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In the beginning i was not sure if i should read it but this fanfiction is really amazing. The story is exciting and keeps you interested the whole time. The writing is clear and well-done, which makes it easy and fun to read. I recommend it to anyone looking for a great fanfiction.
I will start this by saying I am a massive high school DXD fan. The author gives us a great blend of high school DXD while maintaining a fanfic. I am 86 chapters in so far and there’s been hiccups but overall a very good fanfic I recommend all high school DXD fans and or fan fake fans or anime fans to give it a try get the chapter 20-25 before you give it up. trust me it gets way. Better good job author Keep up the good work.
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I'll give it 4 stars for being entertaining to read, the MC isn't annoying, it's not beta and it grows quite fast in strength. It bothers me a bit that he shares some traits with Issei (like stripping girls in combat); I hate the decision of the MC having two different evil pieces (pawn and knight) even being an AU it bothers me but the rest was decent Ig.
The Story has alot of potential. keep it up author. I love it! 🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]
I'm sorry, I can only contribute 2 power stones, I just hope to get a lot of chapters, but I'm afraid that if I'm too hasty it will lower the quality of your writing😁🙏
A great story, I recommend you check it out as it has a very interesting development (my opinion)
It's a story that I'm really loving, the things I didn't like were resolved. In my opinion, it's a great story, nothing more to say.
The work is good in itself, I only see some minimal problems, which would be: the fact that the lemons are not made explicit, It's only said that something happened but it doesn't show anything other than kisses, and the fact that the MC's personality is very Inconsistent and confusing. That said, the rest is quite pleasant and fun.
This story is quite enjoyable to read with the changes that have been made to the making it a different from other dxd fanfics
High originality. A good pace of narration. I recomend to read this fic.[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best dxd novels i have seen on a while i like the world mix 100% recomended …………………….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,………………………………………………………..…………. ………………….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,………………………………………………………..…………. ………………….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,………………………………………………………..………….
Very good story, his relationship with Rías doesn't convince me either. In my opinion the protagonist is a bit SIMP. The changes in the personality of the protagonist seemed very fast to me, because he suddenly went from being a slightly cold and distant character to being a SIMP protagonist as I mentioned before. In general, a good story, it has points that do not convince me, but it is my opinion.
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Honestly, this is really well done, y'all; it has pretty good pacing and decent grammar. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
This fanfic follows a reincarnator who knows a little about DXD. Badr, by being a reincarnator, doesn't have some system or plot knowing, but he has some interesting Sacred Gear. I am also excited because of sword and shield. Because Ddraig's power is somewhat boring, I want some less upgrading and more mc's training and his obstacles. So, I appreciate that the author created this unique fanfic!
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First off, I recommend starting this story from chapter 4 and pretending rias arrived too late to save MC from raynare. The story is pretty good so far, it’s a mashup with other anime and Dxd. Intro is a little poisonous though where rias deliberately lets the MC die to gain a powerful servant and then they both act like it’s no big deal. Even koneko was in on the plot. Just block the first couple chaps from your mind and the story is good
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Me gusta como agregaste a la historia a Mai y el mundo mashup que estas planteando estaré en la espera de mas capitulos
Great story, I don't particularly like Rias's peerage so his relationship with Mai really pleases me, the fact that it's a harem worries me
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It's always interesting seeing an author change wordings and try to shift the terminology away from Christian iconography. Terms like Divine Realm rather than Heaven. It makes sense, though I'd question why the author doesn't just make an original novel with similar characters. There's always the less popular fanfic option where the familiar cast is set in a semi original world. There's a smaller audience, but it also excludes the group that gets butt hurt over deviations from the original. Good luck author. This is not an easy tightrope to walk.
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In the beginning i was not sure if i should read it but this fanfiction is really amazing. The story is exciting and keeps you interested the whole time. The writing is clear and well-done, which makes it easy and fun to read. I recommend it to anyone looking for a great fanfiction.
I will start this by saying I am a massive high school DXD fan. The author gives us a great blend of high school DXD while maintaining a fanfic. I am 86 chapters in so far and there’s been hiccups but overall a very good fanfic I recommend all high school DXD fans and or fan fake fans or anime fans to give it a try get the chapter 20-25 before you give it up. trust me it gets way. Better good job author Keep up the good work.
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
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I'll give it 4 stars for being entertaining to read, the MC isn't annoying, it's not beta and it grows quite fast in strength. It bothers me a bit that he shares some traits with Issei (like stripping girls in combat); I hate the decision of the MC having two different evil pieces (pawn and knight) even being an AU it bothers me but the rest was decent Ig.
The Story has alot of potential. keep it up author. I love it! 🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]🎀[img=recommend]
I'm sorry, I can only contribute 2 power stones, I just hope to get a lot of chapters, but I'm afraid that if I'm too hasty it will lower the quality of your writing😁🙏
A great story, I recommend you check it out as it has a very interesting development (my opinion)
It's a story that I'm really loving, the things I didn't like were resolved. In my opinion, it's a great story, nothing more to say.
The work is good in itself, I only see some minimal problems, which would be: the fact that the lemons are not made explicit, It's only said that something happened but it doesn't show anything other than kisses, and the fact that the MC's personality is very Inconsistent and confusing. That said, the rest is quite pleasant and fun.
This story is quite enjoyable to read with the changes that have been made to the making it a different from other dxd fanfics
High originality. A good pace of narration. I recomend to read this fic.[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best dxd novels i have seen on a while i like the world mix 100% recomended …………………….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,………………………………………………………..…………. ………………….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,………………………………………………………..…………. ………………….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,………………………………………………………..………….
Very good story, his relationship with Rías doesn't convince me either. In my opinion the protagonist is a bit SIMP. The changes in the personality of the protagonist seemed very fast to me, because he suddenly went from being a slightly cold and distant character to being a SIMP protagonist as I mentioned before. In general, a good story, it has points that do not convince me, but it is my opinion.
Characters are written wery well[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Honestly, this is really well done, y'all; it has pretty good pacing and decent grammar. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
This fanfic follows a reincarnator who knows a little about DXD. Badr, by being a reincarnator, doesn't have some system or plot knowing, but he has some interesting Sacred Gear. I am also excited because of sword and shield. Because Ddraig's power is somewhat boring, I want some less upgrading and more mc's training and his obstacles. So, I appreciate that the author created this unique fanfic!
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ネタバレを明かす First off, I recommend starting this story from chapter 4 and pretending rias arrived too late to save MC from raynare. The story is pretty good so far, it’s a mashup with other anime and Dxd. Intro is a little poisonous though where rias deliberately lets the MC die to gain a powerful servant and then they both act like it’s no big deal. Even koneko was in on the plot. Just block the first couple chaps from your mind and the story is good
ネタバレを明かす Me gusta como agregaste a la historia a Mai y el mundo mashup que estas planteando estaré en la espera de mas capitulos
Great story, I don't particularly like Rias's peerage so his relationship with Mai really pleases me, the fact that it's a harem worries me
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It's always interesting seeing an author change wordings and try to shift the terminology away from Christian iconography. Terms like Divine Realm rather than Heaven. It makes sense, though I'd question why the author doesn't just make an original novel with similar characters. There's always the less popular fanfic option where the familiar cast is set in a semi original world. There's a smaller audience, but it also excludes the group that gets butt hurt over deviations from the original. Good luck author. This is not an easy tightrope to walk.
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