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Puede mejorar personajes secundarios y plantear a un más el objetivo del protagonista sin ser tan detallado ya el resto es hermoso[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Loving it]
I like giving books I like 5 stars and this is peak heres gif that that has nothing to do with what I just said
Is it still [Harem]? Or has it become boring, to those of us affected by the internet? Because, in the previous iteration; it had the harem tag, but here it doesn't. And nothing in the reviews is telling me about it. Also, for the i****t part; all he needs to do is change his DNA, and then bam. It isn't i****t anymore, just a normal relationship.
W rewrite so far dipper can still have his hacks and if your doing crossovers 1then id recommend integrating it into the ford pines plot since its the only portal I know of in gravity falls
Eu estou confiando nesta reescrita, só espero que o autor não me decepcione fazendo uma história que não desenvolva muito ou de forma clara os relacionamentos de personagens o bastante (principalmente os com soos, Mabel e Sienna), também não quero o autor esquecendo de coisas muito importantes da série ou não quendo explora direto esse eventos paranormais. Autor você tem o meu total apoio, sem pressão. Atraí o público de voltar pode se um problema no começo então não desista, com o tempo tudo pode se resolve.
The following words may annoy some people but they are necessary, I gain nothing from this fanfic and you will vote if I do a good job. So, if you don't like it, give a polite opinion and I'll see if I can improve it, but if you write useless stuff then I'll just delete it. in short: I want to try to be better this time and your opinions and comments are my real support thank you
Интересная история, тем более, по моей любимой вселенной. Поэтому спасибо автор, надеюсь, будет продолжение. С нетерпением буду ждать. Если честно, надеюсь, что фанфик не заброшенный , и надеюсь, нашёл Фанфик которая будет продолжаться очень долго. А то это так печально, потому что нашёл несколько фанфиков. Которые так же были в интересы, но, к сожалению, там. Всё кончилось на 10-20 главах и дальше продолжение не было, поэтому надеюсь автором. Будет делать продолжение и дальше. Автору позитива и вдохновения.
Puede mejorar personajes secundarios y plantear a un más el objetivo del protagonista sin ser tan detallado ya el resto es hermoso[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Loving it]
I like giving books I like 5 stars and this is peak heres gif that that has nothing to do with what I just said
Is it still [Harem]? Or has it become boring, to those of us affected by the internet? Because, in the previous iteration; it had the harem tag, but here it doesn't. And nothing in the reviews is telling me about it. Also, for the i****t part; all he needs to do is change his DNA, and then bam. It isn't i****t anymore, just a normal relationship.
W rewrite so far dipper can still have his hacks and if your doing crossovers 1then id recommend integrating it into the ford pines plot since its the only portal I know of in gravity falls
Eu estou confiando nesta reescrita, só espero que o autor não me decepcione fazendo uma história que não desenvolva muito ou de forma clara os relacionamentos de personagens o bastante (principalmente os com soos, Mabel e Sienna), também não quero o autor esquecendo de coisas muito importantes da série ou não quendo explora direto esse eventos paranormais. Autor você tem o meu total apoio, sem pressão. Atraí o público de voltar pode se um problema no começo então não desista, com o tempo tudo pode se resolve.
The following words may annoy some people but they are necessary, I gain nothing from this fanfic and you will vote if I do a good job. So, if you don't like it, give a polite opinion and I'll see if I can improve it, but if you write useless stuff then I'll just delete it. in short: I want to try to be better this time and your opinions and comments are my real support thank you
Интересная история, тем более, по моей любимой вселенной. Поэтому спасибо автор, надеюсь, будет продолжение. С нетерпением буду ждать. Если честно, надеюсь, что фанфик не заброшенный , и надеюсь, нашёл Фанфик которая будет продолжаться очень долго. А то это так печально, потому что нашёл несколько фанфиков. Которые так же были в интересы, но, к сожалению, там. Всё кончилось на 10-20 главах и дальше продолжение не было, поэтому надеюсь автором. Будет делать продолжение и дальше. Автору позитива и вдохновения.