in many ways, MC is pretty odd, a mixture of a relatively normal character and outlook considering his situation who flips to extremely cringe on a regular basis. The constant flips are not at all relevant other than making you dislike the MC and make him come across as honestly pretty creepy. Without that complaint there is a lot to like for this kind of story.
Story is pretty good Slaves are bought with moral clauses Mc is ok fairly smart My personal issue is the pace of the story. 3 chapters just shopping for the first slave… Not sure I want to uses passes on it, we ll see if I ll continue reading
These are the sort of villains I love to write in my stories getting brutally murdered and tortured, it makes for the most satisfying deaths. Thank you for writing this novel author and giving me so many good ideas for these antagonist :)
great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..
Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.